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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 14:17 CST
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OK, chalk this one up as another fantastic fic from you, ok Kiddo? I just loved how naive Heero was, although he just knew he had all the answers to his friends' "problems." I'm glad he didn't have any problem with "I love you" once it was out on the table. I could almost hear him rambling and mumbling through the different pairings as Duo and Wufei revealed them! The explanation about why the other pilots moved into the house choked me up. (I really need to stop being such a wuss!) Loved it, loved it, loved it!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: March 27, 2004 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO! ENCORE! ENCORE! This fic was awesome. I wish you could write an epilogue or better yet a continuation of this fic. It was funny, well writen, had a heart twisting plot and best of all a happy ending.
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Reviewed By: Freak_on_a_Leash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aiya!!! It's over? Aww foo but by the bob's I love it sooo much.....I'm being weird...I gotta hurry with this though I got a show coming on but I love it!(Already know that don't cha?) Hehehe but sad to see it end but I shall love to continue reading this but I gotta go..keep up the great work and Ciao till next time!
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just absolutely LOVED this fic!! Every day I'd go hit the gw-fan ML (where I'm much to shy to actually say anything...hence the review here!) just to look for the next installment! It's been a fun ride, and I'm really sorry to see it end!! I loved your characterization of Heero, so sweetly clueless! And you really shocked me with this last chapter, that while he was trying to make everyone else happy, they were all there for HIM to make his life easier!! What a wonderful circle of friends!! Just truly a wonderful story!! Again, sad to see it end!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Wing On: March 26, 2004 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything's soon coming to a close--so exciting! Gosh, this cliffhanger has to one of your most killer yet...aaaagh! The next chapter coming tomorrow can't seem to come soon enough...!!!
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Reviewed By: Mama jen On: March 26, 2004 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God! This story is awesome. It is also a totally original idea which is even better. Keep up the great work and thank you so much for updating frequently! You are wonderful!!
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: March 26, 2004 13:18 CST
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I can't to see what is going to happen next.
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Title: WAHOO sock'im one for me!
Reviewed By: pris On: March 26, 2004 12:49 CST
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::smiles evily- sneeks up quietly and throws piñata up in the air and it breaks open raining confetti and butterscotch candies on Maldoror:: Celebrate!! another chapter!! thanks maldoror. What a story, and Daniels got what he deserved.
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Title: Exxxxxxcellent!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm torn, just torn. Between eternal gratitude for the wonderful, fantastic, juicy new chapters coming in a lovely bunch like that, and the terror of not knowing how many MORE it will take for some resolution!!!!! I mean, I don't want it to end suddenly, but I need to see what's gonna happen so BAD! wish I had the willpower to wait until you finish and label this "complete" but I don't! Panting for new installments!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 21:28 CST
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This is such a cute fic! Thank goodness for Heero's persistence in trying to figure out why he "failed the mission," ne? That was a great way for him to figure out his own feelings! Now all he needs to do is realize that Duo wasn't crying over Daniels (the slug.)
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 19:20 CST
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just read the latest chaper!!! 'bout time!!! Wahoo go Heero!! shesh I guess I talk a little to much. WAHoo!! sorry had to get one more out there. (^_-)
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaa!!! can't wait to read the new chapter!!! poor Heero, I wish I could bop Daniels for being so forward and give him a nice hard kick to where his brain obviously is for saying stuff like that about Duo. Us street rats don't 'preciate butts like 'im. Thank you so much for sharing!!! (^_^)
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Title: CUTE
Reviewed By: aido [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!!.....OMG u have such a cute story.. omg this is so sad at the end ..*sniff sniff*... can u believe it. it actually made me cry...*sniff sniff sniff sob sob sob*.... please updated soon cause i need to read a chapter that will make me feel all better again..... please please update soon... thnx l8r
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: March 24, 2004 12:58 CST
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Lovely and excellent.
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! sorry about that.....uh i humbly beg your forgivness. i was unaware at the time of your requests so i wont do it again. but yeah the story is good and i enjoy it. hehe ^^;; sorry again!
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