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Reviewed By: maggiemaynot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 04:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found this wonderful story. Hope you update soon. "Power of Love" sounds like maybe a miracle for Hope Destiny Kaiba...I hope. Will there be a sequel, a y/yy focused one? Strikes me that Yami could put a WHOLE 'NUTHER LEVEL to mood swinging b*. Oooh...and what do his shadow powers do to/for the babe(s)?
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Reviewed By: anubiset(to lazy to log in) On: October 26, 2004 19:58 CDT
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Loved it. Losing the little girl was sad. But the boys sound beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 23:18 CDT
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Awww, how sweet... I feel bad for Hope though, but perhaps someday they can have a daughter... maybe adopt? It's an idea anyway. It's beautiful to see those two boys born... but they were huge! Jou must have lost his lap by the end of his first trimester... I know with only one boy at a time for me (both over 8 1/2 lbs)I lost my lap at the end of the second trimester, and had nearly forgotten what my feet looked like! Now I can't wait to see how Pharoh does with his pregnancy! Please update soon, this should be good!
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Reviewed By: Yukiko Angel not logged On: October 25, 2004 20:39 CDT
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awww, it is kinda sad for her to died but i like it in a way, nothing can always be happy, ne ? It's a really good story but I see the end comming soon *sight* I hope you will write more and I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if it will be a boy or a girl that Yami will have :P
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Title: Can't Wait For the next one.
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 20:13 CDT
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Cant wait for the next one. Keep em coming. That ws sad that they lost the girl but I like how you added that Yami hair thing it broke the tension really well.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 18:35 CDT
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... Awww! Lovely ending there, and I will definitely be waiting for the next part. ^^
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Title: Mmm Yugi
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 00:53 CDT
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Mmm Yugi thats all I got to say. hehe
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 23:36 CDT
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No, a cliffie! They made up, how sweet... oh, and Yugi becoming a father and Yami the mother... so to speak... seems to have put a new twist on their sex relationship. They don't seem to mind though! LOL Please update soon, I can't wait to see what Seto does! I'm so happy he accepted the news of the third so easily... Now he'd better pay better attention to Joey! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 21:02 CDT
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...Ya know, I'm so tempted to try some of the combinations in this fic. OOoh, shiny dragons! Shiny! ;;^^ Like Seto's reaction. Mmmmm, very nice lemon. Very, very nice. And I like the names you chose too! And...erm... I'm running out of things to praise! Just know that I loved it.
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 19:34 CDT
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I love this, can`t wait for more. Wonder how many Yami will have? You don`t have to tell, just don`t stop writing. You are really good. And so is the story. Thanks for writing this.
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Reviewed By: Yukiko_Angel(notlogged) On: October 15, 2004 19:19 CDT
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this is good you know ? I hope. And I can't wait for the next one ^^ (I'm bad reviewing)
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Reviewed By: Invader Pel On: October 15, 2004 01:01 CDT
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Tylenol? I heard pregnant women take baby aspirin when they're pregnant. (At least my mom did) PS: At 9 months, it's not early labor. He's carried those babies to term, so I don't think they're in any danger... well, aside from the usual things that happen during high risk pregnancies regarding multiples (ex: triplets, quads, quints, ect...), but even when carrying triplets to term, they tend to do better than the 80% that come early. (Statistically, it's a good thing that Jouno is at 9 months with triplets. He'll probably have fully developed babies with little problems because of that.)
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Reviewed By: Zi Zi Taps On: October 15, 2004 00:50 CDT
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Triplets? Whoo... I'm pretty sure though that Jouno would have healthy babies if he gave birth at 9 months. (A baby only develops for 9 months yanno.)
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Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 00:39 CDT
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Gack! >< Three! That's how many I watch on a normal basis! Me hopes they'll be okay. I hope Seto gets better birthday presents than I did... I got a few cards and no cake. The one good thing I got was some Middle Eastern perfume oil from my oldest brother. He always did have good taste... ^__^ And as for those wierd foods, my sister in law put sliced pickles on her bagel with cream cheese the other morning. And I don't even /want/ to remember what she put on her couscous the other night... *shudder* Well, ta for now, and squeeze as many in as possible before the end of this one, and then ... *looks both ways* ONWARDS! ^_^;;; Later, RedFox
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Th... thr... *holds up three fingers* This many!? Good god. The Puppy is having a litter! Oooo I hope Yugi gets a picture of his face when he finds out! I can't wait for that! Good job with Seto's internal monologue. I really liked that. Ohhh and Yami's comment about weird creations that can be written off as cravings. My friend is going through that too. Her worst time is 2 am. Loved it!
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