| "Foundations of Neo Genesis" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 08:39 EDT
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You updated! You updated! You updated! *joins the victory dance by the fire* I miss you sweety! You really should speak up some more and come bother me on AIM more often! Now that you've abandoned me on the CC list too *puts on dramatic pose* I'll see you even less! Come say hello if you see me online m'kay? I promise I'll do the same! --- This one was a great chapter too - I really like how Sango and Inuyasha are hashing out their difference a lot more thoroughly than we saw elsewhere... their different upbringing and ingrained prejudices are really being brought out and taken care of. If a healing process ever happens, it will be a slow and laboured one. I do so hope we'll see more of you. but hey, you know I'll be here to read your chapter whenever you bring it out.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is good and well to see this story again... I almost forgotten all about it, well until you updated that is... This chapter was very well written and the best ending... Hope you update and keep up the good work. Peace...
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Reviewed By: Grimdir On: June 24, 2008 22:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was surprised to see this alert show up, needless to say, I was thrilled. I love the story, extremely original and well written (Wouldn't mind seeing this done as an original piece either instead of a fanfic). Great job on the chapter, and hope to see you keep writing it.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 07:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really great... but it sucks that it hasn't been updated in such a long time... I was actually looking for this story and happened to look at you other stories (Student Teacher Relationships) and I hope you write more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 18:01 EDT
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This is great. I've seen it but never got around to reading it until now. All the aspects of it are greatly thought out. I love the giant birds, I can totally imagin their behaviour and movements. I'm also happy you went the rout where the second group never came (or has been delayed, or maybe they just landed off course???) The food, the setting, the power struggles, all very realistic and exciting. Inuyasha is definetly fit for this expedition. Poor Kagome seems a little weak, but I'm glad Inuyasha recognises her usefulness. (by the way she's super cute when she's excited about biology). I did feel that the beginning seems a little asexual in the interactions of the characters, I was begining to wonder if they had hormon surpresants or something, but chapter 15 changed all that. I must say I was a little surprised when Kagome questioned if Inuyasha would rape her though. You might want to think about going back and putting something in about male behaviour leading up to then that would make her suddenly concerned about it. Overall I'm totally loving this and look forward to an update, I've faved it just to be sure I get notified ;) Keep up the hard work.
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: August 10, 2007 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UUUPPPDDDDAAAAATTTEEEEEEEEE thank you.
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Reviewed By: Hiru-chan On: August 03, 2007 05:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story as always! Please update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: Zeldagis On: July 10, 2007 12:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story as always! I love how you portrayed Inuyasha in the latest chapter. And Kagome's getting better and better too. Though other people are saying that the Sango from your story does not resemble her manga conterpart at all, I say the opposite. To me, this Sango is the Sango that has been trained to specific rules since the day she was born, like how the manga Sango was brought up before she met her future team-mates. That Sango was never fully developed in the manga, which I found a little disapponiting. With you trying to develop that unknown side of Sango is quite surpising since it should be challanging. But you portray that Sango very well, which I'm very happy about. Thank you for sharing this story with us, and update whenever you can.
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Reviewed By: Salemir On: July 10, 2007 11:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't quite enjoy reading that Inuyasha had a 'thing' with another girl who wasn't Kagome, but I guess that it was needed for the plot. And you planned the events of the last chapter really good, so who am I to complain. Please don't give up on this story and keep on writing on it, it just keeps getting more and more interessting. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Anon Inu Fan On: June 18, 2007 22:28 EDT
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Great chapter. It is nice to see you post something after so long. I was thinking that you had given up but please don't. I have to say I'm a bit upset over Inu having casual sex with some random girl from the group but then under the circumstances, which you laid out very well by the way, I can understand it. I'm a prude sometimes, well most the time, but anyway it makes my skin crawl to see him with someone other than Kagome. The way you wrote it was nicely done and with taste. The attempted rape thing is also understandable. Anyway, please don't stop it is a great story and if you need help, I'll hook up the car battery while you hold your muse and we'll give im' a good bit of shock theropy. *evil grin* Well maybe that would be a bit much but we all want more. Thanks for the great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 11:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Mmm! I was so happy to get the update notice! I like this chapter very much. You're getting better and better^__^ I love the way you're portraying InuYasha. And it's good that you take your time with the love-arc. It's good that IY accepted the 'offer')) I can't wait for more!
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Kairi_ On: June 18, 2007 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, Kagome's reaction to Kouga's aprooch to then attempted rape is a bit weird. When she followed Inuyasha to the forest to observe the birds she immediatly suspected that Inuyasha would try to take advantage of her, but when she was alone with Kouga, she didn't even think about that actually happening. Then again, when Kouge found her she was still quite flustered after listening to unwanted noises (which turned out to be Inuyasha being 'busy' with his one-stand with Chanda) to actually even think of him attempting to do something like that. Still, she always seems to give some kind of extra trust credit to Kouga than to Inuyasha, even in the actual show/manga...she should give some credit to Inuyasha too though.
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Title: Oh My God
Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: June 18, 2007 10:06 EDT
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Honestly this is an awesome story. I can't wait for your next update. If only they could kill the god damn Terraraptors.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice to see this story again. And that was a very interesting chapter. Hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 01:21 EDT
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That was once again a wonderful chapter. I love the scenes between Kagome and Inuyasha, and feel sorry for them because they can't seem to keep any of their kills. I've been waiting a long time for an update from you, but it was definitely worth it. Although you do wait awhile in between chapters, I really can't complain because my updates are probably about the same time-wise.
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