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| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] | | Pages (28): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: jc On: May 12, 2004 08:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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a seriously good fic but i think that kagome would be a bit more affectionate...pls update often!
| Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (not logged in) On: May 11, 2004 22:10 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*hehehe* Ewoks rule!!!! Yeah, I guess I DO remember it being on a moon of Endor-- now. *snickers* Sesshoumaru NEEDS to fight wherever he goes. *taps fingers impatiently* But he only fights "worthy adversaries." Seesh. Yeah, a Sesshoumaru/Vader fight would be kickass. But to keep true to Return of the Jedi, Vader needs to help Luke against the Emperor. *shrugs* So what's more important? The awesomeness that is starwars or the awesomeness that is Sesshoumaru/Kagome?? Damn. Tough choice... Lemme see. After all the fighting and the "end" IF they stay that long... Luke needs to have a Force session with Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I mean, come on, wouldn't Souta be psyched to know that Kagome was taught by Luke Skywalker himself?!? (Although, I expect HER to teach Luke a few things as well...) *lol* Kag and Sess Jedis. That'd be too sweet... (Ever played "Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic" on XBox?? It's a neat starwars rpg set like... 5000 years before ep1, I think. Anyway, it's rekindled my love of the SW universe. (I've ALways loved it, but having been peeved at George Lucas for the "special edition" craporama of eps 4-6... it lost some of its spark. Note: Models kick the realistic crap out of CGI-- well, the graphics in the special edition, anyway.)) Write more soon! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 15:02 PDT
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YOU SAID YOU WERE GONNA UPDATE ON THE 9TH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS THE 11TH AND NO CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE!
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 22:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! Those were some freaky lemons though. But i give you your credit. I have never read lemons like that. Ever. Yes I have read very good lemons but I would but that at the top for the nasty ones. I sayin that in a good way not bad don't worry.^_^ Anyway update soon please. Dude this story is awsome and please update asap!
| Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 14:22 PDT
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0.0 Wow......... I just like read chapters 1-54 in one go. Took me forever, but the story is totally awsome! I can't wait for the next chapter! Ja ne Ikari
| Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 08:36 PDT
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Still a wonderful story, I must say. Knowing how Vader treats his prisoners, if Kagome were to become his captive...how sorry I feel for her. Or considering her powers and attitude to match those powers, should I feel sorry for Vader? Hm. Also, worry not about a lack of reviews during this month. This is finals month for many people that are regulars of these fanfiction sites, so many people are having trouble doing little else than studying right now.
| Reviewed By: SesshoumaruLover#? On: May 02, 2004 18:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting... I must say, this is an extremely original fic. It has kept my attention, and I plan to read several of your other stories while waiting for you to update this one (hint, hint). Sess is a little OOC, and your punctuation could use a bit of help, but overall this story has been very entertaining. Please, keep writing quickly -- and by the way, I can't wait until Kag and Sess get back...Inu's reaction is going to be priceless, and I have to know how this turns out! Keep up the good work!!!
the | Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 20:50 PDT
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Loved the chapter ... and the way the gang stood up to Kikyo was just great! and the way Kirara was with Kikyo too! ALSO ... congratulations on first place in the Best Humor/Parody catagory and second in Best Lemon/Lime catagories at the Single Spark fanfic awards!!
| Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (prolly not logged in) On: April 29, 2004 23:07 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have no idea what I wrote in my review of the last chapter(s). But I thought I should tell you that the lighthearted nature of that week on Gilligan's Isle... meant a lot to me, as a reader. And, yes, I found the little chaotic bombardments hilarious. *lol* Poor Sesshoumaru... why does he always end up WEARing food?? *snickers* I'm glad that their relationship is stronger; it will need to be for the trials to come, am I right? (Like Kagome Destroys the World... put in her place, that could freak anyone out enough to cause a paradox) But then, with ONE scene in this new chapter... that love could shatter. What she said... what a fricken shoe to drop on your audience! (Granted, we've "experienced" it first hand, but STILL whoa...) Poor Inu... I can't believe I feel bad for him. But just the fact that he reacted as he did proves that he cares. I know it. *shivers* Kikyo is so eerie and cold. I HATE how she has to "live" by stealing souls. (Has she NO heart!!!) But I pitied her, too. She made a choice that few could make given her shoes to wear. *grins maniacly* The highlight of this chapter had to be Kirara. I've always been fascinated with her connection to the jewel. (I'm sure countless fanfiction authors have covered it) A mother's love will bring Kagome and Sesshoumaru home. *smiles* It's appropriate considering what I wrote a bit ago. (Hardly lifechanging: just a rambling in my online diary about my mother and "Big Fish"[starring Ewen McGregor, Directed by Tim Burton-- both favs of mine]) I want to do something great in my life to make my mother proud-- something that will make her immortal. I've put little bits and pieces of my mom into stories and such, but ONE day... I'll write her epic. *eerrrrr* Yeah. After some revelations in this chapter, it is certain that Kagome and Sesshoumaru will be "brought" home by the love of a mother. (I haven't read KagDestroystheWorld, but...) Kagome will see that her love, like that of a mother, can "Change the World" for the better or worse. I hate to say it, but after this chapter, I could almost see them getting back and her going back to Inuyasha... leaving Sesshoumaru alone. (To give the love of a father; something he never knew) Despite what everyone believes, Sesshoumaru's feelings ARE genuine. Aren't they? If they aren't, then my heart will just break. And, obviously, so will Kagome's and another dark and chaotic path will unfold. What is WITH me, tonight? I'm starting to sound like a prophet... *shivers* I HATE that. I'm never right. And when I am... be afraid, be VERY afraid... Point is... I love this story. It is my favorite one right now and the only one I think about pretty much daily. (Maybe if I did that with my own stories, they could compare to the grandness of yours) I feel for everyone when you write them. *heh* I just want this story to never end...
