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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 01:16 CDT
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Reviewed By: Gretchen's Kitchen On: April 08, 2004 01:12 CDT
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Swiftly let the pain abate/ But yet the sorrow takes her wait/ and low and deep the truamatic birth/ coarses through to its home/ and forever see his face inside/ he is never too far gone/ I am sorry to hear about your father... take as long as you need. I don't understand what you are going through, I wish that no one had to exsperience such pain. May whatever god you believe in watch over you and know that people will always care, even if it is only one or two people. In times like these it is best to deal with it one step at a time and know that no matter what happens, the people we love never fade away, they never truly die in the sense we fear they do. the pain in your heart is a reminder that you loved him and that he loved you. He watches from beyond somewhere, whether a veil or a door or just different realm. He knows what you feel and in time the pain will grow to a trickle. I am sorry, my heart goes out to you. It may not ever be the same, nothing ever is, change is evitable, death is not the end, just another tunnel. But you will find peace if you seek it. Do not block out other people, do not exspect the pain to evergo away fully, don't exspect to find life is ever the same. I am not meaning to tell you that your life will never be as full as it once was, because I may becoming off unoptimistic. I am just offering what comfort and advice i myself have come to understand. through this new doors open, through this you will become more. And when you see your father in the memories you shared, the places you have been, the gifts you gave eachother and in your face, you will realize that he never left, he just had to continue on. It was his time, and time is forever, we just run out of it in one place and move on. Move on, but carry the memories, carry the feeling that he watches and loves you. remember he is always with you, he lives in you... In every breath know that through you he lives daciathevampiricmutant@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 01:02 CDT
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Title: Im so sorry
Reviewed By: Diaa On: April 08, 2004 01:00 CDT
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I am sorry to hear that your father died. I was shocked when I read it, so very sudden. I do not know you and so cannot give you any solid condolanced, but I can offer the fact that I hope you find peace. I have never lost any one so I am at a loss for words, which in my case can be a strange and unwelcomed thing. I know that it hurt when I lost my grandmother this summer, and it took a short time to come to terms with it because she had been sick forever it seemed. But people never truly get over something, they miss it or try to fool themselves and block it away. I hope severly that you do not find yourself ever forgetting the pain, it means they are in your heart and that you loved them. I hope truly that the pain deminishes and the good things come to light, and maybe the bad things as well, for it gives the good things definition. my deepest sympathies Dianathevampiricmutant@yahoo.com Hope you feel better... Ps I like your story...
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 22:48 CDT
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Reviewed By: kiwi93089 just not logged in On: April 07, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey we can wait for updates you take as much time as you need! love your stories peace kiwi
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Reviewed By: Jelly [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA SORRY TO 4 WHAT HAPEND, MY HARTS WITH YOU, AND TACK AS LONG AS YOU WAN'T WITH THAT NEXT CHAPTER. O ITS NOT LIKE i DON'T LIKE ITS ITS jEST THAT AFTER WHAT HAPEND YOUR GOING TO NEED ALL THE TIME YOU CAN GET ^.^
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 13:32 CDT
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Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 10:22 CDT
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I'm sorry that i didnt do this before. I'am soooo sorry about what happenned I went thuogh it to my dad died a few years ago. I hope that you can find cloeser soon and that you have a strong fondation of fiernds and family to help you though this. all my LOVE MidNight-Kitsune Ja-ne!
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Reviewed By: Death Walker On: April 07, 2004 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay Just Read Your Updates Sorry to hear About Your loss Our Hearts go out to You!! Just take every thing one step at a time! I Know were you are comming from! I lost My mom and dad in 9-11 Be strong and keep yourhead held high! Losts of Love
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 01:32 CDT
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Reviewed By: PersonaJXT [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just started reading this fic and just wanted to answer the question u had about the megami no shi. its megami no shi shi no megami would mean death of goddess..... which is kinda wrong heh....
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 21:32 CDT
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Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 21:32 CDT
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I am sorry for your loss. I hope your father's soul finds rest.
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 21:02 CDT
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