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Reviewed By: Vic_18 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 19:06 CST
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This is a great fic, your second right? Anyway for that whole Kagome turning kind thing...its an ok idea...i guess. But if you do then how about her kind of opening up to hiei first. That way the rest can see that some type of relationship is starting to develope between them. Well thats my suggestion and I liked how you pulled off that scene last chapter, many wouldnt be able to make such a good connection between them, and you did it pretty fast too. Well I\'m gonna go before i start to confuse myself. Update soon, you have fans!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 07:19 CST
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Title: taeniaea
Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 06:49 CST
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I like it UPDATE SOON!!! ps make Kagome kind again!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 15:55 CST
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 20:57 CST
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continue! plz! update soon! i like the idea of kicking Kuwabaka out of the story! or tournement! plz update really soon!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel special! I got to chose the paring! Happy for me! Yes, you spelled everything right but hiei. hiei is spelled hiei. I know... I used to get it wrong too. ::blushing:: Oh well. And his attack thing is called 'dragon of the darkness flame' If you need any more help with anything you can email me at Bloodbunny49@hotmail.com I would be happy to help with anything that you need help with! Please update soon! I love your story! And I want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you keep SPELLING HIEI'S NAME WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S H-I-E-I HIEI GOT IT!!!!!!!!!!!!GOOD BUT A SIDE FROM THAT I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR ^__^ PLZ UPDATE SOON Ja-ne!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 12:03 CST
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon! I want to know what happens next and can you please make this a Hiei/Kagome?
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 10:57 CST
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im goin crazy! i cant see my reviews without writing one! help me!
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Title: GREAT!!
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden *Not Signed in* [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 03:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!! I LOVED IT!!! OH AND YOU WERE RIGHT IT IS SHI NO MEGAMI!!! NE WAY KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK AND UPDATE AGAIN ASAP!!!YOur writting style and idea's are great!!!JA NE!!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 16:41 CST
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well my computer is being stupid so i think if anyone knows how to make it so i can read my reviews without writing one i would love to know ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 09:13 CST
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this is SO AWSOME!!! OMG I LOVE IT! I'm sooooo hooked i really really really wanna read more! i cant wait for the next chappie!! UPDATE SOON!!! =D
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Reviewed By: Starry Dragon Knights [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 08:07 CST
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Great job! I'm pretty upset though b/c barely anyone has updated your story! Starry Dragon Knights
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Title: I love it!!
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome!!! I love it so much!!! Keep up the good work!! I cant wait to read more!!!Ya got me hooked!!!!this was writing so wondefully!!!
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