| "Starting Over" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 22:27 CST
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Title: heres the info on her
Reviewed By: Reiya Moon On: March 22, 2004 21:57 CST
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Name: Kiama Samoyi Discription: I have long deep amber colored hair, with deep forest green eyes along with 2 black fuzzy doggy ears with 2 looped earings on each a tail that matches my hair and it has a black tip 3 moon on my forehead 2 cresent 1 on the outside then a nother inside the spot that's left and a whole moon in the space that leaves. Attacks:I'm a fire elemental and can use any fire attack. Stranths:Fire martial arts. Weaknesses: My childlike inosence,my Couriosity, my nieave'ativity, my loyalaty to my friends and the greatest of all.....food. Personalty: I love to watch the suffering of others, Happy go lucky attude mixed with what we consider blonde behaver and is veary homicidal
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 15:31 CST
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: March 22, 2004 08:35 CST
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AHHH! HIEI, NOOOO! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 07:12 CST
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Reviewed By: Reiya Moon On: March 21, 2004 23:37 CST
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I love it you got my personalty right thats so cool but what happened to Hiei is he hurt will he live will he grow cucombers out of his nose *hides bag of sugar behind back* will I get further with shippo in the next chapter will he let his gard down and tell me his real name hopefuly all this and more will be answered in the next chapterplease update soon
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 21:54 CST
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Reviewed By: L_ifless_K_anna On: March 21, 2004 20:39 CST
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o.O iono why but it doesnt let me use my nickname so i puted lines under hehe .. newayz umm i luv this stori! please update it ^.^ omigosh what happened to Hiei tho? did he die? nooo lolz. update please. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PUT UP A NOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!*holds knife to flufflyfan's neck* AND HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 19:20 CST
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! You can't leave off there! I want to know what happens next! You're so mean!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 10:47 CST
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Reviewed By: Reiya Moon On: March 20, 2004 10:46 CST
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hey I love your fan fic can you hook me up with shippo please if you can put me in the fic as an oppnet on the Togoro team my name is Reiya Moon I'm a Kitsune the same hight as Youko but I have pink hair ending in black and I have a black star in the middle of my forehead and two black fox ears on top of my head,I also have a tail as long as Sesshoumaru thats pink and ends in a black tip I carry around a sword that has both the powers of Tensege and Tetsaiga my strangths are the envitoment around me I'm an elemental and can use almost every atack and love to change into my Fox form and rip my oppnets apart and then melt there remains into a puddle on the floor my weakness is that once I find a friend I'll do almost anything for them. if you can put me it the fan fic please E-mail me at Ninetailstoo@aol.com
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 10:37 CST
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Reviewed By: Kami-Sama On: March 20, 2004 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, I'm all reading it, cool enough. Then I think to myself, wait...did a canadian write this? Then I'm thinking that Jackie might be a communist that lives in Canada...THEN I saw the lemon parts and I'm all "Whoa...only an american would write that kinda stuff" So i guess i'm a little torn as to what Jackie could be trying to convey in this story, perhaps a plee to end world hunger and to fight for freedom in Haiti, or to topple Bill Gate's empire and rape his children until they die. It is quite confusing...but good, quite good...
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