| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: dark huntress On: February 13, 2004 01:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic. I absolutely love it. When are Kagome and Sess going to something interesting? U know what I mean. Update soon. This is really great.
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Title: ch 30 -- grammar/spelling noticibly better this time
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *mm hates her* On: February 12, 2004 22:58 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really good. I'm proud of Kagome. She's one Hell of a negotiator. Yes, Sesshoumaru needs his own cool world, but ONLY if it doesn't make Kagome look bad. *lol* She should NOT tell him what that whistle is for... he might get pissed. Too bad about her bag/stuff. *heh heh heh* The damn hair spray survived... holy cow that's funny. Next world... they needs some clothes. Send them to modern vampire world so they can get some nice black leather or something just as deliciously sexy. ;) Speaking of sexy... I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!! I know they'll mostly be talking,but...... DAMMIT if that didn't get me thinking. Sess confronting Kag about Inu and their relationship?? *blinks at memory of "Spring Fertility Festival* she can NOT tell him!!! He won't touch her!! *sniffles* Rt would be TOO sad... time for some cuddlin' not arguin'!! *nods* OR Sess can call in that promise. *winkwink* ^_~
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 22:08 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great! I love the way you managed to pull it all together and get their things back ^_^ Not to mention getting them outta there just in time! I really enjoy this story and hope you keep going with it for a while yet (considering all the worlds they could yet visit LOL, there should be plenty of material left to go ^_~ )!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 21:13 PST
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WOW! Go Kagome! It was really funny when Kagome said"My sences are tingling" cuz i had a fleeting moment of "My Spidey Senses are Tingling!" lol! Nevermind hehe. Well i really like the emotion and to answer your question these chapters were amazing! I also like how everything is planned. It reallly helps the story move along and the relationship is happening at a good pace! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko (yet again she fails to log in) On: February 12, 2004 14:21 PST
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Is the cube gonna show up and are they gonna 'teleport' outta there? Good chappie, as always, and hope ya update soon... but, sheeeeee, _19_ pages!?!?!? I can _NEVER_ write that much for just 1 chappie... sheeee, sugee da yo... Anyways, update soon plz, t.y.! Jaa na! ~*~ Mitsuki (and whoever else is in my head at the moment)
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Reviewed By: aoi sakura On: February 12, 2004 06:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is by far one of the best fanfics i have ever read. pls continue just waiting for chappi 30 to come right out. hope it comes out soon. always, aoi_sakura_27@hotmail.com
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Title: Just another review
Reviewed By: D.S On: February 12, 2004 00:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story u thinking OH HOW BOARING this is another one of those normal review notes (well maybe not) but u know what it is your correct i signed up but i didn't wanna give my correct e-mail and i don't know my password so messed up but u probably don't care (or maybe u do) but mainly whati mean to say is u rock man good job myan ur awsome lol but odd it is based on lord of the rings oh how i suck at writing reviews
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 19:24 PST
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THANK YOU! I never got to e-mail you back sry but i was really confused with the gods but now im cool. This was great! I loved it! I also really enjoyed when Shesho whinned when Kagome died. Ah i think Kagome should put a spell on the girl god and Shesho. THen shouldn't the cube be regenerated yet? Well this story rocks and i cant wait when you update!
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 14:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
have Earwen vouch for them!!! would that help?
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: February 11, 2004 11:50 PST
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loved the latest update vlot of action and a bit of a sad romantic scene coolie chappie and i hope u can update soon!
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 11:29 PST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!
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Title: Very well written
Reviewed By: ady anhee 999 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 07:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. Demon speed is my thought. They where in shock with how fast he was. Have him grab her, run to the tent with the shards, her bag, and box. Then activate the box. The army wouldn't know where they went and it would give them the time to collect what they need to go. But that is my thoughts on what would happen. (although I don't know if she could convince Sess to do it.) Anyways, can't wait to read more. :) TTFN Lady Banshee 999
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *not logged in 'cause mm isn't admitting that's she's logged in when she is, so BOO on MM!!!* On: February 11, 2004 00:02 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay... I think I understood the middle earth details this time. I like that Kagome learned a language song. Very neat. Umm.. I also liked the waffiness. Very nice. But not enough! *lol* It never is enough... lots of action. I'm glad that they keep tying. It's hilarious! Lemme see... *shivers* I couldn't quite imagine Sesshoumaru after the battle. *sniffles* Loved the whine that touched the hearts of the elves. What should she do??? Uh.... I say the best of both. Protect the elf guy by taking the brunt of the attack. She shouldn't attack Sesshoumaru. I just couldn't bear it... have her die a few more times as long as he's got Tenseiga? I think I can handle that. *shrugs* Up to you, though. I'd be more descriptive, but it's around 1am here. I need to try and sleep now. I wish I could've wrote something. I hope you write more of this soon. *waves while yawning* Night! Third option sounds best to me right now.
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Reviewed By: gg On: February 10, 2004 21:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the details that you put into your story. It makes the story come to life for me. I dont think that Kagome should attack Sess b/c that would be totally bad and real friends dont hurt eacother. Sess should just fight the god guy and while they are occupied Kagome should get the cube and shards. Keep posting.
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Reviewed By: Sessy-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 20:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go with the third choice! whatever that is cuz the 1st two dont sound like anything Kagome would do at all. Well on to a better note, update really soon! I luv this stry. one of the best fanfictions I've ever read! and I mean it!
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