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| "Starting Over" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] | | Pages (15): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 › » ] | Title: Starting Over
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 23:17 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: Reiya Moon not loged in On: March 01, 2005 14:41 CST
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ok I'll wait fluffy fan but please hurry
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though I frankly skipped over the lemons, because that's not my thing, I have to say I was very impressed by the quality of the work; there were some sketchy parts, admittedly, but as a whole your writing style and the fluidity of your story were far above what I usually find on this site. I adore a very good Inu-Yasha, Yu Yu Hakusho story, but so many are, well, horrible. It was with great pleasure I found yours.
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 15:39 CST
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Update Soon!!! PLEASE!!!!
| Title: Starting Over
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 15, 2004 14:03 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN. THANKS LUV YA.
| Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 21:55 CDT
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Oh my Kami-sama! I just read your fanfic and I have to say, it's a lot better than I first thought. You have to update soon, I'm totally hooked. Oh, and one small thing, I noticed a small spelling mistake on two of the character's names that apparently some people failed to mention to you, Sota is supposed to be Souta (I know in the English dubbed version it's spelled Sota, don't know why, but for some reason they decided to leave out the "u", it's the same way with Kouga, English dub = Koga), and Yuske is supposed to be Yusuke. But don't worry about the small mistake on the names, I've seen it plenty of times. But other than those two minor things, very nice so far. I'm looking forward to reading more.
| Reviewed By: Karama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the fic. BUT, YOU ARE AN EVIL AUTHOR -`_`-
| Reviewed By: Kristie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 22:01 CDT
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OMG great story so far you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles
| Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story please update soon!!
| Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: May 18, 2004 23:23 CDT
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even though i still love your fic ~~*~~*EMERALD-
| Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: May 18, 2004 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..................................i cant believe it. u leave us hanging for weeks, and u get hooked on this new show that ive heard about but not been able 2 find, and now u wont b writing as much as u promised u would. im dissapointed.i have nothing more 2 say 2 u. when u update, then i'll CONSIDER talking 2 u again. umtil then, say bye 2 a great loyal fan of fanfiction. ja ~~*~~*EMERALD-
| Reviewed By: foxylilraven On: May 13, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok can i please be an OC, but not on a fighting team, just a Female Shadow Kitsune, named Kitto(Kit), dragged to the dark tournoment along with her twin sister(Neko, by their family and she falls in love with Souta and vicea versa. any way Markings. Fur-Kitto(black w/blood red tipps at ears,tail and hair)Neko(black w/vibrent blue tipps at the same places as Kitto) Eyes-Silver(kitto)Rubie(Neko) Attacks/special abilities-perfict stealth in shadows,Fire, illusions(kitto)Perfict sealth in shadows,illusions,lightning(neko) Kitto's personality- punk that strives for perfiction, loves to sing, under a bitchy surface is an unsucure sweet 14 year old, faverate band is Evenesance, loial to all of her friends. Neko's personality-an allof prepy 14 year old whoms a bitch to the core, basicly the exact opptsite of her twin except when it comes to grades, a cats personality, always gets the attention( guess who made Kitto so innsucure), self sentered, favrate band-lillix. Kitto's faverate outfit- a tight black half top with a message saying "once upon a time i hit a boy" in red, one wrist adornned with red and black fuck bracelets, the other a wrist band with a flame on it, a black pleather mini-skirt, fishnet stockings, and knee high black leather boots, hair that is usually hanging at her mid back up in a pony tail, her ears on top of her head pearsred 5 times, red and black belly button ring, black choker/coller with red spikes no makeup. Neko's outfit- tight blue jeans, baby blue tube top, no pearsings, whight stelleto high hells...err heels, hair to mid back, way too mutch makeup. Kitto's prized possion- an orphened white female fox(the animal not youkai) named Knu(silk). Neko's prized possotion-looks. Hobbies-has a band called the Shikon Kitsunes( four soul foxes)(Kitto), shopping(Neko) Kitto's weapons- sais(think electra fron daredevel) Nekos weapons-none ok thats all BTW- keykeo is sitll alive and stole hiei's soul and the gang find a way to get their kagome back right. l8r
| Reviewed By: Rhexi-san(not signed in) On: May 05, 2004 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O im such an idiot...i've been readin dat fic for sometime now, n ddnt even realize it wuz u until i read ur latest comment on my Jewels story... ack!!! *thumps head* im such an imbecile!!!! anyhow, i really lyk ur story. (reali, reali) sry for not ever commenting--im as lazy as a person culd b so... nehoozles, update soon, ne?
| Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:59 CDT
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ok well it's suppose to say it's been a while jackie... it wouldn't work afetr that.
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