| "Strength of Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Painted Lady On: January 21, 2006 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in absolute tears! This is absolutely horrible! Not the story, but the situation. What is going to happen to them? I'm in such suspense. Inu Yasha and Kagome should run away to, like, Timbucktwo or something. The Arctic Circle? The wilds of Alaska? They could live on Moose meat...lol...sorry. Excellent chapter, and eagerly awaiting your next update!
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Title: omg !
Reviewed By: freakyducky On: January 13, 2006 22:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i loved it!! i cryed when they took kagome away from inuyasha o plz! update as soon as possible ur a wonderful writer and i love the way u describe things i got lost in this story very easly. i loved it way to go!
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Title: AAARRRRGGGGHHHH
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 13:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!! I can't believe that you did this to poor Inuyasha and Kagome! you naughty naughty author! How could the council do something like this to the bonded pair. I understand that there is racism going on, but this is silly. What happened in this reality to an unbiased hearing in court. It seems like you have stacked everything against these two that could possibly be stacked. I of course understand that you are just doing this because the story needs the modivating factor, but it just makes me so sad. The last paragraph where Inuyasha is comforted by Kagome's mother and he cries. damn. That was painful to read. I am sure that it must have been painful to write as well. In closing, thank you so much for writing this piece of fiction. I have enjoyed reading it over the months. There are hints of ideas from other published stories but you weave them together in such a grand and interesting way that they all seem new again. I hope that you get to feeling well and have lots of time soon so you can write more and more for us. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 11, 2006 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't keep them apart!!!! I'm crying right now damn it!!! Oh god why the hell do all of them hate hanyou so much? And what the hell? That was no fair trial!!! Musou was obviously bias and not to mention they want to remove her from youkai interference so they place her with another hanyou? WTF!!!! Not to mention Naraku is a fucking bastard. How can they hand her over to him when he was behind most of the attacks on the Taisho residence? *sigh* you better update soon damn it!!!!! This is amazing!!!!
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Reviewed By: [ Ashra Ab ] On: January 08, 2006 00:38 EST
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hello! me again! :D well I was reading the fanfic since the beggining (while I wait for the next update :P ) and I was wondering: 'What did inuyasha think of kagome when he first saw her?' I mean, the first chapters were from kagome's pov, and I was just curius about it. Well, I'll go back to read now. :P
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Reviewed By: [ Ashra Ab ] On: January 05, 2006 23:17 EST
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I totally agre with "dudekiller(nsi)" what? dont they know naraku is a hanyou????? anyway, i hate you (just a lil bit) right now, but I wouldnt want to kill, cuz Id like very much for you to update, so pls do it asap. really, this is a great fic, i love it.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: January 05, 2006 18:12 EST
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KILL KILL KILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KILL THE BASTARDS WHO ARE STUPID ENOUGH TO PUT THEIR OWN GODDAMN LIVES INFRONT OF INNOCENT PEOPLE!!!!!!!! WHY THE HELL WOULD THEY SAY THEY WISH TO BREAK OFF ALL YOUKAI CONTACT WHEN THE ASSHOLE THEY'RE SENDING HER TO IS A HANYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KILL KILL KILL KILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im not trying to offend you, just getting out my anger *glares* at those stupid pieces of shit. i hope you feel better. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 19:57 EST
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omg this is probably the best inuyasha fanfic story i have ever read!!!! it's so good! please update soon :D
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 18:13 EST
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Well, I can see why you fear for your life, or at least your inbox, but without some conflict it would be a boring story so I thought the chapter was awesome, particularly the aside where Inuyasha has to calm Sesshoumaru! And the way Inuyasha was youkai when it suited the counciland not when it didn't. However, there was some phrasing that was unclear to me: "If Kagome hadn't been wearing underwear," -- but she wasn't wearing any underwear. Did Inuyasha mean, if she had been he would have restrained himself? "Didn't you use your bars as a lawyer after your last client attacked and killed a hanyou child in court?" -- ????
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Reviewed By: tobsies On: January 04, 2006 17:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thsnk you so much for updating!
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Title: OH MY GOD!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: January 04, 2006 13:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is still one of my favorite storys but i cried so bad when reading this chapter. i say fuck the rules!!! inu and kag should have just kiked but and left together!!! anyway i look forward to your next chapter. please be soon.
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Reviewed By: Black Izzi On: January 04, 2006 06:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
S*it,things would have been a little easier had the council allowed that at least Shippo could have stayed with Kagome whilst her (forced) 1 week stay at Naraku's residense, (*HISSSS*-*spit*XP) but I guess that would have been too 'kind' of them...*glares at Council execpt Holy Child,Sesshoumaru & Kag's mother* Things are starting to get darker now.Excellent job there!!! (Love Dark yet has Love too fics) You where sick for more than 2 weeks?! O-O O.M.G,I hope you feel much better now!Take your time to update, & thanks for all these awersome chapters!! Take lots of care meanwhile!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe in the morning On: January 04, 2006 05:43 EST
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Man Kagome should have flared up her aura and burn the hell out of those pricks. Bet it isn't still now. Great story glad we have a new chapter.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: January 04, 2006 03:18 EST
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omgosh my eyes were getting teary at the end. haha if i was u dude i'd b afraid very afraid, but that does encourage an update in the near future right? pleeeease pleaaase thanks. great story great chapter even if heartbreaking
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 02:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No. No. No, no, no, no, no! NO! You had this planned from the start, didn't you? You are evil! You are so unbelievably evil, I tell you! But...I still love you and your writing. This chapter was just so sad and depressing! Man, I feel for Kagome and Inuyasha...that was just wrong, in so many ways! And then poor Shippo! :( Oh, well...I hope you don't leave us hanging too long, please? Just...please update again when you can. (Hopefully soon.) I really am eager to know what's happening next! :) So, excellent job! This story is still as wonderful as ever! (ALthough, with this last chapter...I have to admit you have totally thrown me for a loop at the recent occurances.) Well, til next time, take care! :)
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