| "My Shinigami, My Hamburger" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nis_K [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 23:42 CDT
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I have been following this fic for some time... You truly are an amazing writer. I can't wait for the next chapter! And it has been quite some time since the last... I'm sure it will be worth the wait. Please come back!
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Reviewed By: Firyn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! I really love this story, it's so good, so please update soon! when you do though could you make the font size a bit bigger? It's actually quite hard to read. Just a request, thanks!
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Reviewed By: DawnGoddess87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 04:04 CST
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Oooooh me likey! Although...it has been about 6 months hasn't it...Still! One can hope, and hope I shall! You, my good writer, get an eleven out of ten!
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Reviewed By: Misa1120 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:41 CDT
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Ireally like your fic! It was soooooooo good! really hope you consider writing again
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 14:21 CDT
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I don't think I like the manipulative bitch known as Aphroditie. I really don't. There is also the view that someone should have told her off about the way she was bad mouthing Heero. Really hate her. really really hate her. Anyway, I was hesitant to read your story first, your title kind of put me off. I gave in when I saw how may reviews you were getting, and decided that I would give it a shot. Boyyo, once I started reading it was hard to stop. When your font changed to that tiny one, I got a headache really fast leaning forward in my seat trying to read it. It didn't get any easier but the story was so addictive I couldn't bring myself to stop reading. This coninuation that you have started on now is interesting to say the least. It gets me thinking, though I would have liked it perfectly fine if you had stopped it after they were happy together. It's not really my choice though. I am still iffy if I want to continue reading this story even though I really like it. the fact that Iria is going to be in it makes me hesitant. Did I mention I really hate her? Ubber manipulative bitch face that I think should be taught a lesson actualy, not caring if she is a goddess. ^_^ Those are just my thoughts though. I am sure there are people who disagree or agree with me. It doens't quite matter to me. Thanks for the wonderful story, and I hope to read the next chapter. Maybe. Ja!
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Title: 34
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 00:44 CST
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*big smile* I hope you enjoyed st. patty's day too. Wow...so that's what it is... hmm this is just getting better. And why's it so heard for her to see that it wasn't a mistake that the they were tied. update reallly realllly soon pweasee!
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Title: ch 32-33
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 00:29 CST
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*smiles* 33 was super sweet and Dang it what is dorothy's problem why does she want to cause grief by taking Heero or Duo away from each other? Why is she so damn nosy, wanting to findout who Heero was tied to the first time around, i'm glad too that Gekka-O couldn't tell her that. And I just knew she was a lying wench.
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Title: ch31
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 00:03 CST
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hey! i got some catching up to do, but oh i'm so very happy you updated, as always your descriptions bring their world alive. "Suicide. He was scheduled to slit his wrists in the bathroom at exactly 11:36 this morning. Alone." Thank goodness he made up his mind and his heart that he wouldn't let Shini go and I wonder if that's why Shini's mom was being strangely nice. She must know that Loki is after Heero. Thank you for sharing with us.
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly adore this fic and I do hope you decide to continue it. it's wonderful andu are too :)
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Reviewed By: Falkwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww..the ending was so cute. I'm so happy that they got together in the end an that Heero realised what an ass he was. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
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Reviewed By: practikalmagik [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I eventually managed to finish this! Took me 4 nights but I'm so glad I persevered. I was getting close to welling up when Heero realised what a twat he had been lol. It's so refreshing to read a really original AU premise and I can't wait to read the next arc!
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Reviewed By: Rikita Craftley On: June 20, 2005 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOOOP WHOOOP WHOOOOOP WHOOOP! Oh yeah! Uh huh! You The Man! Uh.... Sort of... ANYWHO! Great FIC!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 06:21 CDT
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Weeee! Heero got Shini back! Oh and about the last chap, I love how Shini stood up to his mother like that. And how Heero finally realized he'd miss the little devil. Precious!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a Sophomore - that kills me. I thoroughly enjoyed this first arc, even though I bitched about all those times I ended up crying. I'll be nice and not mention how heart-wrenching Chapter 28 was; I'm sure you planned it that way... I love how you portrayed their relationship, and even though this arc took place over a short period of time, nothing seemed rushed. I'll miss the "old" Shinigami; I hope his innocent curiosity isn't gone. Beautiful description of the post-Shrinks Shini, though. I can see why Heero went stupid all of a sudden. ;) Yay - chivalry ain't dead! I wish I could give you higher ratings kiddo, because this fic was outstanding. I'm looking forward to the next arc.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: May 24, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Good luck, your fics are awesome, and update as soon as you can! I've thoroughly enjoyed this fic and can't wait for the next chapter!
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