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Title: Now that was just wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again it takes me so long to read my favorite story! My internet is totally against me and decided to go wonky. $#%^&%#$ AOl 6.0 ::dramatic sigh:: Who knows when once again I shall be online. . .anyways lovely chapter. Sitting on the edge of my seat is just so painful that -::thud:: Ouch! I fell off?! Again?! This can't be good for my lower back. But really the suspense is almost palpable. I noticed Sango in the earlier chapter so when she came back again I was like wait wasn't she the messenger? So confused sometimes. I can't wait to see how you tie this all in. And now that Kagome's hurt . . . very interesting indeed. I thought I could guess correctly at a lot of story arcs but you always surprise me. Oh and bty all the luck on the grade/money/scholarship problem. I'm going to have to pay my way through college and even with the money i'm saving now. . . well lets just say I feel your pain in a way. Great! Great! Great! chapter i might add again and again and again. Never stop writing. I love reading this story as it unfolds. UPDATE SOON. I beg of thee. for i fear if not thy inspiration might flee! ^_^ had to put some weirdness in there or it wouldn't me, ne? Much support!!! ^_^
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Title: Jaw
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome I hope she'll be okay; I wonder how InuYasha will react to this. Thank you for updating too! Now I know a bit of your 'status' I won't be as worride (everyone fears that their favorite fanfiction author will die before finishing their fic- Ouch big jinx) if you don't update so soon. I didn't notice sango was in here before either, I think I'll reread and see if I can catch it. Anyway, good luck with your classes and job(s)!
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Title: ^^ Great! ^^
Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 15:31 CST
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Its taken me two whole days to find again and get around to reading the newest update of this story. Gwaaaah!!! ::mumbles:: mother. . .blocking emails. . .parental controls. . .load of bull. . .too old. . .::Mumbles:: ::Mumbles:: But it was totally worth it. The twist with Sango was completely unexpected. I thought for sure it would be Kikyo.. Awesome story arc!! Bravo for sure. Do i see some Miroku/Sango pairing in the future, perhaps? I hope so. I love this story, I say yet again. Cliffies are especially good and all but . . .please, please, please UPDATE SOON. Sitting on the edge of one's seat is painful for long periods of time.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 21:27 CST
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I'm thoroughly enjoying this storyline. Keep with it. ^^
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 20:27 CST
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... you're kidding, right? Sango... gee, I didn't say 'no comment' in my review. First time today... It's hard to type and sing at the same time.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 05, 2004 20:35 CST
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wow... I really like this *eyes pop open* unfortunately, I have to go to bed now ;_;. Pauvre moi...
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Title: I'm almost speechless...almost and my mind clearly bleeps out- "Huh?"
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pales* Well that certainly wasn't how I expected Sango to come into the story... I can't help wonder if they'll actually get wed though... considering this is an I/K fic as you've said...er written. I was sort of expecting some random girl or Kikyo(?). And I must say I'm ver pleased you've added Kagura to this fic; she's my second favorite character, also one of my friends had the silly habit of starting to call me by that (it can be embarassing; people ask questions). And I really hope you don't kill her off... also what you said about Kagome and about her powers, it reminds me of the manga Fushigi yugi...yup one of the priestess was warned not to elope or preform anything like that with anybody because of the same reasons...or something like that. Anyway, loved the chapter (though I was really shocked when I found out the girl was Sango, half of me was expecting it, but the other was denying it). Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 18:40 CST
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yeah, that answered it... oh, what a tearjerker! no, no, i've just got somethingin my eye... who am i kidding, i'm such a crybaby! great chapter! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Btfl_Fairy On: February 01, 2004 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well its me BeautifulFaerie, I'm didn't sign in yet, but whatever, I really like your story, infact I love it and I'm waiting for updates, so keep writing, I love your story!! the last few chapters almost made me cry, well enough said, bye
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Title: Your incredible!
Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 18:21 CST
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I really love how you acknowledge your reviewers at the end, its fun to see your name in other peoples stories! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the author wrote another chapter and there was much rejoicing. Yaaaay!!!! (imagines a certain scene in Monty Python and the Holy Grail. i love that movie.)Indeed another wonderful chapter has been churned out by Miss squeakyinuears. I loved it!!!!!!! Although my eyes nearlly popped out of the socket when Inuyasha left. He left!! I understand that that did seem where the plot was going but i can only wonder what you will write next. . . I can't wait to see. UPDATE SOON. . .pretty please, w/ sugar on top? come one please? You know we all love this story right? Please? (Do u think i wrote too much?)
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Title: White
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko (I think I'm getting used to the fact of not being logged in; ah laziness.) On: January 28, 2004 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two words about the last chapter; tear jerker. Okay maybe more words and if i was the type of person to cry when I read something pretty sad (any read the 5th Harry Potter book? Didn't cry when my favorite character got killed off, oh the unfairness of it all! Then again nothing is fair...), but if I was I would be balling my eyes out (espeically the last part, my jaw went slack, I swear.) And I must say I was in bit of a shock when InuYasha left, all I could think was 'Oh dear god he's just leaving?!'. Now I'm over that and am hoping (is that how you spell it? I keep picturing little bunnies hopping...wait I think I answered my own question...) you update soon 'cause me and many others (who should review, dammit!) love your fanfic very much! And yes, the 'Fuyu' in my name does mean winter...(I don't think many know that ^.^) though I do believe there is another word for winter too...Ame? No that means...rain...I think I got mixed up with the word 'snow' too...hmmm...
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Reviewed By: scarletraven1001 *notsignedin On: January 25, 2004 17:57 CST
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aaaah!!!! she said no!!! oh my god! she said no! *bursts into tears* WHY??!!! im ok now... but really, oh man, what a kicker! i DESPERATELY wanted her to say yes. but this is inu/kag, right? so he'll get her to sya yes, right? right? RIGHT?! gomen... im deperate. oh, you have got to update soon, or i risk losing my sanity!!!! scarlet^_^
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoooHooo!!! **does a dorky dance**A new and awesome chapter. :D I love this story!! anyways, u were completly right with the waiting for the romance thing. Has no one ever notice that if you push the characters 2gether in fanfic so close the the beginning the climax of the story is pretty much gone. Instant gratification isn't as good as the anticipation of an event. some people may not have the patience for the wait but it is always well worth the time. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! (is that hypocritical w/ the whole patience thing i just said? Naww.) ;)
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Title: Oh...just wow...wow
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko (not logged in, again- I know the password is somewhere on wordpad...) On: January 24, 2004 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter! I am very glad you didn't have Kagome say yes to InuYasha's 'proposal', it was speedy and I was about to scream and pull my hair out if she said yes (and I really did not want to do that)plus it had 'awkard' written all over it (*sweatdrops*). And I can't help wonder what Kagome had to do...I know it was probably the usual chores she does, but I was curious if maybe you had snuck Kouga into the fic? (It would be very interesting if Kagome met him...and Kouga acted like...err Kouga). Well, anyway I hope you update soon! (You like update every weekend it seems)And now I must prepare my leave for the libarary (that word I don't think I'll ever spell right)and then the horror of family photos (my mother gets annoyed sometimes when she sees me; says I should stop wearing only black; I wear blue though! She is just never around when I do wear it..eh heh), hope I show up on the film...
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