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Reviewed By: Somnambulicoius (not logged in) On: November 01, 2004 13:28 PST
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Better to review late than never, ne? More than a few things stood out to me in this chapter, not the least of which was Kagome's comparison between Naraku and Youko Kurama. Now why wasn't that obvious to me before? Gotta love the sneaky bishies with blood on their hands. Oh, and kudos to Naraku for drawing out Kagome's true feelings about the kinky kitsune! He's so very observant, much to this reader's delight. Hm, so it would appear that Youko isn't robbing the cradle after all? I expect you to explain that more thoroughly in the future, along with all of its confusing implications... The flashback scene was beautifully written, with all your usual evasiveness and befuddlement. You do such a wonderful job at exposing things without really exposing them, I'm beginning to wonder if you've got kitsune blood yourself. *winks* You've also got me wondering just how powerful Youko really is. Kagome's shock at that little taste of his youki was delightful. I have to say that I love how you've characterized Kagome, by the way: older, wiser, a little more jaded and more than a little dark. I find that to be quite realistic, considering what she's been through (and I do wish Takahashi-sensei would do that herself...but I digress.) I'm sure you've got lots more exposition and confusion in store for us in the next chapter. I'm running out of room to review, so I'll just say this in parting: My previous threat still stands. Kukukukuku.
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Reviewed By: Tori Chan On: October 27, 2004 09:13 PDT
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please update soon....i wanna know whats goin on....when will he actually admits he's in love with her? or will he just deny it...and will Hiei be protective of her even more so ? lol so many queastions and no time for answers...please update soon.....i wanna see where this all goes
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Title: where o where
Reviewed By: Sessies_baby On: October 24, 2004 03:29 PDT
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im sorry to say but.......where is this going i like it and all but its not getting anywhere yet......is it going to be awhile before it speeds up..its cool tho i like sess/kag and kur/youko/kag too. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 19:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am absolutely loving this story!!! This is definetly one of the best fics that I have yet to read and I can't wait for your next chapter! Good luck and catch ya next round! Ja ne! ^.~
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Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 12:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter...as always. I was a little confused in the flash back part, but I got it in the end. Well done!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 17, 2004 13:24 PDT
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ROFL!!!! Next time we'll do it without the tree! Love that line ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 11:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its been hard finding time to even read anything, but I manage to find the time for you. It is always worth it in the end. Hopefully I'll have the internet on my own computer soon so I won't have to sneek in time at school or from my pops. I loved the insults between Kagome and Naraku.
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Title: layers upon layers...
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 16:35 PDT
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Once again, you provide the thing I like so much about his story (well, other than the terrific sexual tension between Kagome and Kurama, that is!)--the layers upon layers of backstory and secrets. I adore how you're gradually paying off hints thrown out in earlier chapters, and then providing some deliciously creepy moments (as with the Naraku conversation) that fulfill setups but that weren't inherent in the premise. I continue to enjoy this story so very, very much, and thanks for updating so regularly! There's nothing more disappointing than finding a terrific story, and then discovering that it's been abandoned for one reason or another...
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: October 15, 2004 13:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter! Even more plot twists with the added info into Kagome's past. Interesting, indeed, to say the least. Very glad you didn't split the chapter up!! I love long (extremely long) updates. I crave them. And I'm glad you worked in some more Kag/Kur time! I'm still extrememly curious as to what's on the disc Hiei took and what his reaction will be..... can't wait for next time!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 12:21 PDT
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coolsa.
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Reviewed By: purplepeopleater On: October 14, 2004 19:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"We're in a tree." That was good. Just the perfect speck of humor the the situation called for. Question: Does Yukina know that Hiei is her brother? Is she going to be involved in this fic at all. It would be an interesting aspect to add to the plot. And if she was accepted into the family Hiei wouldn't have to ever be torn between giving his complete protection to Yukina or Kagome. I have a craving for a family reunion. Kagome and Sango haven't been able to catch up at all yet. I think that the shock the Reikai Tantei would experiance from seeing "Bad Cop" acting all excited when reunited with her "sister" would be amusing. I feel bad for Kurama's rose-thing. He didn't like going all brain dead upon entering the shrine. Is Ankoji the reincarnationj of Sango's first daughter? Dating must have been hell for her. ^ ^ Update soon! Cheers.
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Title: *happy dance*
Reviewed By: kettricken [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 10:55 PDT
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Yay! I've got the warm fuzzies now, from reading your chapter. I don't know if I've said this, but I adore the way you write Kurama--he's so sweet but not disgustingly so, and he's got such a defined personality (personalities?) that he stays true to in every chapter that you write. Kudos to you!
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Reviewed By: Mistic UV On: October 14, 2004 05:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way awasome upate soon!
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Title: I have no idea why I cannot login.... >_>
Reviewed By: Suzumi Tenshi On: October 13, 2004 19:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"A promise for later, honey. Next time we'll try it without the tree." That was my favorite line EVER!!!! *cries* Best KurKag fic ever!!!! *cries harder* I love you!!! This is probably one of my favorite chapters too! I mean, I like the Naraku/Kagome parts, but man! When it came to the Kuram and Kagome moment, I mean WOW! You really got me into it! I haven't read anything thoughroughly, but I read EVERYTHING throughly when it came to the Kurama and Kagome part! You don't know how happy you made me when I read about how Kagome is realizing that she loves Kurama than just liking him! You made me the happiest Kurama and Kagome fan ever that I could just kill you~! :D I MUST read more so I hope you update soon! Oh! I also love everything that is going on in your fic! I mean, everything makes sense and how you characterize everyone is just... PERFECT! I mean, I think you really captured Kurama in this chapter! When he stopped Youko, I didn't even think he would do that! After a second had passed, I thought that it was something really Kurama! :D You do such a beautiful job on By Any Other Name! I want to know how it ends, but then the supply of beautiful Kurama and Kagome moments will be no more! ; ; I don't want that to happen either! DAMN YOU AND YOUR FIC! AHHH I love BAON so much that it hurts, you know that??? *shakes fist* I promise that I'll hate you when you discontinue BAON, you hear? *cries in a corner* My KurKag fic doesn't even compare to yours... Be a proud author!
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 19:16 PDT
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*looks at her last review proudly* That was the entire 1500 limit! That's the longest review I've written... YAY!!!
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