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| "Trial And Error" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] | | Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: Squish20 On: May 04, 2009 05:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just been reading through all your stories. I like them so much. I just felt at this point I had to say I really want to take your Heero and cuddle him and tell him how cute and oblivious he is! Thanks for sharing your work! ^^
| Title: Never too late 4 reviews :D
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 21, 2008 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As the title says, its never too late to review and I figured I would since I got so much enjoyment out of this story XD Very entertaining and ALOT of misunderstandings! Though very funny and well written, it only took me two days to read the whole thing, I was completly captivated! I just wanted to show my aprishiation for the story and hope that any possable future storys are as great as this one was! Until next time, ja ne!
| Reviewed By: Narca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 07:12 CDT
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The was so hilarious! But at parts of the story I wanted to cry at all the misunderstandings and heart wrenching confusion. I especially liked how you made Heero so un-adept at everyday normal things. About the door-to-door salesman and fixing the heater, that was really funny.
| Title: awesometacular!
Reviewed By: catch-katch [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 04:08 CDT
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i have no idea if i've already reviewed this but, i'm doing it again anyway! i just re-read this story, after finding it ages and ages ago, and actually saving it to re-read later for extra enjoyment ^_^. your fic is so cute! i love the language, it sounds very heero like, and amusing although consistantly formal and cool. the ending is cute. lol, i love it when confusion reins ^_^. do another!
| Title: Love your work!
Reviewed By: Phobos_09 On: August 20, 2006 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've said it before, time and time again (although always as an anonimous reviewer): You are a brilliant writer! I never liked Gundam, never even read a fic (except for you "50 Ways To Leave Your Lover ("She's NOT my lover!")", and I LOVE IT (them). This fic was AWSOME! They way you describe, I could almost hear Duo speaking to Trowa, I could actually FEEL the disconfort of him being twisted while being conforted. The frustration Heero was feeling (although I did not expect the Wufei/Relena one!). I was choking, fidgeting, banging my head against the table, then choaking some more through all the chapters. I love the way you worked every single detail, how you portrayed the characters (not liking the anime does not mean I did not know them), the hole idea and how you slowly stretched the yarn, knotted it and got it to be so wonderfully bizare. I loved Daniel untill that "Duo is trash" part, and I'm still amazed Heero did not actually killed him slowly and painfully. Thank you for writting this, and for sharing. PS: I'll send you the bill of my new interest: Gundam Fics, MUST be yours... And if I get fired because of your wonderfull fics, I'll just move in with you ;)
| Reviewed By: Talia Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 12:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was another absolutely adorable fic! The style of writing is noticeably younger than some of the others you've written, but that didn't draw away from the story in the least! (By younger, I simply mean less detailed, more, I guess the word would be amateur. Your newer works, like Freeport, are much more involving, more like something I'd read in a novel. So, basically, I'm trying to say your writing is good here, but has improved since. I think. I'm confusing myself here. Anyway!) I enjoyed the Heero POV, and how you kept it IC. The bit of Relena and Wufei caught me completely by surprise! (But then again, that's a good thing!) All in all, I loved it! Again, thanks for writing!
| Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 17:08 CDT
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Very cute. I really enjoyed this and as always your writing is fantastic. Needed a little humor lately and this just fit the bill.
| Title: Thanks again.
Reviewed By: Devil1 On: July 25, 2004 21:32 CDT
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Hello: Sorry for don't write before, but I want finish the Spanish traduction. Again thank you, because many people enjoy it. I send you the name and the some directions of the people who enjoy your fic (they are from fanfiction.net). AGUILA FANEL, Hana Sukishino, Palimpsesto, asr, shinta himura de matsumoto, Dark (dark_mousy02@hotmail.com), Zomalia, Asuka Maxwell (ravs_forever@hotmail.com), Ann Saotomo, Shinta Himura X (shinshinta@yahoo.com), malena (malena_hotaru@hotmail.com), Laie Himura de Fanel (probable she send you a review in english, I not sure), maryluz_mty (maryluz_mty@yahoo.com), ilhuikatlchan (liriolei@hotmail.com), marielita-san, Hotaru-chan, Calipso, ady, NOIR (noir_darkangel4@hotmail.com), jakito yui ishida, Korutesu, kisuka, TERRY MAKWELL ( I think he send you a review), Loreto W (loretovegeta1@yahoo.es). All love your fic and I love it too. Well I hope you continue with your others fics, specially 'The Arrangement', I don't know, but I prefer Heero with others and no with Duo, I think they are… always the same couple. Maybe I will change of the fic publicator, I don't like the new policy. Thanks again, and sorry for the broken English. Bye. P.D. My pc was a out of operation, and my outlook is making funny things. But I go to leaft a review of the Arrangement for you.
| Reviewed By: Droom On: July 24, 2004 14:09 CDT
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Aaah I loved it, dunno why I haven't read it before! (well, actually, the idea of reading ALL your fics instead of going over and over the ones I've already read only struck me recently ^^). Clueless Heero was great, and the conversations through the whole fic where marvellous, the part where Sally tries to give Heero 'the talk' was hilarious. I loved it. I love the fact that you're not only a great writer but that you also update frequently too, btw. Have some cookies! And I can't get over the fact how cute a clueless Heero is. ^^
| Reviewed By: Sara chan On: May 19, 2004 13:59 CDT
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I simply love it. I don't now why I've missed it???? reading it was sure fun.
| Title: Hmmmm...
Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you hinting that there might be a sequel floating around in that wonderful imagination of yours?? I absolutely LOVE clueless Heero, and would love to see more of his adventures in the world of love. ^_____^
| Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah I laughed alright...but I also almost pulled out all of my hair from frustration at Heero! But since I do love a happy ending i am happy to say that my hair is currently residing on my head, still. And I have to say Kudos to you!^_^ P.S You may be happy to know that I have added you to my fave authors.^_^
| Reviewed By: *Blish*Blosh* On: April 03, 2004 02:10 CST
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Loved the fic! It made me laugh so hard in some parts, but the touch of angst made it even better. Can't wait to read more of your stories!
| Reviewed By: driretlan On: April 01, 2004 22:10 CST
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i am sure that you have heard this soooo many times but.... THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOL!!!! it has a very nice concept, and even better, it was written reallllyyyyy well!!!! may more plot bunnies enter your head!!!
| Title: tickled pink!!!!
Reviewed By: sage_libra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 07:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
have i said this before? it's DELICIOUS! Yummy! Mouthwatering! I want MORE! wait, do i want more- after all, i had spent the last week salivating after this fic to the point where i couldn't concentrate on my work and my own fic- but heck, yes, i want more. please? ^_^ and yes, i'm a closet masochist 'sigh' hahaha
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