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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 18:48 CST
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WAHOOO!! I love this story and what a nice way to end it. And the talk, sally was trying to give Heero really cracked me up. thanks again.
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Reviewed By: Demien [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... What have you done to me Maldie-dear? Do you call this a comedy? Heero reading Reelena's romance books? No, baby, no comedy, it was pure horror!! And the lil' masochist that I am absolutely loved it!! At first, I was more than sure that Relena wanted Heero for herself, I am not sure that it was intended, perhaps I am just a hopeless Relena's hater... I loved the part when 5xRP is revieled. I read the whole fic again and everything made sense that way.. Especially the "You sure that you are not mad at him? Are you?.." part is hilarious. Poor Wufei... The responses to the "Are you gay" questions were priceless as well!! And Heero's comments... Gotta love his ignorant prospect!! ^^ The 1x2 talk at the cafe was one of the highlights as well, full of your poisonously sweet subtle tads of humor... Poor waitress! "Heero thought about Quatre, the Zero system and his question, then went and talked to Trowa instead." If I was to quote every part that made me laugh, smirk or snicker I would need an encyclopedia -but this one nearly killed me..! About Daniels... He looked so nice at first!! I think that it was a big deal Heero's fault, how can he be that naove??? And hurt my beloved Duo-chan... After a certain point -chap 6 I think?- Heero made me that frustrated -nobody can be that stupid!!! 2x3? Is he insane?- that I swore to stop reading it! Yeah, after every sigle chappie I promised never to read it again... The Dorothy part was... I don't think I can say anything really... Quatre's interogation gains top marks *huge grin* Heero's lists... The incident at th mall was cruel... Sad... Frustrating... And then angst... And not just a touch of it!! And then I downright hated Daniels. And heero thought that Duo was crying for it... After that, the revalation. Savoured every sec of it. I don't care how hard it was, served him right I say! And then you tormented them some more!! And some more!! The Sally's Talk cracked me down (note: I painfully discovered that is highly dangerous to hold fragile items when reading this part. Especially if they can't be replaced) At long last we were blessed with sweet sapp, and just when I dared to think that everything would end in the lemon land, everything turns once more upside down -though not in the usual evil angsty way... All in all, I need more!! Plus, a whiteboard demands compensation... ;) P.S Have I mentioned lately how much I really really love you? *sinister look* Will you marry me? *smiles sweetly* Or at least reward me with another Arrangement? -after all it was such a nice, lengthy review...- Or Beautiful Symmetries? *sporks*
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Reviewed By: Turtle_fire On: March 27, 2004 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so SWEET and touching! Too bad the story has ended now. It is entertaining to see how clueless Heero was. The story is funny as hell from beginning to the end. Give us more!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 14:17 CST
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OK, chalk this one up as another fantastic fic from you, ok Kiddo? I just loved how naive Heero was, although he just knew he had all the answers to his friends' "problems." I'm glad he didn't have any problem with "I love you" once it was out on the table. I could almost hear him rambling and mumbling through the different pairings as Duo and Wufei revealed them! The explanation about why the other pilots moved into the house choked me up. (I really need to stop being such a wuss!) Loved it, loved it, loved it!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: March 27, 2004 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO! ENCORE! ENCORE! This fic was awesome. I wish you could write an epilogue or better yet a continuation of this fic. It was funny, well writen, had a heart twisting plot and best of all a happy ending.
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Reviewed By: Freak_on_a_Leash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aiya!!! It's over? Aww foo but by the bob's I love it sooo much.....I'm being weird...I gotta hurry with this though I got a show coming on but I love it!(Already know that don't cha?) Hehehe but sad to see it end but I shall love to continue reading this but I gotta go..keep up the great work and Ciao till next time!
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just absolutely LOVED this fic!! Every day I'd go hit the gw-fan ML (where I'm much to shy to actually say anything...hence the review here!) just to look for the next installment! It's been a fun ride, and I'm really sorry to see it end!! I loved your characterization of Heero, so sweetly clueless! And you really shocked me with this last chapter, that while he was trying to make everyone else happy, they were all there for HIM to make his life easier!! What a wonderful circle of friends!! Just truly a wonderful story!! Again, sad to see it end!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Wing On: March 26, 2004 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything's soon coming to a close--so exciting! Gosh, this cliffhanger has to one of your most killer yet...aaaagh! The next chapter coming tomorrow can't seem to come soon enough...!!!
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Reviewed By: Mama jen On: March 26, 2004 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God! This story is awesome. It is also a totally original idea which is even better. Keep up the great work and thank you so much for updating frequently! You are wonderful!!
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: March 26, 2004 13:18 CST
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I can't to see what is going to happen next.
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Title: WAHOO sock'im one for me!
Reviewed By: pris On: March 26, 2004 12:49 CST
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::smiles evily- sneeks up quietly and throws piñata up in the air and it breaks open raining confetti and butterscotch candies on Maldoror:: Celebrate!! another chapter!! thanks maldoror. What a story, and Daniels got what he deserved.
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Title: Exxxxxxcellent!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm torn, just torn. Between eternal gratitude for the wonderful, fantastic, juicy new chapters coming in a lovely bunch like that, and the terror of not knowing how many MORE it will take for some resolution!!!!! I mean, I don't want it to end suddenly, but I need to see what's gonna happen so BAD! wish I had the willpower to wait until you finish and label this "complete" but I don't! Panting for new installments!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 21:28 CST
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This is such a cute fic! Thank goodness for Heero's persistence in trying to figure out why he "failed the mission," ne? That was a great way for him to figure out his own feelings! Now all he needs to do is realize that Duo wasn't crying over Daniels (the slug.)
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 19:20 CST
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just read the latest chaper!!! 'bout time!!! Wahoo go Heero!! shesh I guess I talk a little to much. WAHoo!! sorry had to get one more out there. (^_-)
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaa!!! can't wait to read the new chapter!!! poor Heero, I wish I could bop Daniels for being so forward and give him a nice hard kick to where his brain obviously is for saying stuff like that about Duo. Us street rats don't 'preciate butts like 'im. Thank you so much for sharing!!! (^_^)
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