| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 17:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn.. Well one thing you did say was very true. The Hentai world would have have made Miroku green with envy. But I got a question in this next world Kagome is evil. Ok, but the Goshinboku is dying and the well doesn't have any magic? Does that mean that Kagome still went in the well back in time. And if so and she is evil what effects did that have on the past and present? Also, was always evil or did the jewel make her that way? Is Inu-Yasha evil too? Was Naraku evil as well? So many ways one could twist this world with just a preception of Kagome being evil. Anyways, as always, love your story Jeffs.
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Title: BUDDY!
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 20:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DON'T GET IT TWISTED DUDE! YOUR THE EVIL ONE! Naw i joken I hate kagome. Well I don't mind her in this story. I don't mind her at all in fics just her vocie annoys me. Well enough bout y i hate her and back on the focus of this review. Dude your the evil one for ending this chapter lke this! *I playin! Ur writing a very awsome story and I wish i could write as good as u!* Please update asap! O yes and thank u for updating 2 chapters!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 14:18 PDT
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Ummmm yeaaaah. I'm pretty sure this chapter was made for very horny guys (and girls I guess) who fantasise about Sailor Moon. It's a little over the top for me, so if you don't mind I think I'll just skip these chapters. (Works though, if the show got any sleazier it would be salled Strip and Moon) ^-^
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 00:35 PDT
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Well, that was, uh, intersting. Yep definetly interesting. I am not really sure how much this is going to effect what happens when Sess and Kag return home but boy is that reunion going to be interesting. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: RocketMama On: May 18, 2004 22:18 PDT
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I've immensely enjoyed this fanfic up to this point, but the latest chapter -- 58, "Hentai World Part 1" -- has to be my least favorite. Both Kagome and Sesshomaru seem waaaay OOC to me; in the first few chapters, you kept pressing the fact that they weren't the type of people to jump into bed with someone they had just met, but here they are doing just that...over and over and over again, when it didn't seem that necessary. I also didn't see why Kagome had to help the Venus girls that much. Rape isn't something that any woman would take lightly; trust me. Maybe that's what turns my stomach so much; in that case, it's a personal aversion, not a literary problem. I'll still continue reading your work, though.
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Title: WOW DUDE
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 20:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have something to say in a good way: WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! also: UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yami Bakura On: May 15, 2004 11:36 PDT
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Ok heres another idea...have you ever read pet shop of horrors. If so I think you should have Kagome and Sesshomaru meet Count D. Oh that would be sooo cool for once sesshie wouldn't be more powerful. I mean Leon and Count D have enough adventure together anyway just throw in sesshomaru and Kagome and you got yourself a good story...*sigh if you dont like this idea thats cool. just wanted to give some ideas. Also I was thinking that since D is a God and knows just about everything that he might be able to help them with the cube. Please write soon I can't wait for your next chapter! (RainbowDragon210@aol.com)
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Reviewed By: Yami Bakura On: May 15, 2004 11:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter but I think what whould have been funny is to try and see sesshomaru try and figure out how to work a storm trooper hoover craft....Hahahaha *sigh. Well good job. Heres an idea how about they go to the future in the westen lands and they meet there child or children. that would be neat. Keep up the good work! YAY!
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Title: Melli (but under a new name)
Reviewed By: WitchyTeen14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 18:51 PDT
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I cannot believe how many chapters you've posted since I was gone!!!! I finally finished all the chapters you wrote. All I can say is that I loved it and somebody has been a busy bee! *laughs a little*
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 01:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well, it's looks like Kagome managed to be there and not interfere with "history" as she knew it for StarWars ^_^ Good job!! And I agree with Sessho ... that mind trick could keep him out of a LOT of hot water with Kagome just by making folks ignore them. Although, the way Sessho went about convincing Luke to show him was a hoot!! Needless to say, loved the chapter and I look forward to our next installment ^_^
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 14:50 PDT
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YAY THE EWOKS AND CHEWY!!!! ^-^ hee hee hee GO SESSHOU-CHAN!!!! (great job! ^-^)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 13:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. I wonder how much the outcome will change since now Kagome and Sesshoumaru are there. Instead of a fight between Darth Vader and Luke will it between him and Sesshoumaru? Or will the Emperor decide they are too big of a threat to persuade and attack them straight off. Or will he try to convert Sesshoumaru and if so what will the outcome be. Even though I do not beleive he will submit to the Emperor he will probably make a retaliaton of some sort. Eh who cares really. I am just along for the ride. I absolutely love your stories Jeff. You bring so much more into focus besides just the plot and you make actually more believable. Excellent work.
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Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 12:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iraq in the 20s? The 20s?? My dearest Jeff, you already have me interested in two of my favorite topics! Of course, younger fangirls are not the history lover that I am, but...hm, I must say, pleasing the history buffs like myself and pleasing the typical Sesshoumaru fangirl is possible and must be done. I also say that if they get eye-candy shots of bare-chested Sesshoumaru-sama, then I get my historical facts! Oh yes, the abuse scandal. Our wonderful, hypocritical US government. I'm keeping close tabs on Rumsfield's, ah, excuses...story...whatever you call his words. Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 10:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Kagome is finally catching on? Get the bad guys before they get you! Excellent chapter. I love how Chewy just HAD to test Sessho and see what would happen ... that was great ^_^
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