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| "Par Tout Autre Nom" Reviews/Comments [ 734 ] | | Pages (49): [ « ‹ 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 › » ] | Title: Nooooo
Reviewed By: The Black Kat On: May 19, 2004 21:14 PDT
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nooooooooo you can't stop there! You have to update! I want to know what happens already...why do you leave us in such agony....waiting and waiting and waiting...please hurry and update again soon.
| Title: eh. . . i'm lazy
Reviewed By: s1lver Neko On: May 19, 2004 20:25 PDT
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DAMN IT EVIL! WRITE MORE! NOW! SHARP, SHARP, OBJECTS! *Smuggling sharp objects out of the kitchen.*
| Title: eh. . . o
Reviewed By: s1lver Neko On: May 19, 2004 20:24 PDT
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| Reviewed By: solqua (not logged in) On: May 19, 2004 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i love your story. there aren't enough Kurama & Kagome fics and even less likable ones. you have done an excellent job.
| Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: May 19, 2004 18:03 PDT
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Dang. Well I guess our little favorite Kitsune will finally figure it all out. Or if not all then most of it. Awesome fic really. I think this is my all time favorite one. It is just so good. Keep it up.
| Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: May 19, 2004 17:36 PDT
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so Kurama made the connection between Shinji and Miroku then.
| Reviewed By: Storm1 On: May 18, 2004 14:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your plot! This a completely new twist two Kurama and Kagome romances. I mean come on. Kurama being anything but a perfect gentleman? Kurama being a pervert? I admit it adds a certain appeal. This story is certainly not bland.
| Reviewed By: -kerina- On: May 16, 2004 20:38 PDT
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AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!! I HATE YOU!!!! YOU ARE MEAN! WRITE NOW!!!!!!!!! sincerely, the sorceress, aka -kerina-
| Reviewed By: KuramasBlueGirl On: May 16, 2004 15:07 PDT
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OMG
| Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: May 16, 2004 09:24 PDT
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Naraku...... Isn't it?
| Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: May 15, 2004 22:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN!!! What a way to leave it. The appearance of Naraku or a reincarnation of his.
| Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: May 15, 2004 20:08 PDT
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I bet the man is Kouga.
| Reviewed By: rosie13 (too stunned to log in) On: May 15, 2004 19:18 PDT
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.... WOAH!!! I just had to review again, saying just how incredibly long that last review was... I mean... DUDE!!! It's long! Like... i can't even explain it! It's like all the wise-ness was taken out of me just to form that wonderful,(yet useless) 27-line paragraph! Woot! I'm awesome now! But I ahve paid the ultimate price-- the monk-ness in me has vanished. *sigh* I guess I'll just have to deal with regular unmonk-ness. Life will just be that much duller. Of course, there's still 'By Any Other Name' to make up for it. Now that's something taht's never dull. That and watching my boyfriend-constipated friends trying to hit on teachers... yeah, they're that desperate. And pathetic. I mean i can't say I'm a little short in the love departmet as well, but teachers? Now that's just pure insaneness. (for lack of a better word) I think I'll stop now befpre I write another 27-line paragraph. (which I'm extremely proud of!) Later, and make another stupenderiffic chapter soon!! Proofread carefully to make sure you didn't any words out.
| Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: May 15, 2004 19:06 PDT
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Hum! Well that was quite rude if I do say so myself! You take my review and turn it into a display of being evil. Nyeah to you. XP Damn you for going down the evil path and making us be patient. You know, its kinda scary that you know exactly how to make us want more and more of your story. You probably use some kind of magic or something... Hey, I have a hair from Kurama's head! You wanna trade? Please? Trust me, I ahve many more. Just don't ask me how I got 'em. Lets just say it inclydded many late nights and some very sharp tweezers... ANYway, time to point out my favorite part of the day!! Yay, I love these parts. They're just so... sticky-outy! Yeah, that's the word. So my favorite part was when Kagome put her hand on Kurama's thigh, and he put hsi legs together and she felt him up. I started cracking up so hard when I read that. Woot! Go Kurama! You know, sometimes i wonder what Kurama would be like if he didn't have Youko in his head. He'd probably be a really different person. Like alot more shy, reserved, probably alot less witty... Hey, this sounds like a great story idea! Whee! Just one more thing to occupy the empty space in my head. Don't you hate it when you ahve alot of great idea in your head, but you know you're way too busy to start writing them? yeah that's how I felt when I made my first two stories. Then I just had to go and make a thrid one, didn't I? Now I'm juggling between schoolwork, writing and lying about. What's an authoress to do? Okay, switching subjects. I've had an epiphany! (I always do when I review you.. Coincidence? I think not) We can try to cover it up with fancy words and long, deep stories all we want, saying it's just a way to express our creativeness, but really, all of us are just die-hard Kurama and Kagome fans down to the core. Simple as that. It's the reason we get on the computer every day to write what we love most-- Kurama and Kagome. See? A great revelation! I feel so wise, liek Miroku-sama. He really is ver wise, if you look under all the pervertedness (is that even a word? probably not). It's just oen of thsoe things. Oh, and you know what I would love? If something happened to Shippou, and he reverted to his kit form! Except he still has his bad-ass attitude and dirty mouth. How cute! Of course I can just see Youko bashing him, but then again I'd also love to see Youko in his kit form as well. can't you just imagine him? Chubby cheeks and blunt little fangs and claws. Adorable I tell you, adorable! Alright, time to come to the main point I'm itching to talk about. What teh hell is Naraku doing at teh restaurant??? (You just knew I was gonna bring this up) Of course I can only assume as the reader that it really is Naraku, with teh wavy black hair and all. There's also Kagome's perpetual state of shock to account for. So one can only believe that Naraku is present. I wonder if he's there to threaten her, or if maybe he's a reincarnation tahts totally harmles... But looking at the way Shippou and Shinju (thats his name, right?) were reacting, I think not. And from what I can tell by your writing pattern, the next chapter is gonna be half Kagome w/the others talking after Kurama left, and then Kagome and Naraku having a little chat. The other half is gonna be Kurama going through the portal, or Botan stopping him or something, and you're gonna stop it right before or right after Kurama confronts Naraku. Violent or otherwise. You see, now I have phsychic powers along with being wise! What a monk(ess) I'm turning out to be! Well i don't belive I have anything more to babble about.. Sorry to disappoint you. In any case, I'll leave you with one of my infamous, random closing statements. Where do i come up with them? Don't ask me. I'm just the hands that type em. If one synchronized swimmer drowns, do the rest have to drown too?
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 18:39 PDT
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This is one of the best fan fics I've read, and I don't even like Kurama; the back story seems so developed. I have been enjoying the interactions between the detectives and the Shikon gang but it is good that a villain (I'm assuming that was Onigumo or Musou) has appeared. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
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