| "Trial And Error" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
| Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 01:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I have a feeling that Relena's "flirt" has taken an interest in Heero.... lol. And you HAVE to convince Heero that Relena and Wufei ARE the perfect match. Oh, Heero decided to sacrifice his happiness for a greater couse? HHmmm, how to convince him then, that he is in love with Duo? And the endinig of the chapter was brilliant. "Maybe we should talk about this diplomatically...." mmuuhahahaaa, oh please, more. Though I really crave for a new chapter of The source of all things.
|
Reviewed By: lurker On: March 17, 2004 13:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, Relena's interrupted sentences "You see, take me and-" "Opposites attract, right? Take my example-" People wondering if Heero is mad at Wufei for something. The fight between Wufei and Relena. Very suggestive.
|
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 12:44 CST
Comment/Review:
hhmm, did Heero think of putting himself on his white board as well? Trowa's reaction was cool. Absolutly cool. lol. Are he and Qautre already together? Wouldn't THAT be a shock for Heero to find out? hehehehehe And he should pair Wufei with Relena. After all, oposites attrack and they are very much oposites, right? hehehehe Sorry to hear that you were pulling your hair out, doesn't that hurt? But this story is worth it.
|
Title: Funny Tidbits
Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw in the notes on Chapter 3 that you wanted to know what the readers thought was funny, so here are my favorite parts from each chapter. ^__^ Chapter 1: I loved the part with the sign on Heero's War Room. I could picture Duo and Heero conversing like that perfectly. That was my first hint that this was going to be a laugh-out-loud adventure. ^_- Chapter 2: The image of Relena destroying er rose bush in surprise was priceless. Wufei and Sally was an entertaining painring..too bad it didn't work out, eh Heero? ^^ Chapter 3: Opps..the truth comes out. Poor Heero. ^^ And of course..Heero pops the big question to Wufei..priceless yet again. Chapter 4: Well now Heero knows about 3 out of the 4 of them. I loved Duo's question, "what did they put in your orange juice?" ::grin:: The situation with Quatre made me laugh throughout the whole thing. And, typical Trowa. ^___^ I wonder if Relena is missing on purpose with romantic intentions? ::suspicious:: Over all, its the little things that I love about this story. Relena doodling hearts on her important papers, Heero picturing Zero Quatre to get courage.. That, and I love the mission reports that Heero makes.
|
Title: You Never Fail to Impress...
Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far! It's hard to find a fanfic that has a new theme or plot to it, especially in a fandom as old as GW. However, you never let me down with your creative and original ideas! This story is one of those laugh-out-loud-and-your-roommate-gives-you-a-funny-look stories. ^_^ I cracked up thinking of Heero plotting out his pairing of the pilots so logically, yet with everything right in front of his face. Relena seems to be getting a little hopeful though hmm? hahaha..I can't wait to see who his connects next on his board. Duo+Hilde? Wufei+Une? (insert shocked face here) I am curious why everyone seems to think Heero is mad at Wufei though...hmmmmm. ^___^ Keep up the amazing work! Hopefully one day I will be able to review all of your freakin amazing fics like you deserve.
|
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 14:12 CST
Comment/Review:
How to review this chapter without bursting out laughing again and again. When Relena revieled Sally's preferences I nearly fell of my chair. And then when Heero asked Wufei about his preferences, well, let's say I had to take some deep breaths to stop laughing. More of that. More, more, more. I'd even sacrifice my need for The Source of All Things... if I got another chapter of Trial and Error, or two or three...
|
Reviewed By: Vathara On: March 14, 2004 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quatre... flypaper... *Chortle.* Oh, this sounds soooo much like how Heero would approach the "mission". Great!
|
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am absolutely LOVING this fic!! What a precious image of Heero making it his mission to be sure that his friends are happy! Quatre's reactions to Catherine are absolutely priceless!! You'd think that Heero could figure out that he wants that sexy acrobat, but DOH! Poor clueless Heero!! Oh, I just can't wait for more of this!! LOVE IT!! ^.^
|
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 17:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm finding this quite entertaining thus far. Only sad that the chapters are so very short. But, I'm very much looking forward to the next one. Wonderful job!
|
Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: March 14, 2004 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it when you get the no.1 anti-social guy to play the matchmaker. And Oh Yeah! 1x2 forever!!!
|
Reviewed By: Muffie On: March 14, 2004 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely the best! I giggled through the whole thing. Heero is wonderful in this one. I like the way he's approaching his "mission".
|
Reviewed By: sage_libra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
DELICIOUS! Yummyyyyyy. (Sigh) I can't wait for the next chapter. (hint, hint ^_^)
|
Reviewed By: Fuu_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Lord, that was hilarious! Keep it coming!! I loved the 'on door' conversation, I can just see it happening! ....Duo wanders past the door.. sees the sign.. gets all curious and smart assish.. Heero seeing the answer.. getting annoyed, yet amused... the further hijinx and eyeballing over meals.. Duo bugging Heero at random intervals for his secret... [bawls with laughter] I trust that there will be more soon?
|
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 14:00 CST
Comment/Review:
hhmmm, someone should mention to Heero that a relationship doesn't have to be only between men and women.... hehehehehehe, And I ponder what Duo will do once he finds out about Heero's new mission. I guees Relena had something very special in mind when she told Heero what he and his friends need.... lol
|
Reviewed By: black beauty On: March 12, 2004 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahahah! That was so hilarious! Heero and his mission plan! Oh God so far so good. I love the fact that he knows Duo so well and the fact that Duo is curious enough to find out what Heero is up to. Relena's hint was really funny but not as good as Heero needing a more realiable source of information. I wonder who will he consult? Or what would he do in order to find a reliable source? I can't wait to read more of this fic. Keep up the fantastic job and update soon!
|
| Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] |
