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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 00:44 PDT
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I'm fairly new to the crossover scene (Yu Yu especially), yet I'm absolutely smitten with this fiction. I love it. I'm at complete attention while reading, simply devouring every chapter and enjoying every minute of it. This is an excellent story and it's definately one of my favorites. I look forward to the next update; good work! ^^
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: September 19, 2004 06:24 PDT
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I was wondering where you went! I love the Chapter! I think it's one of the best! Sorry, I'm kinda cutting this short... but great job!
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Title: been a while
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 19:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
been a long summer most of it with out the internet so my waiting time in between chapters was a lot easier. This chapter was funny funny. I've been giggling the whole time. I look forward to the next chapter, but know rush, it seems times makes the chapters better.
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Title: been a while
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
been a long summer most of it with out the internet so my waiting time in between chapters was a lot easier. This chapter was funny funny. I've been giggling the whole time. I look forward to the next chapter, but know rush, it seems times makes the chapters better.
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Title: oh, thank you
Reviewed By: kettricken On: September 18, 2004 14:34 PDT
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Ohh... Thank you so very, very much for updating. You have no idea how eager I've been to know what would happen next. I've got my fix now, thank goodness. Just thought I'd let you know that when I reached the end of this chapter, I was literally on the edge of my seat. I could've totally faceplanted and it would've been entirely natural. Can't wait to see what happens on the trip!
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Reviewed By: AirashiiKuraku On: September 17, 2004 23:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear I've been ruined for any guy that ever tries to win my affections. How can any human guy live up to Kurama's reputation? I love how you've done all the characters in this fic. Kurama isn't goody-goody (thank god), Sesshy isn't such a prick, and Shippou is still a prankster. Shinju and Kaze where a great idea. There's only one thing that there needs to be more of. Fluff!! I need a new pillow, I'm sure you can help me out there. lol. I hope your life gets less hectic for you. Between school and work, I'm surprised I can even use the bathroom sometimes!
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Reviewed By: shuuyatou On: September 17, 2004 20:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh wow, that was sooooo great. I have to thank you for updating, so thank you times a million. I... wow... That was just really nice to read after a hard week, thank you so much. Great chapter, update soon.
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Reviewed By: kerina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 19:34 PDT
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OMG that was AWESOME! PLEASE WRITE MORE AND TORTURE NO LONGER!!!! *bows before the almighty supreme god(ess) of fanfiction*
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Reviewed By: RoseMarie On: September 17, 2004 19:27 PDT
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Excellent job! I nearly fell out of the chair when Heie appeared. And a grope! In front of his mother no less! Here's hoping your gainfull employment gives you a break so you have time for more of these delightful chapters. RMM
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Reviewed By: Avonnalay-Ariemay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, all I can say is that this story is wonderful. It's taken me almost two days to get to this point, but it was well worth the time. Most crossover fics that I have read up until this point have been quite...sketchy when it came to plot development. I can honestly say that this story is beautifully thought out and developed. Kudos to you for taking pride in your work. Your style of writing is very concise and easy to understand. Spelling and grammar is fine. I've only found a few little errors here and there..not enough to take away from the overall effect of the story though. The amount of originality is amazing. I know crossovers are sometimes hard to pull off, but you're doing a wonderful job. You've gotten me hooked to this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. I'm now an avid fan! My favorite part would have to be the bantering between Hiei and Youko. It definitely adds humor to the situations, and I find myself grinning every time they start bickering and threatening each other. Seeing Youko and Kurama get frustrated beyond belief is a definite plus, as well. I do have a few questions, though. What exactly happened to Kikyou? Also, what is up with a full demon Inuyasha? I'm guessing he wished on the jewel to become full demon? And what made him just kinda 'let go' of Kagome to Miroku? Anyhow, if you can't answer for lack of giving away something, I understand. I'm just a curious person. Anyhow, please update soon. I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 17, 2004 14:43 PDT
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I take it that he decided to be in the family? ^_^
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 14:22 PDT
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Interesting story. Btw I love this story. Glad to see it back. Keep up the awesome work. cools beans as peas in a pod.
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Reviewed By: dragoninu2 On: September 17, 2004 13:03 PDT
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I have to say that I discovered this story about 2 months ago, read what was available then in one sitting and have hungered ever since for more. Thank you so much! I am not much of a fan of Yu Yu Hakusho, but I'll watch it. And I love this story! Thanks again! I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 04:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I very much enjoyed lunch with Kurama's Ma and am greatly looking forward to when Youko finds out the "pathetic human boy" Kagome used to be married to is the God of deception; probably won't faze him a bit. On the other hand, you can never have too much Hiei while this chapter had a surfeit of Kurama.
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Reviewed By: Solqua(unlogged) On: September 16, 2004 22:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, update, soo very happy, thank u thank u thank u......
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