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Title: hey
Reviewed By: tinak142 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 00:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story please update soon
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Title: WOWIE WOW WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: AJ On: October 03, 2004 22:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That's all I gotta say! Your story has me hooked!! All of your character developement and the plots twists.....GEEZ! You really are talented, have you ever thought of writing professionally? Reading your story made me late for class one day...it is that good! Just when I think I have the story figured out, you throw a little twist in there. I just want to let you know that this story is very enjoyable, the BEST I have read so far on this site! JA- ne
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 19:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first real cliff hager that i've had to endure... ever! And i've been at this site for like 6 months! This is horrible! But i'm addicted to your story so i'll live... hopefully.
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Reviewed By: purplepeopleater On: October 03, 2004 14:37 PDT
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I'm.....in shock.
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Reviewed By: Moonsharmony [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 13:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil place to stop. I really like reading your story the plot line is so well developed and the characters are very believable. Everything just flows so smoothely together and makes a great deal of sense. I really like your writing style it's very clear and concise without revealing all the secrets of the story right away. You still manage to leave question left to be asked. I honestly think you are a very good writer, have you considered it as a profession?
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: broken_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 16:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I must say that I absolutely love this fic. It just keeps flooring me everytime you toss in another twist. Which is good. That's the way I like it. Please do keep up the good work. I eagerly await the next chapter. Later - broken_angel, a.k.a. Crash
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Reviewed By: kerina- On: October 02, 2004 12:37 PDT
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AHHH nooo crule person. what was naraku doing there??? T_T MORE ANSWERS NEXTIME PLEASE??? you are so MEAN T_T the ever reading sorceress who is not logged in~
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 11:03 PDT
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That was great! I was not expecting Naraku.
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Title: wtf?
Reviewed By: kettricken [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 09:47 PDT
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Wha..? What the hell is that all about?? Oh, I know you'll explain everything eventually...but it can't be soon enough for me. *sigh* I pine for your story, isn't that sad? By the way, you're so insanely evil for cutting off at that particular cliffhanger--evil in a good way, mind you, but evil nonetheless! Can't wait for the next update!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 17:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Naraku? Oh dear... this doesn't look good... Lots of fluff in that last chapter, and Kudos for Youko's perverted mind... ^^ Developments, developments... Youko and Kurama are one and the same, I think your explantain for their two sperate minds is... brilliant, really, I do. It works, and it fits into the story as well as hinting of something that's going to come soon enough. Hmm... Great chapter! I enjoyed reading it. :)
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: October 01, 2004 15:19 PDT
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*sighs* I wish I could write as well as you.
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Reviewed By: Avonnalay-Ariemay [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 08:33 PDT
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Okay, the whole Kouga/Kurama arguing-insulting-you're not taking Kagome from me-I'll bite your head off if you try- thing was good. *smiles like an idiot* I really like the way you did that. It set a few more things clear in my own head. Youko is turning out to be quite protective, isn't he? Hmm, I think you can honestly call his fixation with her a legitimate 'obsession' now. *smirks evilly* Question about the shrine she's in though. Is it the disappearing castle thing that Naraku had? Just wondering. I mean, his grave is there, right? So, it would at least seem logical, or to me anyhow. Oh, and why did they bury the guy that was trying to kill them? I'm surprised Inuyasha didn't just leave a rotting corpse where ever he was. But, then again, I'm not writing the story, am I? :) I can't wait to find out more of the back story around the final battle. And as for Naraku,himself. Hmm,I was wondering when spidey-boy was going to show up again. Wouldn't be a good Inuyasha story if he wasn't there, would it? I'm kinda confused about the Reiko/Naraku thing though. Maybe it will be explained better in the next few chapters. Anyhow, I hope you get to put out another chapter soon. I really am hung up on this story. I know what it's like to try and work and write (not to mention go to school), so I sympathize. Once again, you have put out an absolutely wonderful chapter, and I wait impatiently for the next one..and the next..and the next..and.. Well, you get the point. :)
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Title: What the H***
Reviewed By: Kiba_Girl1400 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 03:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell!!!!!! Okay Naraku. So your telling me that she was going to see Naraku? All along I thought she was going to see Miroku. Now I really cant wait to see whats gonna happen. First Hiei joins the family, found out Kurama is really a kitsune that was part of Youko's soul which was created because he was lonely and last but not least Kagome going to visit her worst enemies grave. Now tell me that is not a slap in the face. One minute you think you know whats going on and the next thing you know the whole story just gets turned around and I feel like an ass. WOW I'm confused and my head hurts with all the think about Kagome going to see Naraku. Naraku for crying out loud who goes to see their once used to be deadly, dangerous enenmy? I know I wouldn't. And whats with his spirit still being there? Please update I really want to know! What they're gonna talk about, why Kagome went to see him and why not Miroku. Anyway I love the chapter and I hope you update soon.
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Title: Great twist!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 00:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! ::wriggles happily:: I absolutely adore all of the little questions you raise and the hints you throw out...and the answers that you provide that pay off the setups, but in an unexpected way. Wheee! Great job--and a nifty little twist at the end, too. Poor Kurama...I fear that this "vacation" may not turn out quite the way he and Youko are planning. I'm still enjoying this story tremendously, and I may have to check out Yu Yu Hakusho, since I've never watched it but I'm really liking the characters in your story. Great job!
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 (not signed in) On: October 01, 2004 00:42 PDT
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Wow, Naraku? Call me blind, but I didn't see that coming. I love this story; wonderful update. I was very happy to see the little email in my inbox, hehe. I hope you're feeling better, and I understand and respect that updates will be few and far between because you're busy. I just appreciate that you update when you can. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter. ^^
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