| "'Til You Return to Me" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: Emi-chan34 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snorts* mollycoddling? That's soooo awesome! I use that term because my mom uses it and everyone makes fun of me. They always say that no one else uses it but they were wrong... despite me using it, I still find it incredibly amusing. so, awesome choice in wording and now i'm off to read the most recent chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: scarletraven1001* On: March 29, 2004 23:37 CST
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GIANT pocky?! oh my god, that must be a dream come true... is there really such a thing? gotta get me one of those.... oooh! anyway, great chap as always. yeah, sango/inu pairings... freaky, huh? the moment i see the sango/inu phrase on a story's summary i drop the thing like a hot potato... they're pretty rampant all over adultfanfiction.net, some even have inu raping sango... it's so unreal. oh man, im rambling again... please update soon! im dying to know what's next!
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 21:01 CST
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Oh dear Kami-sama... I spelled pocky wrong *blushes* now that just embarrassing on my behalf; please dismiss the mistake and try not to laugh.
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko (I could of sworn I logged in...) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with you on your opinion on packy! It is turely wonderful! *drools* Anyway I'm so happy you updated; also I loved the part with Kagura in it; it was quite poetic. And the whole InuYasha and Sango getting married concept is still drilling at my nerves to no end. I loved InuYasha's portective-ness in this chapter too; seemed like a mixture of that episode 'Go back to your own time, Kagome!' and the first movie (Yay). [Hope you update soon]
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 27, 2004 18:22 CST
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No problem! I really enjoyed this one, excellent chapter! Really loved seeing Inuyasha acting so protective and the small insight into Kagura. Yes, I really liked this ending. Look forwards to the next chapter! Till then good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle (not logged in) On: March 09, 2004 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must i say that you put out yet another wonderful chapter? It seems redundant :). And is that were the other one of my favorite leather boots went? I was wondering who i threw it at. . .that still doesn't explain where my school shoes went. . .did i throw those at the cat? Wait a minute i don't have a cat. In fact i'm allergic to them! A-a-a-achooooooooooooooo. There it (the cat) is! Now i remember why i threw my shoes at that darn cat. it wouldn't go away. Oh yeah did i mention that whenever i write i have this tendency to ramble? My teachers have a problem with it (56 minute class+1 test w/ one essay+ my incessant need to prove my point= disaster). Especially my English teacher who usually ends up taking forever to grade my exams. Let's just say that if i'm ask to write one page i'll end up with five or six. That's about my ratio. The best way to fix this would be of course to put a sentence limit on me but no one seems to have thought of this yet. Did i just give myself away?! Dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!! Anyway in order to shut myself up. That was a lovely chapter and as much as i have grown to love sitting on the edge of my seat i will now return to proper posture. MAY ALL OTHER INFERIOR AUTHORS BOW DOWN BEFORE YOU! j/k I'm in a very dramatic hyper mood. And yet again i couldn't stop myself from writing too much. . .sigh. . .don't mean to slow you down. Let me know if they're too long. Your story as per usual rocks awesomely! please, update soon. =^^=
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Reviewed By: little Rin On: March 05, 2004 00:35 CST
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I am a total baka.... That review was meant for Jaxxia7 and her story "Changes for the better". You were meant to get a review stating that I wish you luck in school and I know what It's like to have college responsibilities. Sorry.
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Reviewed By: little Rin On: March 05, 2004 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I know I've read the first few chappies before, but since it's been such a long time I'm re-reading them. Congrats on giving me my favorite typo of the day. "They must be tone deaf by now." I will assume you meant to write "stone deaf", since you cannot become musically lacking by having the television too loud. Although, if that WERE the case, it would explain my mother's terrible singing.
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Title: Otherwise known as Hououza...
Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 18:45 CST
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NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Sorry about that, I was just slightly upset at it ending there. This is a really really good story and I'm sad to see that you won't be able to update for a little whilke but as an author myself I can understand, sometimes life gets in the way. This is an excellent story and I look forwards to reading more when you get time to update. Don't feel pressured and do so when you can, this is more than worth the wait! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! update! *dances with joy; trips* Wow that was a great chapter; I am so relieved InuYasha isn't going to 'marry' Sango. ^.^ Poor Kagome though, she must have very serious injuries if she's 'wrapped up like a mummy'. I also liked that last part when InuYasha came (least I believe it was him...)and caught Kagome- bet she was really suprised. Hope you update again sometime soon.
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Title: you're the greatest!
Reviewed By: scarletraven1001* On: March 03, 2004 23:31 CST
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this story is waaaay cool! i don't know what i'd do if you suddenly stopped updating... but you're not that cruel, right?! anyway, great chap. so that's what he was planning... for a second in the last chap i thought you might turn this inu/san all of a sudden. i've been seeing too much of those lately. i'm glad you're keeping the characters with their original love interests. and they're also in character, and if anyone says otherwise, they'll answer to ME! *lightning, thunder and maniacal laughter in the background* keep up the great job, and please update asap!
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Reviewed By: Beautifulfaerie logged out On: March 02, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey another great chapter, well I'm anxious to know what happens next so update soon, Keep it up, I love your story
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Reviewed By: Amber Wolf On: March 02, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fiction and think your a very good writer i cant wait til the next chapter is up
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 19:49 CST
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*grumbles* I hope so... So Kagome is losing her powers. That will be a sufficent weakness, expecially with the fact that Kagura knows that Inuyasha loves Kagome, they'll use that against him sometime.
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