| "It all started with a Nameless Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 08:57 CST
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btw, i love how Youko's so perverted! its funny! =^_^= *blush*
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: February 09, 2004 07:48 CST
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very very good. i dont understand, did Youko suck the air out of Kagome lungs and make her pass out?
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Awesome chapter. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: February 08, 2004 09:09 CST
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Damn Perverted Foxes! I feel bad for Kagome! Could you have her kick Youko's ass! Adios!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Title: good!
Reviewed By: rosie13 (it's 1 am, you really think i'm gonna sign in?) On: February 07, 2004 23:49 CST
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I HATE YOU FOR THE DELAYED UPDATE!!!! but i still love your story!!! It's realy good, and I like how Youko acts. He's so kawaii! Please update ALOT sooner than before. ps- just why exactly was youko stealing her breath away? (heh heh corny i know ^-^)
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Reviewed By: human On: January 14, 2004 19:38 CST
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i really do think that you should add kurama into the story, and his human side (i can't even 1. remember how to spell it or 2. remember it at all) it would add for a delightful twist
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. Who will you put with Kagome? Maybe Kurama.
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Reviewed By: Night Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 18:59 CST
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Night Fox: You could try make Shuuichi meet her... I don't really like to make Youko and Kurama as two minds... maybe instintcs when they change form, but I can't imagine two mids liking the same person... uh... I just did... -_-'' well, vatever. Silver Fox: Please, Aika... you're strange as it is... Night Fox: Kaya, shut up. Well, as I was saying, you could make Kurama meet Kagome, and Kurama has memories of Youko's life. So, he finds strange that this human girl smells like a hanyou he met five-hundred years before... Silver Fox: Believe me, Aika can be strange. Night Fox: Shut up! Well, let me see... Youko at some point keeps a jewel shard... did the Inu-gumi defeat Naraku or not? Because Kagome can give the jewel shard to Youko so she could find him if she wanted... even if Naraku is dead or not. And Youko can become the ruthless thief in Makai because he can't be with Kagome. He has to wait to see her again. Silver Fox: *pushes Aika out from the keyboard* Well, we need to go. We've wasted too much time in the connection to write this review, Bye! Night Fox: *grumbles* Bye.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 10:43 CST
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cool story so far. sorry i cant help you with your writers block... ~Star
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Reviewed By: Karama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 10:14 CST
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1# have kagome bash Yuske(sp) on the head, slap Kuwabara, or something like that. 2# have kagome trip Hiei or Kuwabara. thats all i have for now(^_^) And your doing great^_^
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 21:09 CST
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oh yeah and i think Kagome should be kitsune! cuz if Kurama and Kag get together then their children will be half kit and half inu! @_@ what kinda breed is that???
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 21:06 CST
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AYA! that is SOOOOO good!!! it would be cool if Kagome met Kurama in the future and got introduced to the YYH gang!! ^^ they kissed!!! ^^ yay!
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: January 08, 2004 09:42 CST
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Maybe you could ask your editor for ideas. I used to have a writers block... I got rid of it by atleast writing one sentance per day. Yup. Ideas will come, sometimes you just have to force them out.
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Title: Cutie foxie
Reviewed By: butterfly Rin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this whole story! I just love everything about it! U keep me in suspense, especially when Sesshy kissed Kagome! That was a complete shocker! Please continue! I've beenwaiting a while and looking forward to the romantics later!
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