| "It all started with a Nameless Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Update again soon. Can't wait to see how you actually get Kurama/Kagome together and what the lemon will be like.
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Reviewed By: angeldemon45678 On: March 14, 2004 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
update soon.Have Kagome meet Kurama in the future and them fall for each othe.Please!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I love the story!!!! U HAVE TO GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT SOON OR I WILL HUNT U DOWN AND MAKE U!!!!!!!! HAHEHAHAHAHAHEHAHEHAHAHEHE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it a lot. You gotta update more often or make the chapters longer. Anyways it is great. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I want to know what happens next!
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Title: vote
Reviewed By: Summing Princess Abigail [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kurama/Kagome should be together. You better keep writting or else. Hahahahahahahaha. Just kidding about the or else part. Your story is the bomb.
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Title: Kiki Smythe
Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: February 25, 2004 12:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, If you're running out of ideas, think of things that would get Kagome to like Youko. Like a small trip to a flower feild, or the offer to teach her something (which by the way IS used all the time but is a pretty good idea) OR you could have him acknowledge her in some small way. Just think of some things that would help with the plot and make her get all "Mushy". I hope that helped!
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Reviewed By: Cristina On: February 25, 2004 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: wulfgal On: February 21, 2004 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like chapter 10! please write more soon -r u gonna have kouga in later chapters? i think that that would be veerry interesting...hehe
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Title: none
Reviewed By: guerro On: February 16, 2004 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can u please update it . i really like it so please finish it
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 08:57 CST
Comment/Review:
btw, i love how Youko's so perverted! its funny! =^_^= *blush*
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: February 09, 2004 07:48 CST
Comment/Review:
very very good. i dont understand, did Youko suck the air out of Kagome lungs and make her pass out?
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Awesome chapter. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: February 08, 2004 09:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn Perverted Foxes! I feel bad for Kagome! Could you have her kick Youko's ass! Adios!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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