| "It all started with a Nameless Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Title: good!
Reviewed By: rosie13 (it's 1 am, you really think i'm gonna sign in?) On: February 07, 2004 23:49 CST
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I HATE YOU FOR THE DELAYED UPDATE!!!! but i still love your story!!! It's realy good, and I like how Youko acts. He's so kawaii! Please update ALOT sooner than before. ps- just why exactly was youko stealing her breath away? (heh heh corny i know ^-^)
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Reviewed By: human On: January 14, 2004 19:38 CST
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i really do think that you should add kurama into the story, and his human side (i can't even 1. remember how to spell it or 2. remember it at all) it would add for a delightful twist
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. Who will you put with Kagome? Maybe Kurama.
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Reviewed By: Night Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 18:59 CST
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Night Fox: You could try make Shuuichi meet her... I don't really like to make Youko and Kurama as two minds... maybe instintcs when they change form, but I can't imagine two mids liking the same person... uh... I just did... -_-'' well, vatever. Silver Fox: Please, Aika... you're strange as it is... Night Fox: Kaya, shut up. Well, as I was saying, you could make Kurama meet Kagome, and Kurama has memories of Youko's life. So, he finds strange that this human girl smells like a hanyou he met five-hundred years before... Silver Fox: Believe me, Aika can be strange. Night Fox: Shut up! Well, let me see... Youko at some point keeps a jewel shard... did the Inu-gumi defeat Naraku or not? Because Kagome can give the jewel shard to Youko so she could find him if she wanted... even if Naraku is dead or not. And Youko can become the ruthless thief in Makai because he can't be with Kagome. He has to wait to see her again. Silver Fox: *pushes Aika out from the keyboard* Well, we need to go. We've wasted too much time in the connection to write this review, Bye! Night Fox: *grumbles* Bye.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 10:43 CST
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cool story so far. sorry i cant help you with your writers block... ~Star
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Reviewed By: Karama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 10:14 CST
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1# have kagome bash Yuske(sp) on the head, slap Kuwabara, or something like that. 2# have kagome trip Hiei or Kuwabara. thats all i have for now(^_^) And your doing great^_^
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 21:09 CST
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oh yeah and i think Kagome should be kitsune! cuz if Kurama and Kag get together then their children will be half kit and half inu! @_@ what kinda breed is that???
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 21:06 CST
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AYA! that is SOOOOO good!!! it would be cool if Kagome met Kurama in the future and got introduced to the YYH gang!! ^^ they kissed!!! ^^ yay!
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: January 08, 2004 09:42 CST
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Maybe you could ask your editor for ideas. I used to have a writers block... I got rid of it by atleast writing one sentance per day. Yup. Ideas will come, sometimes you just have to force them out.
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Title: Cutie foxie
Reviewed By: butterfly Rin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this whole story! I just love everything about it! U keep me in suspense, especially when Sesshy kissed Kagome! That was a complete shocker! Please continue! I've beenwaiting a while and looking forward to the romantics later!
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: Narani On: December 19, 2003 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I agree, it wouyldn't exactly be a crossover if she and sessho-kun or inu-kun got together. I like that she will be with Youko, but will she ever meet the future Kurama? I'm not sure what I want to happen exactly, but I'll be happy with anything! ^_^ as long as this continues to be Kurama/Kagome
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Please write more soon!
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: December 18, 2003 12:39 CST
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Nice Chappy! Really nice. But could you try to make it longer? My chappys are about as long as yours are, but I'm trying to make them longer (so don't call me a hypocrite)! I'm glad you got rid of Sessho (I don't hate that pairing, infact I have my own fic that is a Kag/Sess) its just not right when you do a crossover and have no pairings between the two. Oh yeah, why do you know chinese? Are you one?
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 17, 2003 22:00 CST
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I like the Kur/kag pairing! Keep writing! If you don't I'll stick my muse on you! *muse snoring* Uhh... Okay so I won't, but still.. Please update! Adios!
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Reviewed By: amskitty214 On: December 17, 2003 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Please review! *wink* I'm hoping to see a lemon soon! Btw, I LOVE KURAMA! MUAH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!
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