| "My Shinigami, My Hamburger" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Title: luv it
Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 17:46 CST
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Heero is a real stick in the mud! Hope Shini can loosen him up soon!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 15:30 CST
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Hey! I love this story! Heero is sort of an ass for leaving poor Shini all by himself and making him cry in the first couple of chaps, but I forgive him. I love the way you made Duo so sweet in this on without going over board with it. I think he's sooo KAWAII! Update soon. Ja matte ne!
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Title: ch 23
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!!! Poor Shini! Please save him soon ...he's so cute and so forlorn! Great story. I am enjoying it very much. Thanks heaps!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 23:53 CST
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Awww, as much as poor pitiful Shini made me want to snuggle him and give him chicken soup... no wait, that would make him worse... Anyway, as much as I wanted to snuggle him, I loved Heero's demeanor in this chapter. He was comforting and attentive to Shini and thought of himself as *gasp!* Shini's husband!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: March 12, 2005 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Poor Shini! I hope he will be OK, if not in the next chapter then sometime soon. Please keep going. It's soooo good!
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Reviewed By: priscel - On: March 10, 2005 04:35 CST
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I figured it out! Shini sounds a little like elmo *snickers* and now he's got the shrinks? will he also shrink in size, be the height of or age of his behavior *grins* gosh I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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EEK!! MINI SHINI~!!!!! I dont think it'd even be safe for a human to eat 3 bowls of icecream...Sugar high of doom...then a sugar low from he**... o.o; Keep up the good work~! I just got a quickie question...Are you going to add the rest of the Gundam Wing cast? (I cant remember if you added them or not so I thought now would be a good time to ask.)
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Title: I think I'm getting addicted to your fiction! n_n
Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you're keeping Shini in his out of character state. Your writing flows smoothsly and it makes everything that much more enticing for the reader...or so I think. n.n; I like it when Heero gets a bit flustered when he cant help getting caught in Shini's snares. It's just so cute~! I read chapters 18-20 in one sitting so somethings in the different chapters ran together for me, but I absolutely loved their roof time together. That was sweet beyond reason. The way that Heero relaxed near his teishu was just wonderful. But my favorite part has got to be the part where they're on the bike at the stoplight. I do the same thing to people...not everyone waves back though. A few do...but most stare at me like I have ADHD or something. Keep the fiction going, I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next~!!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 17:27 CST
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I loved the interaction in this chapter - it appears that Heero is becoming more at ease around Shinigami. His shy glances seem to have replaced his earlier glares. The historical bit was nice. How sweet that Iria researched Heero for her son - I can just imagine a spoiled kid in a candy story pestering his mother for something he's seen until she gives in. Now I have to wonder how much divine intervention was involved in getting Heero invited to the TV show... So why did Shini have to go and step back when he did? What's his devious mind up to?
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Reviewed By: AsakaSama On: February 21, 2005 06:26 CST
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I love it! You might want to watch the comma usage though, sometimes you put commas where good old fashioned periods should be. Question though: If Heero is based on Heero, who is Shinigami based on? Duo? Because lately I haven't seen much mention of a certain famouse hair do-which will remain nameless-that a certain God of Death should have. But that's just me being nit picky.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: February 20, 2005 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is great, so please keep writing. I can't wait to see what happens next. It's always funny when Heero gets caught up in Shini's illusions.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: February 13, 2005 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far. It's awesome and I can't wait for you to update. It's a great idea and it's so fun to read!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 22:00 CST
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You won't hear any complaining from me - I'm just durn glad you updated! Poor Heero-kun... if he isn't careful, Shini is going to weasel his way into the grumpy guys heart. I just love how Shini's curiosity gets the better of him, although it would appear that he isn't as innocent as he tries to imply. "Yes, I'll stand here like a statue until you return, Teishu. Or at least until you turn that corner..." So, did the old fart change his mind because he found out Heero's married, or had he planned it all along, or did Shinigami "nudge" him? Wonderful job once again!
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Reviewed By: NightCrystal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good story.Duo and Heero are written perfectly for this story.I couldn't see Heero giving to quickly to Shini's charms,it wouldn't be right cause the story would be over to quickly.They are just perfect.I cann't wait to read more of this story,please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kari-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 08:31 CST
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That was good! please finish~!! I wanna see What happens~!! Please don't leave me hanging like this...I need my Heero and Duo! (They're what started me out on Yaoi) Wilt thou leave me so unsatsfied?!!?!!? ._.;
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