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Reviewed By: whieeeeeeeeeeeeeej On: February 27, 2005 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write further quick.. I just love this story (A)
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 07:16 CST
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yippee, you're back again. Poor poor Bakura. Thanks for the lesson btw. lil question though, can't kura contact Ryou through their mindlink or something? or does he needs the ring for that. anyway, plz update soon
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Title: wow..
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while. I'm glad for the update though. Poor Bakura, no longer strapped down to a table, but now in a cage. Anyway.. I've forgotten some of the details of the story, but I still have the basic concept in my mind. Nevertheless, I still love the story and want an update soon. And I know exactly what you mean. That happens to my dreams all the time. It sucks.. I like dreaming. Anyway, thanks for the little science class.. or whatever =P Update soon! =D
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Reviewed By: Yami Akila [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 18:18 CST
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You did it! You updated! I was worried for a while you weren't going to. (sorry about posting my reviews twice. I'm inexperianced at reviewing here.) Excellent story!
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Reviewed By: Yami Akila [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG UPDATE! SOMEONE SAVE MY POOR BAKURA!!! Yami is ruined for me now. *sob* Update or taste my wrath!! (I love your story. Particularly the lighter moments, like when Honda was chasing Jou. That's just like them Fantastic!) Don't worry Bakura! If Yami does anything more terrible than he already has I will beat the scummy bastar to DEATH! *huggles*
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Reviewed By: Yami Akila [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG UPDATE! SOMEONE SAVE MY POOR BAKURA!!! Yami is ruined for me now. *sob* Update or taste my wrath!! (Okay I love your sense of humor. Particularly the part where Honda is chasing Jou. Bravo!)
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Title: FLAME!!!
Reviewed By: Haibara3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fics are great!!!! I simply love them. Especially how Bakura's not just an asshole or a emotional wretch. He's both!!! Ooops it's the Shadow realm with me. Anyway I love the way you write and I love your plot even more. Bakura is so sexy no matter what he's doing so well umm good luck and keep updating! All the characters in your fic are cute, even the evil pharoph abd Seto. Oh well enough with my rambling. Love the fic. PS I just called this review a flame so Bakura doesn't have maggots and bacteria in his meat^_^
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Reviewed By: Misaki_Sagara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! I rarely see a Uke!Baku fics around..which I really like ^^ Update soon! I want to see what's gonna happen to Bakura next.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: lDragen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, to explain my ratings. Style of Writing: It was awesome, I simply loved it! Spelling & Grammar: As far as I know, I didn't see any grammar problems. Keep up the good work. Originality/Creativity: This is really creative, another reason why I love it alot. Enjoyment Factor: I really enjoyed this, the way you did things made me want to keep on reading it. Overall Rating: Overall, these kind of fictions are rare. By that, I mean actual yaoi fictions that have plot. This was a good plot, and I really enjoyed reading it. You did a good job with character conversations, though Bakura did cuss a bit too much, not that I'm going to count off for that. I usually hate the tendership pairing Bakura/Ryou, but I guess this is a exception. I read your other stories, too, they are all interesting. I hope you continue to write new fanfictions, because I encourage you to. Oh, by the way, I messaged you on AIM, remember? I'm Bakuras Goddess ^_^;;. Anyways, I better go, I hope you read my review, because it did compliment you on your work, afterall. Well, talk to you later! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Celes On: August 09, 2004 22:06 CDT
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You've updated. Yay? I mean... I don't even know why I read this but I do... Oh hell am I the only one who wants to help Bakura here? It's cruel what you're doing to him in this fic but... it does make a good fanfic. >>; Continue, of course. Maybe after another several chapters it might actually have a happy ending... Oh! And I request you go find the song/lyrics to "Here to Stay" by Korn.
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Reviewed By: copyca On: August 08, 2004 08:31 CDT
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super, can't say much more. please write more more more!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 22:29 CDT
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Bakura seems so, so sad :< This is really strange, but I almost found myself wishing that they would just kill him so that his suffering could end. Hmmm... but if I just kill the authoress... *glint appears in eyes...*
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Title: meepu
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, you updated! ^^ Don't worry, I'm loyal and still here. Poor Bakura, Yami and Seto are bastards! Owww... splinters hurt.. ;-; RYOU SAVE BAKURA! Lol.. anyway update soon!!!!!!!! ... argh, typing with a laptop is HARD!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl not logged in again *sigh* On: July 22, 2004 01:11 CDT
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I loved that chapter! And yes school work is evil... I hope you write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: June 09, 2004 22:07 CDT
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Hello again! Scary Kaiba. Evil Kaiba. Even more evil Yami. I'm just taking a break from homework, so sorry but I better get back to it. Great job! I found the part where Ryou and Bakura quarrelled quite interesting but sad, don't ask me why. I also found the little author note at the ending funny! Keep up the good work! ~Yume
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