| "It all started with a Nameless Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Summerdancer On: August 20, 2004 12:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope to read more. Its a nice fic. I hope Kagome goes back home. I'd really like her to meet present day Kurama. Anywho, please keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: concrete tenshi (t.t) On: August 14, 2004 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu-can-not-stop there! That is the worst form of cruelty ever! Please please keep this up! If you are wondering why there are few reviews, it is probably because people feel self-concious about reviewing a lemon... But i looovveeed it! The way you expressed such blatant sexual tension was astounding. I found myself frustrated that Youko would not untie Kagome and let her jump his ass to get some REAL stuff happening. Anyways, perhaps this story would have better succes on FF.net? Have you already posted it there? I suggest that you update this ASAP, and please post it on ff.net, i am mostly haunting that site. great fic, great job! Till next update.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Like the lemon, can't wait until Kurama finishes mating with Kagome. Update soon. Love the story.
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Reviewed By: csailorgirl21 On: August 09, 2004 12:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think that the story is great, and that you should keep writing Your doing a great job
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Reviewed By: Candy N. On: August 03, 2004 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i totally love this story....i love kagome and kurama pairings...and i think that ur doin a great job w/ the story so far!!!! You have to keep goin...i think this story is really good....don't give doubt to it....it's really really good!!! I CAN"T wait to see the next chapters and see what u've come up w/ next!! Good luck on the writing!!!
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Title: Keep Going!
Reviewed By: Monica (Stilwater) On: July 29, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is very enjoyible. Even if no one else likes it, you have at least one fan! ..granted, I'm not a *kagome* fan, but you're going this sotry *very* well. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: chidori09 On: July 27, 2004 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awesome, keep updating
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Reviewed By: Anggie On: July 25, 2004 03:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic alot. As for an idea when Kagome and Youko mate he should adopt shippo cuz Kagome's like a motherly figure for Shippo. Then like two chapters later Youko should die.(tring to steal something? Sesshoumaru? I don't know) Then a mournful kagome goes down the well with shippo. A month or so later the spirit detectives get a mission to check out a high energy level coming from the Sunset Shrine. I don't know just tring to help I like the fact that your fic isn't like all the other Kagome/Youko fics that pretty much have the same story line. Love the fic can't wait for updates.Ja ne
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Title: wirte more
Reviewed By: rhea On: July 21, 2004 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i hope right more maybe you can have run in to kurama in her time . she can in her human from he can be in hi and lets see if they now eachother so please update soon
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Reviewed By: haku_white miko On: July 20, 2004 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far and since you asked for suggestions here are a few: have youko die and then meet her in the futer , maybe you could have koga kill him? any way its a great story plese update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 14:07 CDT
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how soon is soon?? that last chapter was GREAT!!! poor Kagome. lol. plz plz plz update within the next couple of days!!!
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Reviewed By: Mistic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay I really do like your story so far and I really do hope you continue writing it and as for an idea you could try sending Kagome into the future to meet the other Kurama. Ya never know anyways please don't stop the story just update soon as a request from a loyal fan. Bye!
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Reviewed By: yuki_kaza On: July 16, 2004 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
your plot is very original, i think. so you should countinue writing it.
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Reviewed By: Lady In A Red Dress On: July 16, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love everything about your story! That's the reason I read your story. But sometimes my computer crashes when I try to review, so then I never really get around to reviewing. But you have to update soon, or i'll die!!!! I love your story way too much. You can't give up on it NOW!!!! Always, Lady~
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Reviewed By: TJF On: July 16, 2004 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story ever since you put it up I have always checked to see if you had updated it. Your story was one of the first I ever read with a yoko and kagome pairing and since then I haven't been able to stop looking for yoko and kagome pairings. I was wondering if you could look up my fanfiction story when I repost it on ff.net and tell me what you think also I have several cool story ideas involved with the same pairings as in your story and my fanfic if your interested please email me at vampsbware@yahoo.com Thanx for writing such a good fic!!!!
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