| "Foundations of Neo Genesis" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Title: awesome story
Reviewed By: Irishneko1 On: December 08, 2012 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. It's been a few years since you updated. I understand that the chances of you updating are slim. I hope that you do decide to continue. Good luck with everything! |
Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 16:25 EDT
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I really love this story and would love to see you update it. Are you ever going to continue it? I'll be upset if you don't. This has so much potential. Let me know!! Hopefully you will.
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Reviewed By: bKatty On: January 05, 2010 01:00 EST
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my tears did no good...must i scream? HEY DRAGON, STORY NOW!...please? sorry that was quite harsh. ^_^
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Reviewed By: A Fan Of You On: July 18, 2009 20:14 EDT
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I really enjoyed this series because of its complex theme and more serious approach. Most fanfics that i read lately just seem to add a lot of fluff and make the characters OOC and nonbelievable. I love how the relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha here is a lot alike to the manga (in the beginning of the manga anyway.) But i dont think any one would mind if you progress the relationship a bit more. Anyway i just wanted to say that i was so happy when you added a new chapter...whenever you have time PLEASE continue the series EVERYONE would be grateful!!
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Reviewed By: bKatty On: June 17, 2009 10:47 EDT
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*sniffle* its been a year.
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Reviewed By: Golden_Tuna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 00:00 EDT
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i could beg for more if you'd like? =)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 20:56 EST
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chapter 15 one could take the skeleton with its bits of flesh, break and boil the bones. the marrow is fatty and nutritious-- it would make a decent soup. boil it with the tubers the wart hog thing was eating for more sustenance. ♣ great story!
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Reviewed By: Luffy's girlfriend On: December 21, 2008 18:01 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should surprise Inuyasha and the rest of the group he leads by taking advantage of Kagome's archery. I don't know, I feel that the profession Kagome recieved is giving her too limited potential in this story, perhaps because she couldn't join or help them out due to her restricted biology researches. Perhaps if her bow skills were more efficient in this alternative universe, she could be more useful than a talented biologist in a different world. A scene that could bring this out can be a very difficult prey that's hard to catch up with that not even Inu could deal with it and then it's brought down thanks to her aim with her bow (she could have created it herself out of wood?) straight into its eye or its forehead. And down it goes. Maybe this would also help this very cynical Inuyasha to look at her in a different light too. *hint hint* Oh, and I agree with many commentators around here, death to Chanda. She's not that useful in the battlefield and.. well, what's the female version of a douche? Ah yes, a Sakura Haruno. There's already one too many of those out there. Spare us one Emerald, please. :( *sorry, had to fix typo.
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Reviewed By: Luffy's girlfriend On: December 21, 2008 17:59 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should surprise Inuyasha and the rest of the group he leads by taking advantage of Kagome's archery. I don't know, I feel that the profession Kagome recieved is giving her too limited potential in this story, perhaps because she couldn't join or help them out due to her restricted biology researches. Perhaps if her bow skills were more efficient in this alternative universe, she could be more useful than a talented biologist in a different world. A scene that could bring this out can be a very difficult prey that's hard to catch up with that not even Inu could deal with it and then it's brought down thanks to her aim with her bow (she could have created it herself out of wood?) straight into its eye or its forehead. And down it goes. Maybe this would also help this very cynical Inuyasha to look at her in a different light too. *hint hint* Oh, and I agree with many commentators around here, death to Chanda. She's not that useful in the battlefield and.. well, what's the female version of a douche? Ah yes, a Sakura Haruno. There's already one too many of those out there. Spare us one Emerald, please. :
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Reviewed By: Harr On: December 21, 2008 17:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! The suspence is bothering me every day! Also, merry Christmas!
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Reviewed By: HentaiSoulja Shoujo On: September 28, 2008 12:33 EDT
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Oh thank you thank you thank you I love all of your stories and was thinking that you were not going to update but you proved me wron and normally I would hate that but... hmm mut be a new moon tonight
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 21:41 EDT
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Oh please, please! Be merciful and tell us more! Also I just read the whole thing over again; getting a bit desperate here.
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Reviewed By: inu16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon I really like it so far. By the way are kagome and inuyasha going to become a couple?
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Reviewed By: Treyzen On: July 14, 2008 06:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I hope Chanda will kick the bucket soon. She's so friggin' annoying.
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Reviewed By: KowaiiMusume [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 13:19 EDT
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So happy to see you update. I love this story. Thanks for the great chapter. I look forward to more.
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