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Reviewed By: fox3290 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i got one question is the forest gay? but then again it seems it is ok please write more
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Title: inu_obsessed_chic27(nsi)
Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 10:59 CDT
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Damn dat was good! I probly haven't reviewed before even though I should have... ehehehehehe! I luv dis fic! This is like the only crossover I like on mm.org, your is really really good, just like all you other fics!
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: June 27, 2004 21:48 CDT
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He seems confused with himself. It always good when you can mess with a character's head. I liked it. You are doing great so far without your muse. Just keeping doing what you are doing and before you know it, you'll be writing chapters without the use of a muse. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work. Love the story so far.
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Reviewed By: blood bunny On: June 25, 2004 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hm.... ok... I'll forgive you... BUT you have to update soon! MAHAHAHAHAhahahahahaah!
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Reviewed By: L-K On: June 25, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUTEEE! Updateez! Please.. =]
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Title: hey hey
Reviewed By: slywolf9 not logged in On: June 25, 2004 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
every thing up there is a ten okay Mija? Good job, its good to know how Hiei finally feels. Thanks for updating so soon!!! I caint wait for the next update ok? Plz do so asap, cause i just LOOOOVE your stories! Lol, and you well, id LOVE to give you my muse, but i need her, you can borrow some of her though...lol. if you want. Well, update as soon as you can okay? thanks for making such a great story...lol. till laters, much l;ove and cookies from, Sly
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Reviewed By: Hiei+Kagome On: June 25, 2004 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!This is great!!Please write more very soon!If you need any help you can ask me at ashmo110@hotmail.com K.Really love your story!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 25, 2004 11:23 CDT
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Great Chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: maika On: June 25, 2004 11:15 CDT
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itz aight mija, coz itz still goood even though you don't have your muse. hehehe u knoe wen i c the alert in ma mail i'm like "yes!!!!!" update soon aight if u can. byez!!
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Reviewed By: Sanura (not signed in) On: June 25, 2004 09:54 CDT
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ok, let me just say this, first of all, the last 2 chapters were nicely done. You said your muse was gone? Well, just don't force the chapters to come out, try watching the shows, or listening to the music from the series, that usually helps me to get my muse back when I can't think of a thing to put in my fanfics, it helps to give you ideas, and prevents the characters from becoming OOC.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 25, 2004 09:32 CDT
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.... well at least Hiei's o longer in demon mode...
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Title: hey!!!
Reviewed By: Lady Death (not signed in) On: June 25, 2004 09:28 CDT
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hey girl!!! Write more everybody loves and likes this story most so write more God damnit!!!! NOW!! WRITE MORE!! NOW!!!!! NOWNOWNOW!!! please...luve ya! bye!
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Reviewed By: jenipenny On: June 25, 2004 09:06 CDT
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That was so danm good!!Thanx 4 updating!!!
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 08:32 CDT
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dont worry im still paitent!!! sry i didnt review the last chapter and this one right away i had sum email problems thats to long to explain. so great chapters cant wait til the next one!!!
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Reviewed By: ello girl On: June 23, 2004 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update peaz
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