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 Reviewed By: thandie [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 09, 2004 09:19 CDT
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what a beautiful long chapter! you know, i find it hard to like this story cause it's taking time from saiyuki!!!! But i must admit that it's a very articulated story, and i'm really starting to like it! Btw am i the only one that think Shuldigh is the sexiest character in the series? Good work as always!
 Title: fantastic
Reviewed By: mithril27  On: October 09, 2004 09:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing. The transition from 'I Hate Him' to this is very well written. Schuldig is shown pretty heartless but i guess it is appropriate. Keep it up and upload soon!
 Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 08, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
{crying softly} they won't fill my prescription anymore..they said I am addicted and I need help..lol. Well done as usual. You evil thing you..so much pain..love farie in this chapter..madmen..got to love them..I really do hope Shu gets whats coming to him..and it really better hurt {gleam in eye} Till the next Chapter {raises scotch} SALUDE
 Reviewed By: Cath K  On: October 08, 2004 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
A friend had recommended "I Hate Him" to me a while back, which I had read and absolutely adored! Now I see this sequel and am so excited. Gotta say this one seems even more stress-filled and worrisome than I Hate Him, with Schuldig in the mix. And with what he's pulling now... ack! I almost don't want to see what's in store. And hell, I miss Youji seme. I've come to depend on you for that! I love those scenes ^^, your characterization was just one of the reasons I loved I Hate Him so much. And that tidbit about Aya's past dancing lessons was really interesting!
 Title: Great
Reviewed By: J Nayak  On: October 08, 2004 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is one of the beat fics ever! Please, Please upload at the soonest. Schu is so heartless, but I guess the portrayal is apt.
 Title: Great!
Reviewed By: J Nayak  On: October 08, 2004 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is one of the coolest fics ever! Please, please upload at the soonest.
 Title: I will not pester the author, I will not pester the author. I will not pester the author...
Reviewed By: EternitysEnd  On: October 07, 2004 18:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, to hell with it. Mooooooooooooooooore. Now. ::insert happy threats:: And really? You promise? Smut next chapter? Schuldaya (or should it by Ayaldig?) on Youji angsty smut? *fangirls* The angst in this one seriuosly killed me. I couldn't stop reading. My favorite chapter yet* (*Except for the Aya seme scene of course) Now I only have to be patient and wait respectfully for you to finish the next chapter in your own good time...Likelihood of that happening is very low. Keep up the good work (or else)!
 Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 07, 2004 18:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. What more can I say other than that I am in awe over this story. Shu is so deliciously evil, I can't get enough and now we'll get the Farf/Shu doubleteaming of Aya. What more could an angst junkie like me ask for? I'm surprised no one else caught the Super Troopers quote, oh well. I will admit to having the habit of memorising movies to the point where I can quote entire scenes verbatim, but that's a discussion for another time. Anyway, great work and all that good stuff. Anxiously waiting for more....and you can owe me the 5 bucks ;)
 Reviewed By: Delphinium  On: October 07, 2004 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love how your story is flowing and the fabulous way you portray each character, their relationship, and their strong connection with each other. And thanks for the superb KenxOmi scene in this past chapter, you do them well. No pun intended. ^-^ Can't wait to find out what happens next, as usual. Continue to please. And sorry for not review more often I forget, but you now I love your work. Until next time.
 Reviewed By: Jenna Muff  On: September 30, 2004 01:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
(grins hugely) Everybody loves my name, I don't know why. Does "Muff" bear some kind of connotation that I'm not aware of...? Anyhoo, this chapter is THE SHIT! Ken and Omi lovin', Nagi-ness all around, Yohji angst, Yohji and Ken fighting, and to top it all off, a truly horrible cliffhanger. I've decided. Will you, Anime Gher, be my bride? We can invite Yohji and Aya over for a bloody torture-angst-abuse session, and then use all of our female cuddle-powers to comfort them in their hour of need. Now, that's amore! (giggle) Still loving it, and slavering for more! You rock!
 Title: Highlighting Glory? ^_^;
Reviewed By: Eternitys End (mediaminer hates me forever)  On: September 25, 2004 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*big puppy dog eyes for more* I beta-ed and read...Still waiting with baited breath for more Yohji-angst...and seme-Aya...not that I haven't bothered you about that enough already. I figure maybe you work the same way I do: poke at you long enough and you'll give me what I want. Plz? Not that I didn't enjoy the Ken-Omi smut...^.^
 Reviewed By: Halcyon [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 20, 2004 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It took me a while but I finally found you and low and behold you updated. ^-^ First off, thank you for the juicy lemon waiting for me. You both turned me on and impressed me with your skillful writing. After what happened to poor Aya I thought Ken and Omi wouldn't have sex until that whole event had subsided. But using sex for comfort and therapy was perfect. It fit well into the context and at the same time felt like any kind of intimate affection rather than a recreational fuck, that has a time and a place, but for the way story grew read very organically. I am so jeal. ^_~ Secondly I would like to send my best wishes for Aya's, and Yohji's full recovery and for their much needed make-up sex. But now with the sudden entrance of Mr. Mean, Shuldig, who know hows long that will take? Let us know soon. ^_^
 Reviewed By: Nitelyfe [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oof, you really are evil to leave the chapter at an ending like that. Keep up the great work! ^.~ Can't read this stuff at work anymore (new job) but still anxiously waiting for more when I get home. Glad you enjoyed Japan, I'm so jealous!
 Title: I Can't Be Cool
Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan(orY/A)  On: September 18, 2004 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just finished reading all of the chapters posted here for this fic. I must say I am all consumed in this one...Guess I'm a sucker for the angst. I really like how this story is going...Can't wait for the moment when Yohji tells Aya what happened that night(with Schu) and for Aya to find out that Schu was in the bathroom with at school...That is going to happen right? I hope those two really take it out of Schu's ass(Can I say that here? Anyway update soon...I need my angst fix or I get all cranky...Oh yeah I was reading some of your responses at the end of this chapter to other reviewers...Wow you went to Japan?!?! AND saw some Yohji look alikes?!?!?! How lucky is it to be you?
 Reviewed By: jessara40k [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2004 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yes, I found this fic, and I love it just as much as I Hate Him. Poor poor Aya. I liked the way he angsted in chapter 4 and convinced himself that it was all his fault, it helped show just how broken he is now. (Question, in chapter 3 was Schuldich convincing him that yes Yohji had raped him in the bathroom, or that he was angry about it considering how quickly he justified it to himself when he was left alone?) And when he woke up in chapter 6 it was scary to find out that he thought he'd raped Yohji, and the doctor's belief that Aya was being abused gave an interesting perspective on how things looked from outside of Weiss.
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