| "Starting Over" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: simple-memories [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You were only half correct with your explanation of the "I am" in Japanese. Actually, 'Boku wa' is the male form of I am. 'Watashi wa' is the more generic form of I am, and can be used by anyone, where as 'Atashi wa' is the more feminine version. Good job with the story. Any you have done very well with your spelling of romajii.
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Title: Starting Over
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Update when you can. Can't wait to see what happened to Kagome and if Hiei and Kagome get together. WHo stole Hiei's soul, like Naraku maybe.
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Title: Starting Over
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i can't belive you! it was getting so good, but you have to stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????? plz right more!!!!! omg!!!!!!!! P.S. good choice on the pairing; hiei/kagome
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Title: write more now.
Reviewed By: Jaganshi no megami On: August 12, 2005 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stroy has just ended the long cruse on the NRH people in Texas. For I shall not send my plage(spell? thats right even a megami has problems spelling)of acid rain, horny toads,(no really they ARE horny and there toads)and men to have pms.Well I'll still give men pms if you write more, and e-mail me at Sindrile@yahoo.com. Jah-ne!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 16:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
i am so tempted to flame you but that would be wrong. it's your computers fault *she says she breaks a pencil*
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 16:05 CDT
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that that was mean evil flamer! wil you bring hiei ack ? i really like your story... -.-u that makes me sound like a suck up dosen't it....hmmmm
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 03:38 CDT
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thiers a new view an mr.pacifier heheh i like it
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update again soon. Can't wait to see what happens to Kagome.
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Title: Starting Over
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 23:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: -_-,
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: April 26, 2005 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness, your fic is just so, so, Gah! i don't know what to say other than i love it. but i am sooooo sad. PLEASE update soon as you can cause i really like this fic... PLEASE make it work out for hiei and kag... ok ok i know that even if a begged and pleaded for ever and a day it wouldn't matter because the choice is yours but... PLEASE ;;;sad puppy eyes;;; OK, I'm done now, keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is getting really really really good ... and i hope you continue to keep up the good work and update soon
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 19:56 CST
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rrrrg, ok I luv the fic and all, but I hate cliffies. You sound like me when I don't get reviews *grumble* which is almost all the time *ungrumble* At least you haven't stooped to bribing like I have to. Ok, well try to update again soon. If you don't, you'll get no praise, just major flames that will burn your marsmallows to a crisp the instant they touch the flame. but so long as you update before summer vacation, you don't have to worry about that. by the way, the flames will come from the darkside of Kuramas Gurl and she's a force to be reconed with. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Title: Starting Over
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 22:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: angellite23
Reviewed By: angellite23 On: March 08, 2005 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading Kagome/Hiei fics and this is one of the best I have read.
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