| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: May 30, 2004 20:31 PDT
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Great chapter. Though a very sad ending. But I guess if it did happen as Kagome hoped it would then it would turn out just like her world? But on the other hand maybe the jewel was karamic? Because of the other Kagome's evil past deeds it ended bad instead of good. Or it was the best way that the jewel knew how to make her not suffer since that world's past is the only one it knew of? And saw that death before the rapes was the only way to prevent it... Who knows? Great chapter keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 19:24 PDT
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I can't wait for your next chapter, it oughta be great with the anime cameos. Keep it up, I love this story! Lavender
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko (too lazy 2 log in again) On: May 29, 2004 19:13 PDT
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Welp...I just hope you have flame/sharp-object/acid -resistant armour. You'll need it dude...Either that, or Sesshoumaru getting Toukijin back in the next chappie and reviving Kagome. Otherwise, you're dead.
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 09:05 PDT
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Oi!! Sessho is beyond miffed! That was a stupid mistake on Inuyasha's part, but given the circumstances (as in he has NO CLUE how Sesshoumara will act since he came through the well with that other Kagome) understandable. He's about to learn the error of his ways though I have no doubt! And about Kagome ... you gonna have her purify this "evil" version? Kagome2 is gonna have one heck of a time putting things back the way they're supposed to be if you do. Heck, that could be a story in itself ^_^
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: May 28, 2004 06:42 PDT
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Damn. You killed Kagome. So how is she going to come back to life now? Great story.
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Title: dude now...
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 *I must not be signed in* On: May 27, 2004 22:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude that ain't fair! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! PLEASE!!
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Title: COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Melli a.k.a. WitchyTeen14 On: May 26, 2004 13:03 PDT
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YOU AND YOUR DARN CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!! Please write more!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 11:50 PDT
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Damn. Great Chapter. Can't wait to see how they pull themselves out of this one.
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Reviewed By: WRITE MORE!! Please? On: May 25, 2004 21:29 PDT
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Make the next chapter longer? It seems like your chapters are getting shorter.
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Reviewed By: Tarnya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 20:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have been an ardent fan since you started writing. I think it is great and have read some of your others, which are good too. Was watching Gilligan's island yesterday.... must say I will never see it again in the same light.
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko (nli) On: May 25, 2004 18:56 PDT
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That...is just plain evil. But I guess it fits into this particular story arc. Haven't reviewed much eh....busy, ah well. Doing good tho, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 11:02 PDT
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Interesting... Very Interesting. Is another Sesshoumaru going to pop up? The one from the Sengoku Jidai of that world? And what exactly is going to be the reaction on that world. I doubt that there will be a sit down and they all become buddy buddy. Especially with your description that this is your most evil world. So all hell is going to break out right? Anyways another great chapter Jeffs keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 10:26 PDT
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OMG I just read a review by ummm.... WHAT A LOSER! Geez IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE STORY THAN KEEP YOUR FUCKING MOUTH SHUT YOU ASS! You don't have to be rude about it!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 10:24 PDT
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WOW! That's an interesting world! hmmm Evil Kagome. I feel so bad for her.... god if I had a life like that I would've killed my dad by the time I was six! ugh.
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Reviewed By: ummmm On: May 21, 2004 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok....WHAT THE HELL! Ok you know the two chappies of the hentia world weren't that great. And hentia world part 2 SUCKED! WHY DID VENUS PINK HAVE TO HAVE SESS's KID! how stupid....and no won just lets a bunch of girls jump into bed with there guy! so kagome shouldn't let sess and neither should sess let guys go with kagome! i hope there aren't any more chapter like these hentia one.....omg that were SO STUPID......
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