| "It all started with a Nameless Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kate Lynne On: July 16, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, when Youko almost died, I thought you were going to do a sort of she goes back to her time and meets Kurama. I don't suppose anything like that's going to happen? I don't think Youko will let her leave him back in the fuedal age...
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: guerro ` On: July 15, 2004 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update i want to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: Singe On: July 15, 2004 16:45 CDT
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Come on, come on, write more. I wanna see wat happens. Pleeeeaaaaaassssseeee. please and thank you.
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, SORRY I HAVEN'T REVIEWED IN A WHILE!!!! But the story is going sooooooo good!!!!!! I know I know you probably have heard that alot...BUT IT'S TRUE!!! update asap!!
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Reviewed By: Punk Rocker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic it is a exceptional story and you shouldn't give it up
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Reviewed By: Alexsia On: July 14, 2004 19:58 CDT
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Keep up the good work. I want to hear what happens.
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: July 14, 2004 15:30 CDT
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Don't get so upset about the reviews! Just keep on typing. People will post when they feel like it! And "shie shie" is spelt Xie Xie BTW...
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_kitsune_tears (not signed in) On: July 14, 2004 14:21 CDT
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im sorry for not reviewing!!! its just that i skip the lemon scenes all the time and i felt a little weird about reviewing!!! dont let me bother you!!!!
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Reviewed By: Honor ( not logged in) On: July 14, 2004 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, whining about reviews merely decreases my respect for you. But since I admire your writing, I thought I tell you to continue to up date this fic.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: July 14, 2004 08:46 CDT
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Oh, I also say kick youko in the jewels once PLEASE! *holds up Shippou in cute pout mode* Just an idea! Okay sorry about not saying this earlier! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: July 14, 2004 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You were doing Great, but then the whole male domination thing makes me gag, sorry! I know you'll fix it to where Kagome and Youko are close if not completely equal. How you make that happen will be fun to see! Don't think I'm flaming you! I'm not! I'm just saying that domination of anybody by anybody is my least favorite part of any fic. If you don't want to change that then that's your choice. Ultimately it is evan after my rant is a GOOD fic! This is a very origninal and intersting fic! Update and like i said before if you want ignore my rant! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Fox Fire 626 On: July 14, 2004 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is really really good, but is the yu yu gang going to make an entrence when/if Kagome goes back to the present? Plus, where is Youko's counter part, the bat demon, his partner in crime? (I can't remember his name right now, srry.)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 02:23 CDT
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I love this story. I think it is really great and unusual. Yeah most fics have Kagome turn or was a youkai in a disguise. Very vew have her as a hanyou. And even fewer or only one have it caused by an unconscious wish by a flower. The interaction with Youko is very interesting and worth while to see it played out. You got a good plot work with it. Explore it more. Don't just do a chop shop ending. You make it to where this is just the beginning. A story is always never ending like life, we just make the stops at points. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: shadownekko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't stop!! It is the end of summer and alot of people are on vacation, readers will return. Never fear.
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Reviewed By: suggestion... On: July 13, 2004 23:28 CDT
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hmm.. i know you are... on writer's block and currently have no ideas. maybe instead of asking people for their own ideas you should hand the story to someone else. ^-^ oh and... sorry for the no capitalizing stuff.. im... lazy. -nod nod- ooo if you get mad of this 'suggestion' you can simply ignore it. and, it'll go away... i think. o.O okay it wont go away but umm.. ignore this. -nod nod-
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