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Title: Halcyon
Reviewed By: Halcyon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry if this took so long but Mediaminer wouldn't put up my review even though I'm registered. Anyways great chapter once again, I am so intrigued with Omi plan to involve his grandfather and Ken's obvious distain for it. Can someone say tension. And poor Yohji, but I do feel that he deserves some the torture he's going through but I hope Aya will soon be free. He's been through enough. Til next time.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 13:03 CST
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Oh fuck *mutters*...sorry,MM fucked it up again...why me, every time!! Send you a mail!
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 13:00 CST
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Sorry for needing so long to review -.-...I don't dare to write a long review
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 12:59 CST
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Sorry for needing so long to review -.-...I don't dare to write a long review
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 12:56 CST
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Sorry for needing so long to review -.-...I don't dare to write a long review
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 12:55 CST
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Sorry for needing so long to review -.-...I don't dare to write a long review
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Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 17:00 CST
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Hey, that's wasn't such a long wait afterall :) So, Omi has made a deal with the devil, has he? Well, there has to be a reason why he would become Persia, but poor Ken :( God, I love the way you write angst. Now, I might be out of my mind here, but I have a feeling prickling the back of my skull that Nagi is going save the day in some respects. Complete comjecture, mind you. Anyway, let me stroke your ego some more and say that I am completely addicted to your stories. You're just so darn good at it. As always, I'll be waiting for more.
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Title: lovelovelove
Reviewed By: bleachmeagain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heeey girly!!! I love your story so far! The way you present the charcters is just amazing! I think you have kept them in a character and even deepened them! I love the way you made Schuldig, because out of all the things people have made him...that really strikes me as right/possible. Love the way Omi acted with Nagi the first day! its sooo cute!! *hugs*!! ((made my whole day XD)) omi/ken alllllllllll the way every daaaaaaaaayyyyy...i say! lol yay! but yes!! finally had to comment!!! hope to see a new chapter soon??~ :P xo
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 12:02 CST
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Schuldig makes me cringe. You absolutely ruined him for me, I can't see him as anything other then a very bad guy now. I like how you made your antagonists so dispicable, that's very DC comics of you. I get tired of the whole 'not really bad, just had a tragic past' thing sometimes.
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Reviewed By: neuroticsquirrel On: November 14, 2004 07:17 CST
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I'm really enjoying this so far. And Ahmet and Dweezil Zappa also do a really great version of Hit Me Baby One More Time.
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Reviewed By: Delphinium On: November 11, 2004 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot thickens once again and poor Aya is stuck right in the middle of it. I can just see some really exciting things next time so please update soon. I just love your writing.
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Reviewed By: Halcyon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful and dark chapter. I loved Ken and Youji's heart to heart. It nice seeing their friendship and how they interact with one another. Like when Youji tells him how Aya ended up in the hospital and Ken looks at his friends' relationship differently. I also liked the whole 'being bottom' topic, which Ken analyzed in his own relationship and gave his opinion on. He is so honest and in character when he says that he really likes being the 'top'. That's just the type of guy he is, and why he loves being with Omi, case closed. But, there are always exceptions, right. ^_~ As for poor, unlucky Aya, trapped in the lion's den with those nutjobs, I hope he makes it out of there in one piece. And with Youji by his side of course. Once again great charcaterizations, dialogue, and plot twists. Keep em coming. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: October 16, 2004 11:09 CDT
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Thanks for another great chapter. I love the way you've developed this storyline. I'm glad Aya knows the truth about what happened before in the bathroom. Please post again soon. The suspense is driving me nuts!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 15:28 CDT
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Excellent! More please...and well, the "fun" hasn't "really" started yet XD. Oh, how sadistic that sounds
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Reviewed By: jessara40k [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I really liked this chapter. Poor Aya though, he's just found another reason to hate himself. And now I want to know if Yohji will do any better in recognising that it's Schuldig, and NOT his lover, doing whatever evil things Schuldig takes it into his mind to do. Will Nagi redeem himself by helping Weiss find Aya? And now I'm beginning to wonder if this could have been avoided if Omi had mentioned meeting Nagi to anyone BUT Aya, or waiting until Aya was less stressed out to tell him - at least I somehow got the impression that Omi must have mentioned Nagi in that 'conversation' he had with Aya as they were going back to the Koneko after Aya's first day at University. If I'm wrong please tell me.
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