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| "Par Tout Autre Nom" Reviews/Comments [ 734 ] | | Pages (49): [ « ‹ 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 › » ] | Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: July 14, 2004 10:11 PDT
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That's nice. Hiei finally has a home to be welcomed into. Wait. Does this make Yukina part of Kag's family too?
| Title: Gack!!
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 09:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gackness!!! Confused. . . Anyone ever mention the need to borrow your JapaneseEnglish dictionary? Anyway, another amazing chapter! Finally! I was beginning to think you didn't love us anymore! *Snifflesobs!* And then I felt guilty because I read on the chapter that you hurt yourself. *Whapwhapwhap* If it hurts when you do that sorta thing, DON'T DO IT! On a lighter note, I hope you get well really, really soon so you can continue to write more fun chapters! I wanna know the answer to Hiei's questions too! Heh ^^; and of course, I think it'd be funny to see Youko try to teach. . . Anyway, write more fast! Please? And I think I have to cut this off before it eats some of my letters like it did the last time I wrote a long review like this. X.X Is it a bad thing if it ends with 666 characters left? Some sorta sign, mebbe?
| Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 05:20 PDT
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Wow. Great chapter. I absolutely love this story and I dearly missed it over your break. I hope that you are feeling and will get much better. Keep up the excellente work. Btw what does Okaeri sp. the last words of the chapter. I just didn't understand what it meant and couldn't find it in my jap-eng dictionary.
| Title: fabulous story
Reviewed By: silverose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 02:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to tell you that I love this fic. I am a hard judge of writing and I don't easily get pulled into a story but I am fully adicted to yours. Please post the next chapter soon.
| Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 10:27 PDT
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Weee! Finally, the loveable hanyou takes part in the story! Man, you just made so many readers very happy!! I'm definitely one of them. About time he came in, if you ask me.--- Hmm, stikky-outy part. Most definitely when Inuyasha (in dog form) said to tell Kagome to visit him. Yay, I am just so happy you put him in! --- I liked the whole Miroku thing. You totally captured his personality when he was talking to Kagome. Hee hee, hes such a pervert. :) And of course Miroku would approve of Kurama. I mean, they have the same one-track mind, don't they? Like they say, "Great minds think alike". great minds?...maybe not.--- I have to say, Kurama didn't have the most outstanding character this chapter. I dunno, he just wasn't... him this time. He was all fidgety and nervous, and (dare I say) a teensy bit annoying?... I figure your Youko muse was bopping you on the head for not making him seem more appealing. For the sake of your health (and the asprin factories), put some extra flirtaciousness in the next time he sees Kagome. He totally deserves some intimate time with his miko :) ---- Whew. Another review, only a week after I read the chapter. I'm such a procrastinator. But I did get it done before the next chapter. Aren't you proud? I should get a medal or something. Anyway, just make sure to give K+K some serious down time. You're not invincibe, ya know. I'm desperately trying to figure out why kamikaze pilots wore helmets.
| Title: wow I'm slacking
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got notice of this chapter on time, but I got side tracked by a great iny/kag fic, called The Lucky Ones. So I finnally read it and I'm happy to say I'm still in love with this story line, and the suggestion of fifty chapters gave me reading chills. Oh so happy I would be getting to have nice big story to re-read when its all done. Well tell next chapter (or when I get my computer hooked back up)
| Title: Withdrawl. . .
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 12:23 PDT
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So. . . t-tired. . . fading fast. . . must. . . have. . . more. . . By Any Other Name. . . sooon. . . . Pleeease. . . *Starving in the desert impression here.* P-pleeeaaassseee. . . more. . . *Bowing, kneeling, and worshipping for more.* Heh. . . ^^;; so please, give your loyal junkies, worshippers, and general reviewers more?
| Title: OC
Reviewed By: grayangle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 21:46 PDT
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Name: Victor James Williams Nicknames:smilly Codename:Grayangle Age:Human 21 Race:Human Hair/eye color: sandy greenblue more happy more blue more angery more green Height:6 feet 2.5 inches Class:Fighter Powers/attacks:He has agility that a gold metalest would sell their souls and that of their family for. Powers link to weapons solid,hallow,Armor percing, Hypersonic(mach 6+),ice,fire,energy,hunter(added to any round takes lots of power)and sleep. Weapons:Two .45 pistols with 8 inch barrels,laser sight,flash suppressor,2 foot long sword that gets its power form the person holding it Most Deadly attacks:powered up hunter,powered up energy,Hypersonic,sword Crashing Heavens(massive lighting attack) Clothing:T-shirts baggy paints lots of pockits,leather trench,US gov issue anti Demon armor full body suit and hard plate chest+sholders shins+knees lower arm+elbow, shorts and undie,trucks Bio:Tought to do the right thing and stop those that do evil things. Went to Mental ward for killing a felon that got off on techincality at age 17 out at 20 good behavior Still hunts "bad people" and Gov targets "very bad people" Got .45s after killing mob gunsmith that was making them for demon.Sword family Relic Personality:positive,friendly,not to bad people,strate forward,little shy around girls, VERY around ones he likes,like to read and watch movies but not porn they have no plot and when they do its just silly,loves westers,only use neccary force=wont kill shoplifter
| Title: By Any Other Name
Reviewed By: Arella Hallo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this story. Sorry I got behind on the chapters. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 13:27 PDT
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Fweh.. the scene between her and miroku was so sweet, and usually I'm the type to wrinkle my nose at such a pairing. You're just too dagum good for.. my good? Or something like that. Whoo, lookit me, being the queen of bad sentence structure. Erm.. I dont know if I've ever reviewed you before. I should have; I've read and reread your story some number north of a dozen times. Something only just occured to me, though.. Does Kurama know about Kagome's back? He was tracing the scars with his fingers the first time they kissed, and then there was the dream, where I think he got to look at her back bare, but it might have been dark? I think he would have had a reaction had he seen them but.. fwrm.
| Reviewed By: Michi-chan6` [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 13:49 PDT
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Well fuck in a bucket. It's Inuyasha isn't it? lol. Anyways I've been having By Any Other Name withdrawl. Staying with relatives who don't have an internet connection for 3 weeks sucks. Update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: Jamee/Xoulblade On: July 01, 2004 21:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh I know!! I know who 'he' is!! Its Inutrasha!! I mean Inuyasha!! LOL boy hes gotten big (if its truly him)
| Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 17:15 PDT
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wow. So Inu is a full demon now huh. I guess that is what he wished for on the incomplete Shikon no Tama that caused all this mess? Well the reunion is going to be something else. Awesome chapter. Keep up the excellente work. Btw loved the scene with Kagome and Miroku, Kawaii doesn't even begin to describe it.
| Reviewed By: Luscious On: July 01, 2004 14:35 PDT
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OMG! WUZ THAT INU DOG INUYASHA? damn ur a sneaky one! that chapter wuz kickass! i cant wait till the next one. Plz update soon this is just too good!!
| Reviewed By: moonshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 14:26 PDT
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Please update soon!! your fic's one of my two favs. That dog's gotta be Inuyasha...who else...? *muses*
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