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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 03:12 CDT
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oh, wow, i love this story so far! i can't wait to read more. you have to update asap. or i might go crazy! keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Liwah_Lee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I love the twist. Ergh, you cliffhangar fiend! Write more soon, please ^^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 23, 2004 17:35 CDT
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A few unexpected twists there, an excellent chapter, one I greatly enjoyed reading. Good luck with the thesis. Hope the result comes out well. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: me On: April 22, 2004 21:42 CDT
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Okay!! next chapter should provide some lemony freshness ^_~ and Sesshie's going to find out all about Rin....interesting--update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 18, 2004 18:31 CDT
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An excellent trio of chapters! Wonder what Kouga will do now Inuyasha took away Kagome...also what will Miroku do now that Sango's father thinks they are getting married... Looking forwards to finding out! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Hola Chica
Reviewed By: Triss On: April 18, 2004 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Impressive my dear! A flow uncommon to the genre.
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Reviewed By: LiL Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 07:19 CDT
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yay! update soon!!! LiL Elf
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Reviewed By: ME On: April 16, 2004 23:46 CDT
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Aww man!! Souta was a hoot, but what the hell was up with Kouga marking Kag???? she better purify the hell out of the mark asap!! ^_^ great chappies!! look forward to the next!!
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Reviewed By: LiL Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 21:30 CDT
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hey! this is awesome and i cant wait til u update! :) LiL Elf
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 16, 2004 20:19 CDT
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That was...unexpected. Excellent chapter, look forwards to seeing what's going to happen next! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: darksqall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 13:33 CDT
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its reallly good keep it up :p
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Reviewed By: ME On: April 14, 2004 23:53 CDT
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Ha!! another great set of chapters!!--Inu will have Kagome yet ^_~ Sango/Miroku and Rin/Sesshie--what can I say??...yummy!! await your next update!! ja!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 14, 2004 18:29 CDT
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Oh dear...looks like all the men are in depp deep trouble now... Excellent pair of chapters! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 12, 2004 18:31 CDT
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Once again another excellent chapter! Now I will be wondering what Miroku plans to do until the next update... Till then good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 16:06 CDT
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this story was awesome! i could have sworn that i had reviewed last chapter, but i guess i didnt. so here i am. loved the chapter, and cant wait for the next one! interesting stuff going on with sesshie and rin, cant wait, cant wait, cant wait!! =) ~*~*~*~*~*~SUTEKI~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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