| Reviewed By: ficfan On: April 29, 2004 13:59 PDT
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i think the same i was just thinking when i was reading chap 53 this has been so boring! but gilligans island kind-of was because nothing happened. well now theres going to be action, so it will be okay! yours truly, ficfan
| Reviewed By: BRL (Black Rose Lady) On: April 28, 2004 17:23 PDT
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I think that perhaps the reason for the drop in reviews, is that there was a lack of action that many readers (including myself) found needing. I found myself stopping in the middle of the last two chapters you've updated with and coming back to it later, or skipping to the bottom to read the last few paragraphs. Now that you are moving off of Giligan's Island, I think that you'll find an increase. But, this is just my personal opinion. Another thing, is, is that I've heard "Endor" somewhere, but I can't recall where, exactly. Perhaps you could enlighten me? Also, an idea, is that Kagome could go home (for a break or something) and meet with Sesshoumaru in the future (he *will* live that long, right?) I think it would twist things up a bit, if there is a part of this story that gets difficult and you need to take a time out and still update on the story; Sesshoumaru could know something Kagome doesn't, because it happened while she was in the future. Think on it, maybe. Thank you for your time. ~~Black Rose Lady~~ email: red_flame204@hotmail.com
| Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (not going to log in on her birthday) On: April 28, 2004 00:46 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been awhile, ne? Lemme see... mostly real life (work) is keeping me offline and not reading. But tonight, the beginning of my birthday, I got a wonderful present. One of those MM update notices for your story. *grin* I'm so happy that Kagome and Sesshoumaru had a nice week long "honeymoon." I'm SO fricken jealous of HER. ANYway... I'm sure action will be coming up in the next world. Yeah, action and cliffies get reviews. Mush and fluff get most of us all "sighed" out that we just drift offline and to sleep-- forgetting to review. There are so many things I wanted to mention... I just can't think of one now. I'm so sleepy... oh yeah! Sesshoumaru is a sex god... *sniffles* But I almost feel sad that I missed out on "toto" night. Then again... I'd probably be laughing the whole time. Plus, Kagome being Dorothy is uber sexier for Sess. (*lol* I never thought the two of them would be into the furry suit, roleplaying stuff... whodda thunk it?) I hope that Kag/Sess won't be tortured in StarWars... hopefully it will just be exciting and funny. (Your other preview of Kagome wanting to take pictures was SO hilarious...) Lemme see... I'm sure I forgot a hundred things... Keep writing, you're doing wonderfully and how do you keep going for so many chapters? Can I borrow your muse for awhile?? Just kidding. I'd never have the time to type it up. ^_^
| Reviewed By: kisagurl On: April 27, 2004 22:21 PDT
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The story, to me, hasn't lost it's spark. It's just that they relaxed and on a vacation questions aren't really asked. All it needs is as little action and the reviews should pour in. I mean I don't know about anyone else but I can't give you advicxe on which position they should be in for sex. But I can help you, if you ask, as to what they should do in a life or death situation. I still love your story and hope you continue. ^_^!!
| Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 22:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFL... Sessho on Endor?? Can't wait till they run into the Ewoks (I think that's their home world -_-)! Ok, as far as anything you may have done wrong ... I don't see it. However, I DO see that it's finals time all over the country and unless it's a weekend, I have no doubt but that most are busy with massive amounts of testing. Or massive amounts of brain fry from all the bizarre tests the schools are coming up with. So don't let it get to ya ... it's just that time of year.
| Reviewed By: shadownekko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 21:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am still following just haven't reviewed as you are one of the best authors I have been following. Sorry, I love getting the notice that you have updated. Your knowledge of Japanese culture and history are definitely a plus. The fact that you use proper grammer and spelling also make your works intriging. I am finding myself looking for other authors with grammer skills so I can enjoy the story and not puzzle my way through what they are trying to say. You style is clear allowing me to envision the story better. Thank you for helping me understand some the odd quirks of my host country.
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