| "Par Tout Autre Nom" Reviews/Comments [ 734 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blue wolf On: April 16, 2005 07:58 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic. it is sooo amazing hope you update !
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: March 31, 2005 12:35 PST
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interesting conversation with Shippo. do they marry? how many kits do they have? update more soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 17:25 PST
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Wow, 50...long...chapters. @.@ It took me a week and a half to read it all. I luv it so much though. ^_^ so, um, update again soon. please. try to shorten up your chapters just a bit. k, well bye bye.
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Reviewed By: Blue flower [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have done very well for yourself. I applaude your writing style and have not read a fic like this in English that had such detailed and well thought out, plots (for a lack of a better word). I will state that your writing style is novel like, on the lines that I have only seen in one other person. You'd do well in your free time (right, like we all have a lot of that) to adapt this story into your own and see if you could get a deal off of it. I had just stumbled upon your fic when a friend informed me of it and decided to review after I finished reading until your last update, so yeah. Anyway, I was hoping that part of your story was going to be in French by the name of the title, another reason why I did not grade on the spelling and grammar. Does add a classy touch to it though. Continue to do what you do, and hope things work out the best for you in all of your ventures, and be glad that you are no longer writing term papers...
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Title: Bow down to our queen
Reviewed By: kettricken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 11:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* All this time, and I'm still hooked. =D Once again, I love your story, admire your work, and envy your talent. I love how Kurama keeps getting bits and pieces of the story, but not nearly enough to see the whole picture. I have to ask--is he going to totally lose the mask when he finally figures it out? I think it'd be interesting to see...he's always so calculating, only allowing others to see what he wants them to. I'd love to see your rendition of Kurama, dropped on his ear! =) Thanks for writing--we all appreciate you so much!
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Reviewed By: Alea Seikou On: March 29, 2005 20:45 PST
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Very well written. I love the mix of tones and character perspective, particularly Yoko's running commentary. I also enjoy the challenge of the puzzle you've created. This is a complete roller coaster ride of intrigue that has kept me guessing. Keep up the excellent writing! You do the realm of fanfiction a rare justice by your work and give the rest of us standards to aim towards.
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Reviewed By: SoM (not logged in) On: March 29, 2005 08:24 PST
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DEVIAAAAAANT~! *tackles* How the hell are you? It's been a while. And ah, this chapter. *grins* I'm so thoroughly pleased that Youko is finally starting to put some pieces together, even though he does have a long way to go. And it goes without saying that I'm happy with any chapter in which Hiei plays a role, however small. The phone conversation with "Shippou-chan" was entirely delightful, and I love the way Youko explained the family connection -- that Shippou's father had entrusted him into Kagome's care. That was a stroke of brilliance. "Lazy sex" was another. *grins wickedly* While another lemon would have been nice, I appreciate that you're not overloading the story with sex at this point. Besides, when you're touting Youko's prowess so much, it has to be difficult to follow that up with a description of such sexual magnitude. (On a tangent, I recently picked up a copy of The Joy of Writing Sex, and it's an excellent guide to writing erotica.) The only problems I caught in this chapter were quite a few sentence fragments; one or two I can deal with for effect, but sometimes they seemed to be strung together, taking up the bulk of a paragraph. But it's not enough to really bother me. Anyway, contrats on another chapter done right; perhaps I shall be inspired enough to sit down and finish the revision of "Paradox" that's been plaguing me for...what is it, four months now? *heavy sigh* Yeah, back to the grindstone for moi. *hugs* Be well!
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Reviewed By: 2 lazy 2 aign in (Guardianovthe3rdGate) On: March 28, 2005 21:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is wonderful. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 20:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY ^_^ I am so glad you put another chapter out. And it's kool that you make it so kurama keeps geting so much information but it still dosn't add up and i'm all sitin here like DUDE! It right infront of you! Figure it out already. But, thats what makes it good. Again, Keep up the good work and i can't wait untill next time... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Ninnikia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 18:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an awesome writer keep up the good work and continue to write.
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Reviewed By: Rose Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 17:28 PST
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Wow! It was certainly well worth the wait. With all the misdirection, Houshi-sama is certainly the patron god of the family AND this story. I hope you update again soon, but will wait (impatiently) for quality.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiko-san [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 16:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to say that i love this story, I'm a huge fan of Kag/Kur pairings! well many parts of this story my 13 year old mind cannot comprehend T-T but i still love it I hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: March 28, 2005 16:08 PST
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...that's interesting. I love how you look at the anime and see so many little stories and are able to entwine them into this.
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 14:26 PST
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Beautiful. . . I'm not that much into Yu Yu Hakusho, but I love Inuyasha, and this story is so intricate it's lovely. It's like a woven quilt, so finely are the details in this story. I love it! I can and do patiently await your updates. . . I hope you are doing well otherwise!
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 14:00 PST
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*whimper* Please continue soon. Your killing me.
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