| "Come As You Are" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: February 22, 2005 02:14 CST
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whaaa poor assassins!! and muhahahha bradley fainted muahhaha
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 13:44 CST
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Excellant chapter. Can't wait to see how this Crawford/Farf pairing develops @-@. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Lady Gackt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 22:37 CST
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Dammit, I'm finally gonna get off my ass and review! I had really enjoyed Farfarello in this chapter. It really was a sad scene when he died, I had to shed a few tears... but the line, "Crawford? I didn't know you were God," almost made me snort soda out of my nose! LMAO! XD It also made me feel happier, knowing Farf isn't entirely gone and alone. Schuldig, on the other hand, man, he's a total bastard, hahaha. I don't feel sorry for him at all. Which is good. The way I see his sudden obsession with Youji is that he isn't really wanting Youji exactly, I don't think. But more like wanting what Youji could give him, like what Youji had given Aya. Which really must be what he's so jealous about, yeah? Their relationship... Well, too bad, no happily ever after for this sadistic villain! =3 (I hope) And Aya in tiny shorts and fishnets has me nosebleeding. Thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 21:11 CST
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Holy... what a developement! Farfie's dead... and inside Crawford's head? I'm baffled... Is Aya still alive? Please say yes! And that Yohji stays alive as well... update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 07:11 CST
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That is a great development. I am very excited for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 06:53 CST
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I'm glad Nagi is making a stand. Even as a die-hard KenxOmi fan, I feel I have been groomed enough by this fic that if it ends up NagixOmi I'll allow it this once. I don't know if that's where this is going, but if it is you are doing a brilliant job of it, making Ken and Omi look incompatible without really making us hate either one. Most people would just make Ken have an affair out of nowhere or something like that, without any preperation, just an abrupt break-up that makes everone hate Ken.
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 06:25 CST
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Sorry, things have been so hectic I haven't had time to breath, but now I have a free afternoon and yours is the first fic I decided to get caught up on. It's still great!
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Title: Halcyon
Reviewed By: Halcyon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! They finally rescued Aya and what a battle it was. Your discriptions in this chapter were very vivid and harsh, capturing the desparate mood of this climactic scene. I am also amazed at how your working this into the Gluhen series, if that is what your doing. I think I have an idea at the ending. But I will wait patiently with baited breath for whatever you have in store. All I ask is that the next part has a lot of lovin. ^_^
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Reviewed By: tougakiryuukun On: January 27, 2005 07:33 CST
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Reviewed By: tougakiryuukun On: January 27, 2005 07:30 CST
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 21:43 CST
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POOOOOOORRRRR AYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awww I want to cry! You MUST have a happy ending! Please?
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yikes, poor Aya! Even knowing that this is leading up to Gluhen, it is difficult to see how he can survive. Even with the transfusion, with so many holes and cuts, it only seems a very temporary measure. I note, at least, neither Schuldig nor Farfello have yet carried out their earlier express threats. The characters otherwise are indeed moving into Gluhen territory, and showing how much they need Aya (and he needs them). Please come back soon with more!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (*gasps* it's letting me review!) On: January 14, 2005 08:12 CST
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OMG... How scary! I so feel for Aya... I want to rush in there and save him myself! *wails* I'm not an expert though and would be completely uselsess. Such a dark chapter though... Poor Aya, as he's being so depressingly defiant. It's good to see that in some way he's trying to live, even if it is for some strange reasoning in his head. I can't believe you let Yohji cut his beautiful hair off! I hope it grows fast, I always was a little jealous of those nice curls. Please, let Weiss get Aya out safely! I'm very worried about them all... Please update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 20:57 CST
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Go Nagi! I knew he was gonna come through for them. Let me just say that Farf ripping out Aya's stitches with his teeth- ouch! Made me yelp outloud, but that just illustrates the power of your writing. Youji cutting off all his hair reminded me of that 80's movie "The Legend of Billy Jean" (Yikes! I just dated myself, didn't I?) but it had to happen...bummer. Can't wait for the showdown where Shu's gonna get the ass-whooping he has coming to him. And neither rain, nor sleet, or dark of night will keep from reviewing your wonderful stories. I'm honored to be your number one tropper :) Waiting anxiously for more.
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Title: (just curious...you know why, eh?)
Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 19:51 CST
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Oh what the bloody hell, I've never (really) read such scenes with such a violent/brutal and insane Farfarello! Oh and Schuldig isn't that better. Don't get me wrong here, although I winced very often while reading and shuddered at their actions, I liked it nevertheless
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