| "My Shinigami, My Hamburger" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Title: Loving it so far
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kaat On: November 29, 2004 06:26 CST
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Although I am not normally one to enjoy a whiny Duo, I thought this was very enjoyable. I certainly am curious as to what you were smoking while you wrote it...but enjoyable none the less. I couldn`t help but laughing at some of the situations that Duo and his mother could get themselves into...let alone the whole Valentine world. I like the way you make the reader find out what the background is a little at a time (like peeling and onion) rather than having it thrown at us with no warning in a lump. It`s very interesting and I would like to see it finished soon, I have never been a patient person. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Reviewed By: Renee L Demers On: October 23, 2004 17:41 CDT
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I love Melissa Etheridge! My mom got her album "Lucky" and I like listening to it. Love the story, aww... ain't they sweet!
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Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky (mm member) On: October 10, 2004 18:32 CDT
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Another wonderful chapter, Congratulations! Please update soon, 'cause it makes my own school day bearable to come home and see a fantastic update from you!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 21:53 CDT
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YEA! A Bee!! And an update! aww the kiss was going so well too! *pouts* I wish Duo could handle things a bit better but he's so adorable!!
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Title: ch.15
Reviewed By: ~Esukafruone~ On: September 28, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I enjoy reading this story very much! This Duo's childishness and Heero's grumpiness are great entertainment, and I hope to see more!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 13:32 CDT
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I knew it, giggle, Shini doesn't know anything about modern time bathrooms. lol, ladies room.. Oh, he is soooo sweet and hugable How long is Heero able to resist him? Sigh, the way it was until now I'd say that Shini will have to do a little more than look adorable and making puppy dog faces to persuade Heero to fall in love with him. But what could Shini do? I don't know... got to wait for the next chapter, ne?
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Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky (mm member) On: September 15, 2004 15:24 CDT
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o.o I can understand your geometric pain v.v. I'm so glad you updated! I could almost sense an update on this story, since you got another chapter up for 'The One-Eared Neko' a few days ago ^^. I hope you get the next chapter out soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 11:47 CDT
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Spidy go squishy! aww poor shini lost his pet. hmm I liked geometry when I was in high school, i'd offer to tutor after i've had a refresher/ quick look at the book for your class buuuut i work better one on one, i'm not sure how it would work through email or computer *their somewhat impersonal* Good luck to you! and update when ya can *rubs her head, shesh i feel old, hobles away with cane*
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OH, what a wonderfull fic. Shini is soooo sweet, giggle, for a Shinigami. A pet-spider? What is he going to want next? A cobra? lol, Oh, and he finally gets the much needed wash. Hmm, shower? I bet Shini never before had had a shower. Heero should prepare for a suprise. I'm looking for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Muffie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 17:56 CDT
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I like this one! Very original and it's keeping my interest rather well. I like the way you've made ol' Shinigami. He's very amusing. You've got a couple of nice caricatures of the characters without being cliched or dull.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 04:02 CDT
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*spins excitedly in her chair* i don't have anything to say so I thought I say that. ShiniDuo's so cute and the way he speaks reminds me a bit of Kenshin. Another interesting chapter! keep it coming (^_^)
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Reviewed By: LainoftheAzureSky On: August 18, 2004 12:40 CDT
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^^. Well, I feel bad that youy feel so old, but I'm elated that you updated...wait...rhyme very much not intended...Anyway, this chapter went along just as well as the others, and the little images of what Shini's going to do in Japan flitting around in my head. Thank you for updating, and I hope you get another chapter up soon! ^_^ Happy Birthday on the 20th! mines on the 23...
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Reviewed By: LainoftheAzureSky On: August 05, 2004 20:08 CDT
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I'm glad that you were finally able to update, but now I feel kinda bad for Heero ^^; I'd be tearing out my hair if I had to take care of Shini even for a couple days...Please update again soon, but have a good time wherever you're going as well. Well done on another awesome chapter ^^
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Reviewed By: Alea On: August 04, 2004 16:00 CDT
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totally awesome cant wait for another chap ^_^
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Shini! His innocence is so endearing, yet every once in awhile he lets a little bit of "Mr. Conniving Smartass" show through. The way he talks in the third person is too cute. I was howling at the description of Shini's exploration of the inside of the taxi... with his tongue among other things! Then, when he "greeted" Rita - OMFG - I thought I would wet myself!!! "It would be nice seeing you in Hell someday! Shini hopes so, very much so." OMFG, that is too rich! Poor Heero. What has he gotten himself into? This is a highly entertaining fic so far, kiddo. Keep up the good work!
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