| "Don't let go" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Title: Men...
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's just like Inuyasha and Kagome, to misunderstand each other, and then brood. I was surprised that Inuyasha didn't even try calling her. Man! Talk about sulkin'! Love the chappie! And I can't wait to read more! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 01:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job keep up the good work and yay not a cliffy *not on cliff hangin* wooh! good job i love ur storys it's lke i'm hooked on it! do they have group thripy for somthin like that??? as if ineed more theripy! lol keep up the good work *gives COOKIE* here's a cokie for a good job done! EeeeeHeeeeHeeeeHeeeeHeeeeeHeeee eberybod loves COOKIES and if ur not a COOKIE person then give it to ur editor! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I'm so sry...Like i haven't been on mediaminer for SO LONG because my internet was screwing up when ever i tried to read someting...sry i haven't reviewed eariler...well...uhhh...oh and thx daniy for e-mailing me, thx for clearing up some stuff...uhh...great job on the chapters...I LOVE THEM AND I'LL BE BACK READING SOON!
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy like reading your story I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 16:16 CDT
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awesum story!!!...i dont really like the idea of kagome being really wimpy and crying alot but its yur story...besides a few mistakes and repeaters the story is really good...and yur grammar (blah did i spell that rite?)is really good for a person with english as a second language...anyway i hope yu update soon! (i spell "yu" and "yur" like like that becuz its easier for me on the internet wen i talk to my friends and its a habit) anyway update!!
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Reviewed By: Interested Observer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR STORY ROCKS! I love it! I can't wait for Kag and Inu to make up! FUN! Okie dokie then, I'll review l8ter!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I told you, you had nothing to worry about. Your writing is getting better and you are giving more details. I just hope things work out with Inuyasha and Kagome.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter!Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: Kay C [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 14:47 CDT
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Hi me agin I love it alot thanx for keeping this story alive Ja Ne!!;)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 16:55 CDT
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I'm confused, did Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru have the same mom? And if they did who was the woman they were calling mom at their dad's party?
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 16:02 CDT
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Poor Kagome and Inuyasha..great chapter..update soon.
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Title: Sad...
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, it's too bad that Kagome had to get the wrong impression, but that's how good Inuyasha's communication is, isn't it? You're doing well! You get better and better the more you write, and I agree, you can only write soo much in a sitting. I'm in the process of writing my first fan fic, and I can only write a few pages per chapter in one sitting. Plus, it gets all of us readers wanting more for the next chapter! Looking forward to it! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 01:13 CDT
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Poor Kagome, I guess she doesn't remember him kissing her even though she looked like that?
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