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Reviewed By: beulah On: July 30, 2004 07:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update!!! I love this fanfic! I neeeeeeed you to finish it! please and thank you, sha-chan
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Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 00:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found your story through an author's note (sorry, I can't remember what author, but I think it was from a story I read on the "A Single Spark" site. It makes me so happy when I stumble across such a good story, there are so many out there that it is difficult to sift through them to find ones of this calibur. I'm really enjoying it, I've just spent all of my free time over the last three days reading it!! I love the way you worked up to Kurama's "Please bear my child" line in chapter 10. And I think Miroku's (and Shinju's) character is written so well, very often he gets stereotyped as nothing but a pervert. I have many questions but in the past few chapters I see answers being revealed little at a time so I'll be patient. I admire writers that can stick to their stories for this long...so many drop their stories after a few chapters. I fully understand how real life can get in the way of personal time, so thank you for devoting your free time writing this story and sharing it with the rest of us. It is truely appreciated. Please update soon...
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: PersonaJXT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 22:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update NOW or else i'll be force to call in my connections in the underworld and have hell's armies destroy your home and torture you till you've updated!
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Title: dragoninu
Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:02 PDT
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I just found your story and am absolutely enthralled by it all. I hope there is more because I am just itching to hear more about this. I haven't ever read a cross-over before and this one is awesome so far! I have no doubt it will ever wane in beauty! Thank you and I hope you keep writing! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: solqua [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 19:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
did we lose you to another sports trip? This fic is my fav. Startin to go through withdrawls from lack of fix. You have done a wonderful job keeping the elements that make the characters so unique and intense. Your stroyline is very origional and I can't wait to see how Hiei reacts to finally being a part of a family, no longer the forbidden child.
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Title: Suckered in for another chapter
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 17:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another skillfully carved cliff you've left me hanging onto. Brillantly played, I hope you'll be able to update soon. I am a little late reading this chapter, so maybe it will come faster. It's very clever how you mocked us all, with that little thing Miroku says before Kurama gets to Kagome. Its also nice how you manage to hold off the answers to all the questions. Its worked at keeping me hungery for more every time I finish a chapter. I hope you keep writing after you finish this one.
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 12:08 PDT
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Is it just me or has no one commented on the tape that Hiei stole... IT HAS THE PAST WITH KAGOME AND MIROKU NAMED DOESN'T IT?!?!?!?! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna see Hiei (and Kurama, can't forget Kurama)'s reacton!!!!!!!!! Keep updating! MORE MORE!!!! *cleans out shrine and starts enlarging it to keep up with the fic.*
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Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: July 19, 2004 13:05 PDT
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Heh heh, looks like you took my advice seriously for once! Yep, Kurama definitely got the flirtaciousness factor nailed. I love him when hes so yummy!---I'll just get straight to the point. There really was only one possible stikky-outty point this time. The first upsidown kiss for sure. I mean, c'mon, what's more stikky than being grabbed from behind and having your tongue mauled by a kitsune?... Hmm, maybe you shouldn't answer that...---Kurama teaching kids! Really lookin forward to that. I can just see those two weeks alone together disappear. Poof! Ha ha, not like he deserves it, but still... How much success can he have with a room full of kids who just saw him practically molest their teacher? Tsk tsk, Kurama. I wouldn't be packing my bags too soon. ---- Oooh, Kagome's talking with Hiei. Somethin's gonna happen! What that something is, we may never know... Until you update again, of course. That would be he most obvious answer, don't you think?... Yes, I thought so too. On the note of updates, what took this one so long to get out? Or was it the last one... Oh, I don't remember. Just wondering if there was a reason for the delay or not. *sigh* Lazyness does get the best of us sometimes.---- Huh, mindless rambling in a review. Usually its mindless rambling *about* the story, but this time... Oh, who knows. Maybe I'm just out of it. In any case, was a good chapter, totally killer dude! "If your parents never had children, chances are you won't either." |
Title: chapter 41 question
Reviewed By: FoxFireK On: July 15, 2004 18:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the story and I loved the chapter, its very origional without taking away from the origional story lines and charicter personalities and I love that. I was wondering what, "Okaeri" means. other then that all I can say it I love the story very much and cant wait to read the next chapter
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Reviewed By: kiwarrier [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 16:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter until the cliffhanger. 'Okaeri' means 'welcome', right? i looked it up and it said 'okaerinasai' means 'welcome home'.
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Title: Anime Megumi of LHS
Reviewed By: Wizardshirosenshi On: July 15, 2004 06:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of , no the Best Kurama/Kagome fics I have ever read! Just a couple of questions. That is Inuyasha in the Makai right? What so special about this Yoshimi-cho place. And what does 'Okaeri' mean?
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Reviewed By: Tora-uma [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 21:22 PDT
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I've really enjoyed how this story has evolved and I'm quite glad that you aren't trying to rush the plot. I love the subtlety in the way Miroku manipulates people, it's great to see someone who does justice to his character. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Someone Blue On: July 14, 2004 19:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
What does "Okaeri" mean??? Also, how many chapters are there left? The story is "dragging" a bit... No offense! ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 14, 2004 11:40 PDT
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ouuu! Cliff hanger! Naughty! >.< I really like your story still! hehehe. And my favorite part is still the who sun/Sesshoumaru/West thing-a-ma-bob. The ending left me confusded (yes, not really a word) What does "Okaeri… Hiei" mean? *begs for clarification* Is Hiei finally going to find out all of the secrets? And I'm still curious as to what happened between Inuyasha and Kagome, and Sesshoumaru and Kagome. So confusing, but it makes for a great story so keep confusing the hell outa me, haha. I think that Sango and Miroku fill their God roles perfectly, hehe. You couldn't have picked better roles for those two. Well keep up with the great work and update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Suzumi On: July 14, 2004 11:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals* This was such an enjoyable chapter!!! I'm glad they eah are having fun, but I hope Kurama realizes he loves her soon. ;; Won't Kurama get pulled out of his two weeks with Kagome because of work? ;; I can't wait to rea more!!! I really, REALLY love this fic even more. ; ; I just wonder when it'll be done, but then I don't want it to end because I love all the Kurama and Kagome fluff! This was such a nice chapter and, well, update soon because I want to know more!
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