| "It all started with a Nameless Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9*** On: December 08, 2003 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey!!! (why do i always say hey hey???) well-good chappie!!! ITs okay it was short, but im glad ya made Kagome her still caring self!!! And uh-you can like do just-i do medium or short chappies and update well-i always start new fics soo....^-^;;; but, yes! you ARE a wonderful and creative authoress!!! ur first story is much better than my first story!!! well-imma go chill now! keep up da good work!!!! -Lani (and take jo time!!!)
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Write more soon! I want to know if Kagome will get out or if Youko will come and get her before she leaves.
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 23:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry me again, forgot to say, rosie13 has a good idea for the next chapter. *Goes into La La Land and drools uncontrolably*
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic!! You have to update real soon!!! I have clones of Fluffy and Kurama but their never in the same story, so with both of them in this fic, I'm in La La Land!!!*drools* Anyway I love this fic and you simply must cont. And if anyone says this fic is bad, THEY ARE CURSED WITH THE MAGIC WITHIN MY VEINS!! If ya ever need some courage to keep going, just email me. Ja ne ~silversaori@yahoo.com~ ~WF612~
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Title: yay! :)
Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic! I can totally see what's going on! Please keep writing like this! btw, I want it to be a both yoko and suichii fic. An idea: kagome gets away from yoko through the well that night. Yoko comes back to his den, and finds Kag gone. heends up hurting some of the youkai and runs off in search of kag. trails scent up to well, but stops there. He's confused, but gives up. In kag's time, she is happy to be home. Family surprised at her transformation, but she explains, grandpa tries a few 'remedies' that don't work, kag eventually puts on a concealing spell and goes to school. Then on her way to school she bumps into kurama (really original, right?). anyway, yoko recognizes her immediately, and kag notices something farmiliar about him. That's about all I can think of right now. hope that idea helps! bye and keep updating!! :)
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Have one it's Meiko Kazuke On: December 02, 2003 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey plese don't leave it at that. It's really good and would hate if you didn't contuine. Your work is good and you shouldn't forget that. Please contuine can't wait till you update again.
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 14:00 CST
Comment/Review:
oooooooooooooo kay that was entertaining. u should try 2 make the cahpters longer and more detailed.
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Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 11:16 CST
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Reveiws don't matter. It all depends on the person and genre you have. Some people get tons of reviews whe they don't deserve it, while others just never get enough. Don't worry about the reviews. Sometimes it means that you have written the chapter so well that the reveiwers don't have any questions that they might need answered. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: sundragon (not signed on) On: December 02, 2003 11:00 CST
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Your right I really couldn't torture her like that. I love the story! Just let yor muse drop ideas in your head. If you want to ad longer chaps go ahead if not then don't. What is youko going to do? LOL! Adios!
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Reviewed By: lady_reaper On: December 02, 2003 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
no, please keep the story going i really like it
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Reviewed By: Amo Per On: December 02, 2003 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is a very interesting change from most of the other YYH/IY crossovers I have read on MM. I would really like to know how the plot is going to come to its end. I am especially interested in seeing how Youko Kurama is going to get Kagome back or if he was just testing her to see if she is worthy. Please continue and I am sorry if I did not give enough feedback but this review is my first.
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Title: Pairings
Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 06:58 CST
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Frankly I don't care if Kagome is with Youko or Kurama. They're both good pairings. but since Kagome can live for a very long time now, I think you should stick to Youko. I mean you can have Shuichi come in after Youko kinda... Died. Yeah. Whatever floats your boat. You should pick, not your readers.
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9(can't sign in...) On: November 30, 2003 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ee! good job! pooor KAgome...gah! cant rite too much, sooo im sorry, ive been hurt...but thanks for telling me u were a girl hun! heh...im kinda on the dim side..think Goku....if ya noe him..newayz, i ramble and hurt, soooo i think she shud meet Kurama and uh-be with Kurama! heh...good job! update soon! -Lani
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Title: um review
Reviewed By: I have a Nickname its Meiko Kazuke On: November 29, 2003 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was good and would love for you to contuine on your workings. It was really good and would love to read more of it... Well can't wait till read more. Untill next time...btw I actcally have mediaminer screenname i am to lazy to get it so it is...Meiko Kazuke...you can look me up anytime...most of my stories are on Fanfiction.net so whatever works for you and yes Suuchi should meet her later in the future...
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf( Can't sign in...) On: November 29, 2003 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey! Good chapter hun! oooh...poor Kagome! heh...id soooo freak out! ^-^U Ahhh....wonder if Yash will save her? Or Fluffkins? heh...newyz, good chapter again! i can't wait for ya to update once again, sooo plz do! *but take your time*-Lani
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