| "My Shinigami, My Hamburger" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Title: ch26
Reviewed By: justkat more. On: April 26, 2005 20:21 CDT
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Iria really is the Mother-in-Law from Hell isn't she!!! And the Mother from Hell for that matter. Poor Shini!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: April 26, 2005 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeah...you better finish it! You can't just leave poor Shini like that. Poor kid. Just left, all sad. Please continue and update soon. (And be nice to Shini!)
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 07:44 CDT
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Oh poor Shini! Heero is such an ass. He hurt his feewings and now he's sad. Go apologize now, baka!!!! *Heero glares* Arghh! *hits Heero in the head with a big fan* Heero: Gomen nasai, Shini That's better. ^_^ Update soon!
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Title: For the Sake of Heaven
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 21:50 CDT
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Beautiful descriptive text once again; you pay great attention to detail but don't go overboard. I loved Iria's little "snit" too. As humorous as it was, I could so empathize with her maternal frustration over the things that us moms go through while trying our best to raise our children. I didn't know whether to laugh or cry or throw something against the wall right along with the goddess. It was a no-brainer with Heero's quest and Shini, though. Boo hoo-ville. It wasn't difficult to picture the poor god in the grasp of the Drains. He was just so pitiful. That weak tail wagging didn't help. *Sign* Dammit, that's all I can write for now. Need more Kleenex.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 20:30 CDT
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"...I realized there's at least seven arcs of MSMH I want to cover" *Glomps Kaitsurinu* I'm so happy that theres more, oh man!!!! and you said there's angst to come?! i can't wait to read more, you are a wonderful writer you know. I can't thank you enough for sharing and sticking with us.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: April 20, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Too good! I was so worried that Shini would die before Heero got to him! It was so cute how Shini took the food so reluctantly just so Heero wouldn't bother him anymore and let him sleep. Please update soon cause I love it!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 13:53 CDT
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AWWWW! Shini and Heero are too cute together! Oh and WAAHHHHH! I can't believe it's coming to an end so soon. I really liked reading this fic. *sigh* Oh well, I'll just have to read something else of yours.
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Title: ch 25
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaaaaaayyy!!! Heero saved him!!! Yippee yiyo kiyay!! (Gotta love phonetic spelling!) And in the nick of time too! ^______^ Poor sick Shini. Great description; it made my bones ache just reading it! I especially liked his poor, sick, stringy tail thumping weakly on the ground, setting fire to all around no doubt. So cute! Thanks for another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: LiZzArD [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and you have to add to it. I want to know what happens to Shini. I also think you would have a promising career as an author.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Make Shini better! Poor little deity! And Heero's upset, too. (Can't have that, can we?) Please continue - this really is a good fic.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ch22-24 : I think you should post that story and not be evil as you sugeest and make us poor reviewers suffer while we await for your updates. GaWWWW have i told you I love your vocabulary and boy do I love this story, at the end of ch24 i'm very worried for Shini, it is moving too fast and I fear for him when Heero finally finds him. Beautifully written as always. DAmn it can't he use that red thread around his finger to Find Shini/Duo!!!?? More MoRE plEASE!
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Title: Ch 24
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear oh dear oh *dear*!! *Poor* Shini!!! Please save him soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sini-chan. He'll be okay right? I feel soo sorry for him. Update as soon as possible so I can find out what happens!!
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW~! So great! I am loving your fiction more and more! I hope Shini doesn't get any worse!!!! I'm so glad that Heero is seeming to show more affection, its sweet! Keep up the good work~! I can't wait for the next chapter update~!!!n_n
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 19:12 CST
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Poor Shini. First Heero was being so frigid towards him and now this! Happy Ending, need much. He's too cute to anything really tragic happen to him!
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