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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo. cool story. even though i dont like gayness.....but you wrote it really well and i can see heero doing something like that. you stayed in character with him the whole time and i hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: March 18, 2004 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what Duo would think when he finds out the bug in his equipment. It was so funny to see Relena tried to confess her love and snapped another rose. I would love to see more jealous feeling Herro shows towards Duo's relationship with other men.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 11:15 CST
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"Hell she'd run him through with a sword at the end of the war, that had to mean something, right?!" mmmuuuahahahahaahahaahaaaa, yes, it did mean something, but I'm certain that it didn't mean that Dorothy is in love with Quatre. Though I'm astonished that Heero didn't noticed that Wufei and Relena are always fighting, too. hehe, and you interupted Relena so nicely when she tried to confess her love to Heero, hehehehehe, great. Poor Duo on the roof, Heero should have listened longer to them. But you have to have something for the next chapters, right? Thumbs up for this great story.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 01:39 CST
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I have a feeling that Relena's "flirt" has taken an interest in Heero.... lol. And you HAVE to convince Heero that Relena and Wufei ARE the perfect match. Oh, Heero decided to sacrifice his happiness for a greater couse? HHmmm, how to convince him then, that he is in love with Duo? And the endinig of the chapter was brilliant. "Maybe we should talk about this diplomatically...." mmuuhahahaaa, oh please, more. Though I really crave for a new chapter of The source of all things.
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Reviewed By: lurker On: March 17, 2004 13:28 CST
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Hmmm, Relena's interrupted sentences "You see, take me and-" "Opposites attract, right? Take my example-" People wondering if Heero is mad at Wufei for something. The fight between Wufei and Relena. Very suggestive.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 12:44 CST
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hhmm, did Heero think of putting himself on his white board as well? Trowa's reaction was cool. Absolutly cool. lol. Are he and Qautre already together? Wouldn't THAT be a shock for Heero to find out? hehehehehe And he should pair Wufei with Relena. After all, oposites attrack and they are very much oposites, right? hehehehe Sorry to hear that you were pulling your hair out, doesn't that hurt? But this story is worth it.
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Title: Funny Tidbits
Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw in the notes on Chapter 3 that you wanted to know what the readers thought was funny, so here are my favorite parts from each chapter. ^__^ Chapter 1: I loved the part with the sign on Heero's War Room. I could picture Duo and Heero conversing like that perfectly. That was my first hint that this was going to be a laugh-out-loud adventure. ^_- Chapter 2: The image of Relena destroying er rose bush in surprise was priceless. Wufei and Sally was an entertaining painring..too bad it didn't work out, eh Heero? ^^ Chapter 3: Opps..the truth comes out. Poor Heero. ^^ And of course..Heero pops the big question to Wufei..priceless yet again. Chapter 4: Well now Heero knows about 3 out of the 4 of them. I loved Duo's question, "what did they put in your orange juice?" ::grin:: The situation with Quatre made me laugh throughout the whole thing. And, typical Trowa. ^___^ I wonder if Relena is missing on purpose with romantic intentions? ::suspicious:: Over all, its the little things that I love about this story. Relena doodling hearts on her important papers, Heero picturing Zero Quatre to get courage.. That, and I love the mission reports that Heero makes.
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Title: You Never Fail to Impress...
Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far! It's hard to find a fanfic that has a new theme or plot to it, especially in a fandom as old as GW. However, you never let me down with your creative and original ideas! This story is one of those laugh-out-loud-and-your-roommate-gives-you-a-funny-look stories. ^_^ I cracked up thinking of Heero plotting out his pairing of the pilots so logically, yet with everything right in front of his face. Relena seems to be getting a little hopeful though hmm? hahaha..I can't wait to see who his connects next on his board. Duo+Hilde? Wufei+Une? (insert shocked face here) I am curious why everyone seems to think Heero is mad at Wufei though...hmmmmm. ^___^ Keep up the amazing work! Hopefully one day I will be able to review all of your freakin amazing fics like you deserve.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 14:12 CST
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How to review this chapter without bursting out laughing again and again. When Relena revieled Sally's preferences I nearly fell of my chair. And then when Heero asked Wufei about his preferences, well, let's say I had to take some deep breaths to stop laughing. More of that. More, more, more. I'd even sacrifice my need for The Source of All Things... if I got another chapter of Trial and Error, or two or three...
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Reviewed By: Vathara On: March 14, 2004 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quatre... flypaper... *Chortle.* Oh, this sounds soooo much like how Heero would approach the "mission". Great!
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am absolutely LOVING this fic!! What a precious image of Heero making it his mission to be sure that his friends are happy! Quatre's reactions to Catherine are absolutely priceless!! You'd think that Heero could figure out that he wants that sexy acrobat, but DOH! Poor clueless Heero!! Oh, I just can't wait for more of this!! LOVE IT!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 17:35 CST
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I'm finding this quite entertaining thus far. Only sad that the chapters are so very short. But, I'm very much looking forward to the next one. Wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: March 14, 2004 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love it when you get the no.1 anti-social guy to play the matchmaker. And Oh Yeah! 1x2 forever!!!
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Reviewed By: Muffie On: March 14, 2004 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely the best! I giggled through the whole thing. Heero is wonderful in this one. I like the way he's approaching his "mission".
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Reviewed By: sage_libra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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DELICIOUS! Yummyyyyyy. (Sigh) I can't wait for the next chapter. (hint, hint ^_^)
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