| "My Shinigami, My Hamburger" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Title: ch 32-33
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 00:29 CST
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*smiles* 33 was super sweet and Dang it what is dorothy's problem why does she want to cause grief by taking Heero or Duo away from each other? Why is she so damn nosy, wanting to findout who Heero was tied to the first time around, i'm glad too that Gekka-O couldn't tell her that. And I just knew she was a lying wench.
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Title: ch31
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 00:03 CST
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hey! i got some catching up to do, but oh i'm so very happy you updated, as always your descriptions bring their world alive. "Suicide. He was scheduled to slit his wrists in the bathroom at exactly 11:36 this morning. Alone." Thank goodness he made up his mind and his heart that he wouldn't let Shini go and I wonder if that's why Shini's mom was being strangely nice. She must know that Loki is after Heero. Thank you for sharing with us.
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly adore this fic and I do hope you decide to continue it. it's wonderful andu are too :)
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Reviewed By: Falkwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww..the ending was so cute. I'm so happy that they got together in the end an that Heero realised what an ass he was. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
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Reviewed By: practikalmagik [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I eventually managed to finish this! Took me 4 nights but I'm so glad I persevered. I was getting close to welling up when Heero realised what a twat he had been lol. It's so refreshing to read a really original AU premise and I can't wait to read the next arc!
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Reviewed By: Rikita Craftley On: June 20, 2005 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOOOP WHOOOP WHOOOOOP WHOOOP! Oh yeah! Uh huh! You The Man! Uh.... Sort of... ANYWHO! Great FIC!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 06:21 CDT
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Weeee! Heero got Shini back! Oh and about the last chap, I love how Shini stood up to his mother like that. And how Heero finally realized he'd miss the little devil. Precious!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a Sophomore - that kills me. I thoroughly enjoyed this first arc, even though I bitched about all those times I ended up crying. I'll be nice and not mention how heart-wrenching Chapter 28 was; I'm sure you planned it that way... I love how you portrayed their relationship, and even though this arc took place over a short period of time, nothing seemed rushed. I'll miss the "old" Shinigami; I hope his innocent curiosity isn't gone. Beautiful description of the post-Shrinks Shini, though. I can see why Heero went stupid all of a sudden. ;) Yay - chivalry ain't dead! I wish I could give you higher ratings kiddo, because this fic was outstanding. I'm looking forward to the next arc.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: May 24, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Good luck, your fics are awesome, and update as soon as you can! I've thoroughly enjoyed this fic and can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was sweet - how they're both thinking about each other (reluctantly or not). Please keep going and update as soon as possible! I really love this fic and am always excited when I find out the next chapter is out!
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Title: Mythos
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 22:45 CDT
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OK, is it just me, or does anyone else think Pink Floyd's "Mother" would be a great theme song for Iria? O.O I'm glad that Heero is having a tough time forgetting Shini. I hope it keeps gnawing away at him. I even hope whenever a bird shits on his helmet, he's reminded of Shini. (No, I don't know why that would remind him, just that I hope it does.) While I think it's a noble gesture, I'm going to miss the way Shinigami spoke. At least he's showing a little intestinal fortitude...
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama (nsi) On: May 11, 2005 07:42 CDT
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Shini's learning english, Heero's miserable, Shini's mommy says Heero's a jerk. Where does the 1x2 pairing come into full affect? Does Shini start acting more like Duo would and does he ever get back to Hee-chan? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: gw On: May 06, 2005 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i do love the story so please update sooon....
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Title: The Arrogance of Mortals
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 22:24 CDT
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I don't dare say this fic can get any sadder, because I'm afraid you'd take it as a challenge! I was so happy as I started reading the first part of this chapter, then Iria showed up and things... changed. I won't place 100% of the blame on her; after all, Heero did say it more than once, even if he was upset. But oh, what a wretched picture it made when Shini made his presence known. Sweetie, I really can't afford the amount of Kleenex I'm going through just on this fic alone. If anything, I'm ready for some happy tears, yanno? I need a Shini Plushie...
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 23:16 CDT
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ya know if Duo's Mom would have kept her mouth shut and did the responsible and check up on her son instead railing on Heero then Heero would have never said the things he had said. IN fact he told 'her' to get out, twice, he didn't mention anything about shini until the stupid goddess continued her insults and throwing his behaviour toward shini at him. *shakes head* wow so we have quite a wait on the next update... hmmm hurry!
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