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Title: CUTE
Reviewed By: aido [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!!.....OMG u have such a cute story.. omg this is so sad at the end ..*sniff sniff*... can u believe it. it actually made me cry...*sniff sniff sniff sob sob sob*.... please updated soon cause i need to read a chapter that will make me feel all better again..... please please update soon... thnx l8r
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: March 24, 2004 12:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Lovely and excellent.
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! sorry about that.....uh i humbly beg your forgivness. i was unaware at the time of your requests so i wont do it again. but yeah the story is good and i enjoy it. hehe ^^;; sorry again!
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Reviewed By: Alumni On: March 23, 2004 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! So when is the next update gonna be?! Tomorrow?? Today?!?! *Goes chibi and does puppy dog eyes* Please? Anyway, I have enjoyed your story greatly and I can't wait to read more!! Ja ne!
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Title: Write faster!!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just wonderful, but I didn't realize until it was too late that it's not DONE!!! Arghhhhhhhh! Pleaseopleaseoplease finish soon!
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Reviewed By: Cephalanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 18:38 CST
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Ohmygoodness. This is almost PAINFUL to read-- and not in a bad-writing kind of way, nonono, in the me-yelling-at-the-screen, "Heero, you MORON, get a clue!" kind of way. Oy. I'm embarassed FOR the poor boy. Anyway, this is a hilarous fic-- like the rest of your work, it is a delight to read. And you have my deepest respect for writing this so quickly! I just don't know how you do it; my own fics seem to be in a constant state of hiatus....
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 16:43 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i liked the update! that was funny the way heero told him off about the whole 'un-equal' thing. but yeah i must say i agree with the other reviewers, daniels is lucky to be alive. ehehe keep up the good work! but i still dont like gayness....
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Title: Linel17@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: March 22, 2004 14:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh man, i was so waiting for Daniels to get an enema with Heeros "security blanket" as u so eloquently put it, but the whole "un-equal" speech will do. I love this keep up the good work. Love all ur other stuff too, speaking of which...r u ever gonna update beautiful symmetries?
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 12:58 CST
Comment/Review:
WWwwaaahhuuuuu, yeah, great, super, go Heero go. And Daniels is very lucky to be still alive. A bit overconfident Mr. Daniels, ne? hehehe Maybe now Heero has reallised what a treasure Duo is.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: March 22, 2004 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 12:23 CST
Comment/Review:
A little bit of angst??? I'd say that Daniels is lucky to be still alive.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: March 20, 2004 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This fic is so hilarious. I can't wait to read and find out how Duo and the rest of the guys will react when they find out that Heero is going out for coffee with Daniels? Keep up the fascinating job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh man. I burst out laughing when Heero told Quatre about the match between Duo and Trowa's. ^___^ Poor Heero...so oblivious. And now Heero has yet another person who wants his hot bod...a clash between Duo and Daniels might be funny.. ^^ I can't tell you how much I love getting a chapter a day...gives me something to look forward to.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 11:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, I get it. You are trying to kill me, aren't you? NOT that I'm complaining, dying with laughter is a wonderfull way to die, though a bit painfull. But I wanted to write you a review. And now I have to write a review for two chapters, sigh. NOoo, I'm not complaining, not one bit. Update as much as you want. Review: The talk with Dorothy, very good. I wonder WHAT she might have said to Heero, hhehehehe. Relena still gets interruped, I might feel sorry for her... noooooo. lol, it is too much fun seeing her to try again and again and again. What is going to happen next time she tries to confess her "everlasting love" to Heero? Heero still hasn't a clue, right? Otherwise he wouldn't try to pair Daniels with Duo.. lol. Poor Duo. First he gets flu because of Heeros idea to pair him with Trowa, what is going to happen now? And Quatre: "Am I in the right house??" lol, oh, I love this fic. I love it, I love it, I love it. did I mention that I love it???
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: March 20, 2004 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Your fic is wonderful. Congratulations.
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