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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I love this story! I so want Hiei and Kagome to get together soon! Why did you not bring them together when you could?
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Title: New Mission
Reviewed By: Arella Hallo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sure he doesn't want her. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 20:48 CDT
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HIEI RULES!!! *drool* He as a bad a$$ aditude and he's sexy doing it 2. Anyways I SOO happy you updated. I just ate 'bout 1/2lbs. of sugar and Im hyper. Oh yah! This chapper was excellent 'cause it talk about how Hiei feels about what happened andkeeps him in charature 2. Cant wait 4 next update. If your muse is fighting you I find it best 2 thregthing(sp) it w/ a cat or kitten. ttfn
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Reviewed By: akuma_river *not signed in* On: October 04, 2004 20:11 CDT
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coolsa.
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Title: none
Reviewed By: GUERRO On: October 04, 2004 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really liked it update as soon as possible
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Title: none
Reviewed By: guerro On: October 04, 2004 19:20 CDT
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Reviewed By: BadgerBadgerBadger On: October 04, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 04, 2004 17:04 CDT
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*nods* a liar alright.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (not signed in) On: October 04, 2004 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was short, but at least it was something! just be glad about that!!! great chapter!!! cant wait til the next chappy!!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 06:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! So Excitingness! I should really takes cues from you. I love this chapter, even if it is a little short, that's okay b/c its filled w/ Hiei goodness. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how you portrayed Hiei in this chapter...interesting and subtle differences than most ppl use and yet still in character. Kudos! I can't wait for more! Until Next Time...Scottishfae
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 22:44 CDT
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Thanks for updating! I liked seeing Hiei's thought processes in this chapter. Thanks for not having him immediately "fall in love" with Kagome, like so many other authors would be tempted to do. His reluctant protectiveness was a nice touch. Good luck with your writer's block. I'm going through the same thing right now, so I can empathize. I figure it's better to wait until you can get a good chapter out, rather than present your readers with something subpar (not that this chapter was bad or anything; it was quite good, if a little on the short side.) I look forward to your updates, as always! YAY HIEI! *waves pompoms*
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 22:41 CDT
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i read a one shot lemon you wrote a wile back and it seems thet, that one shot could be an epolugue of sorts, you know, "friend or foe"
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(not signed in) On: September 29, 2004 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm totaly hooked on this story. I love the plot and I love Hiei/Kagome parings. SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I can't wait to see what happens. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: zrofyre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, Yay! this fic just rocks my world! I love it and am obsessed, and can't wait to read more. I know, I know: the muse is AWOL. I'm content enough with the ideas forming in my own mind. I just want you to know that this fic is great, is inspiring me to write again ( yeah, my muse took a big break also ), and that there is NO pressure. I know, I know, everyone probably says that, but we, your readers, are a patient enough group, and willing to wait for the muse to get over it's hissy fit. Hiei's reactions and struggles are awesome! I love the mating ritual you take them through! It so shows the basic instincts that overrule him in his full demon form. I also love the fact that you make Inuyasha out to be a good guy. Yeah, he has his temper, but he's a rational being with feelings, motivations, and good sound reasoning behind him. Too often I read stories that have him just being a comedy relief bit, or the overreactional, overemotional bastard. You make him out to be a char I can enjoy and appreciate. So I think I am done spilling effervescant praise, and I will leave off with this: Don't worry about rushing a new chap out, our imaginations will supply enough to get us by. (You've sparked all sorts of good ideas!) C-ya's, huggles, Zrofyre
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