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Reviewed By: evlmnkyslvenmyarvnt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i didnt notice any bad grammer and i really enjoy it hope the nexFont Colort chappter comes up soon
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeeeee! Loves it, hehehehe. This story came recommended by Somnambulicious and since her stories are fabulous I thought that this one would be too... and it was!! hehehe Veeeeeeeery interesting. I cannot wait to see how things will progress between Kagome/Inuyasha and Kagome/Hiei. (PS-- how do you prounouce that name? lol Never seen the yu-yu show)Keep up the great work-- hope to read more from you soon! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: rini-chan On: September 26, 2004 13:16 CDT
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*gives author her favorite flame thrower* You can use this to encourage your muse if you want.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! please update soon! I want hiei and kagome to get to gether!
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Reviewed By: Inu_chick24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story very much and hope you will update your story very soon. I also volunteer my services as a beta reader if you need one.
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Reviewed By: Doggy Ears On: September 22, 2004 06:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon please please please please please please!!!!!!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 *n.s.i.* On: September 11, 2004 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you! whats awol mean? i forgot...ack. well....poor Kags. Glad her an Yash are so comfy wit e/o tho. thats always good cause...ya. nvm that, lol. anywho, your doin graet...sooo...i hope you update! love n support n all my prayers...-Sly ~^-^~
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 09, 2004 19:21 CDT
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oh, HIei's gonna get an earful....
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Reviewed By: Kit ^..^ On: September 09, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm... yeah Im pretty sure Kouga is gonna try to mate w/ her, right? but what about Sessho & Naraku? Is Hiei gonna show up in the past & save Kagome? PLEASE update ASAP, the anticipation is killing me
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 05:25 CDT
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Ummm, how is letting the mark wear off going to prevent other demons from trying to mate Kagome in the 6 months it lasts? I figured Inu would say, "Well, uh, you could accept me."
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 00:46 CDT
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So Kouga, and Inu may go after her. What about Sess and Naraku. They both love challenges and hate when someone upstarts them. So Kagome's life is going to get a bit more hectic isn't it? cools.
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 23:40 CDT
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eeekk well you just made a prequel to friend or foe you do realise that dont you
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! YAY! This has been a very emotionally and physically exhausting week for me so far and I still have two more days to go until the weekend (and I do plan to party hard as my reward) but I can't tell you how happy I was that I got to read your update. I'm almost at tears just b/c I have something that has released a little of the stress on me! So thanks so much! Okay now on to actually reviewing your fic: I love how you have Inu's and Kag's relationship. It's very different than how most people do it and it's just awesome. You can really tell there is a bond between the two even if it isn't anything beyond friendship. So kudos there. I didn't even think about the Inari still being out there...duh duh duuuuuuuuh! I'm excited to see who else will be out there...will Youko be attracted to her?! OOoooooo! I can't wait for the next update and I sooo want to see some more deliciously scrumptious Hiei! It's just not a story w/o his sexyness! I am very jealous of you if you can write such good chapters w/o your muse. Mine hates me, like my car, and refuses to work, again...like me car. Oh well. Hurricane Frances has finally passed us (now we have to worry about Hurricane Ivan) and so hopefully I'll be able to do some more writing on my own fics (w/o the risk of power outages) but I do have 3 papers due within the next 2 weeks and those take number one priority. Hopefully I'll start posting my newest Mir/Kag fic soon. But Until Next Time...GREAT JOB Sfae.
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Reviewed By: badassreviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 22:06 CDT
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yay!! That was great!!! Love it! I so hope Hiei and Kag see eachother soon.
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Reviewed By: rachelw@cyberback.com On: August 30, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im glad you decided to finally update. I read Scottishfae's story and she mentions the deal the two of you made. :) great, I love her stories also. Now, maybe both of them will be updated. Thanks again for the wonderful update and I hope to read more soon.
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