| "Foundations of Neo Genesis" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: Enchanted_Nymph(not logged in) On: August 02, 2005 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I really love this story but I have a question. Does the political issue you mentioned this story being based on a bit have anything to do with taking care of our enviroment? It's just a guess, but you had mentioned the pollution thing and other stuff like that. Also, are you going to talk about how Inu feels having pretty much gotten someone killed? Again, I love this story and know that you will always have fans for your writing. Please update soon. Ja, kittie. oh, P.s. I understand about not having time b/c I have 2 younger siblings, and I have to watch them, go to school, write papers, take care of the house, and work. So don't think we don't understand when it takes awhile to update. You're better at that than most writers.
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Title: I'm sorry but....
Reviewed By: sabriel7(not logged on) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 02:06 EDT
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I know I just reviewed this story, and I'm terribly sorry to trouble you again. But please, I have a question I was hoping you could answer for me. You see, when I was reading one of your stories, 'Playboy', you made a remark about a story called 'Transcending A Dynasty'. You made me curious and I would love to read this story. However I've searched for both the Author and name of the story on this site and the search pulls up nothing. Has this author pulled down their account and story? If so, I'd appreciate it if you told me. I thought you'd respond better to a review than an email, thus this review. I'm sorry this isn't about your story and feel free to delete this if you'd like. If you have the time could you please answer my question by emailing me at either cheetah_girl7@hotmail.com or kagome_miko@hotmail.com. If it's easier you could leave an answering review on one of my fics like 'Camp Koshin' or 'Bittersweet Farewell'. Thank you very much for listening and I hope you respond.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7(not logged on) On: July 28, 2005 00:58 EDT
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I absolutely LOVE reading this fic! Inuyasha doesn't just bow down to Kagome as easily as some fics would say, and the plot is absolutely spellbinding. PLEASE update I'm dieing to read more!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: kagome12_2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 11:48 EDT
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can u make another lemon oneshot i love yours
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 04:01 EDT
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well that's an experience. not what i would call a good one but one none the less. i feel sorry for the bear if someone was going to die i would have liked it to be Aodh, but readers can't be choosers. i wouldn't have done anything different. i would have tried to hunt. i comment your talant for 'dumbing' down the hunting skill. it was hard to keep in mind that these characters have grown up without the knowledge that people have now. i had to keep reminding myself that they don't know what i know, and therefor do not have the hunting skills that i or someone from this time would have if we were put into that sort of siduation. i was wondering though, if there were fish of some kind in the river. that perhaps they could have started with something a little easier to track, see, and predict. i don't know. it's amazing how hunger can improve your modivation to learn. i also noticed you decided to take a more realistic path with your story instead of choosing to follow the anime where Inuyasha will get a hole ripped through his stomach and be able to recover just fine. i like this fact, it always confused me when tring to figure out how he did that. based on how Inuyasha reacted to what he heard Kagome say once that he will be quick to learn that observation of other preditory animals will greatly increase his success in hunting. i'm glad you up dated. can't wait for more!! up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Davi Man On: May 12, 2005 10:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, great story. Just keep updating!
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Reviewed By: shaid (nlo) On: April 11, 2005 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I simply love this story and I'm very glad you updated.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Lucifer001 On: March 25, 2005 00:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome story, i can honestly say that i havnt run across any like it except with the exception that it reminds me of the movie matrix, but other than that this story has taken my breath away and is impossible to stop reading once ive started... trust me, i tried lol. You have used a wide vocabulary and i have not seen any spelling errors and it's extremly fun to read in the sense i can let my imagination take hold! I cant wait for the next chapters!!!
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Reviewed By: baka onna On: March 17, 2005 18:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I just hate it that you havn't updated in so long, not that I can talk though. Hope you update again soon, such a good story!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: March 09, 2005 19:32 EST
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yay! you've updated!
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 13:44 EST
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*wipes away tear* you updated! Ah...*breaths in the sweet scent of an update* i hope you updated soon. *looks around* thats really all i wanted to say. that and that is seemed inuyasha is not as much an introvert as before.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 02:04 EST
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yay for new chapters! i love this story. can't wait to read more. sorry for the late review. been really bissy. now i must go to bed. i have to get up to catch a plain in 2 hours. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: November 14, 2004 23:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a cool story! really can't wait for the next chapter and i hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 10:32 EST
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you updated!!!!! good chapter! Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: November 02, 2004 23:45 EST
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YAY! You updated! It was an interesting (though short) chapter, I can't wait to read the next one! Next time don't wait so long, the suspense is unbeARABLE! ;p
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