| "The Sweetest Sin" Reviews/Comments [ 181 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 09:20 CDT
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that was a very good chappy!!! i loved it!!! i can not wait for the next udpate!!! it was truelly a great chappy!!! and in the next i want hojo to b in it!! i really want to no what he is doing!!! plz tell me!! so plz update soon!!! much love never forget the love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 00:22 CDT
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lol at first I thought that Naraku had stolen Inuyasha's body, but then when you said it was his reincarnated father i was like "holy shit no way!" lol so well please keep up the spiffy work! I loved the whole fantasy thing it was great. I laughed my ass off. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 15:17 CDT
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this story is soooo interesting!!!!!!!!!! i hope sango and mir. get together soon......that means like in the next chappy!!!!!!!! i hope inuyasha and all them will be ok and i hope inuyasha understands that thing kagome said about kagome so they can be together!!!!!!!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 30, 2004 14:40 CDT
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Damn. Talk about a soap. Well this is going to get good. So Inu Yasha and Kagome are there. Both the ones with Yuka the present tense versions of themselves. And the future tense the ones who lived through the Sengoku Jidai. So if the future ones are there then that means that present tense ones will the battle and finally kill Naraku. So this is a training of sorts. For Yuka and Akira and their group. But also for the present tense Kagome and Inu Yasha. They must fight this battle for some reason their future selves can't interfere. So they got a son? Is that the only one? I would have expected more. Anyways, Love the story. Keep up the excellent work. Btw is Kagome still going to hold Inu to figuring out that he is jealous and afraid to love Kagome before he gets some? lol
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 20:52 CDT
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HAHAHAHA!!! sango's a perv lol.
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 15:02 CDT
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I think I know who the amber eyed guy is. The guy Tokaji...is he the son of Kagome and Inuyasha? This is just a wild guess but for some reason I think he is. And if I'm wrong than I can't wait to find out who he really is. Anyways, I loved the lemon scene in your story and I feel really sad for Akira to get cursed again by that bastard Naraku. It was pretty funny how you made Sango spying on Miroku. Usually Miroku spys on her and it was great to see it the other way around. Well keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 14:22 CDT
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that was a GREAT chappy!!!!!! i wonder when he will tell kagome and inuyasha that he is their son....if i'm right and that is their son!!!!!! i love this story!!!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 13:15 CDT
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i think that through reading ur story i have become a pervert!! @!##@%@!! that was the one thing i did not want to b!!! o well!! just make sure there r shirtless guys and i will b happy!!! long live hot shirtless guys!!! much love never forget the love!!!!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in* On: June 29, 2004 11:25 CDT
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lol That was a cute chapter. The miroku and Sango part was just hilarious. I can't wait to find out what happens next and hope that you keep up the excellent work. This story is superterrific, or SPIFFY! lol Krystal.
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven On: June 29, 2004 02:29 CDT
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the amber eyed spy from the window was the same boy whom got told off by his parents, and his parents are Inuyasha and Kagome themselves, right
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 16:28 CDT
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oooo! I bet it's Inuyasha or one of his kids!!! lol well I can't wait till you update! Please keep up the great work and update asap! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 14:53 CDT
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Hmmmm! I wonder who the amber eyed person is? I hope he is on Inuyasha and Kagome's sid. Anyways, this chapter was good. They ALMOST did it! Which is a great thing in my opinion. I think I have an idea to what stage two is but I'll keep on reading to make sure that I'm right. I hope Kouga will appear soon, so that the real lemon will happen...not like I'm saying your other lemons weren't good or anything because they are. Anyways, I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 09:43 CDT
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another great chappy! can not wait for the next! *cries* i really want kouga!! wwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! o well! i guess i will just have to wait! but can u have guys shirtless! i love hot guys that r shirtless!! that is the best!! shirtless hot guys fightin in mud mahahahahahaha!! plz!! much love!
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Title: one word.........
Reviewed By: KikyoKiller (not signed in) On: June 28, 2004 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Great chap!
Reviewed By: smittin kitin(not logged on) On: June 28, 2004 01:18 CDT
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Wow, this chap was so informative. Wahoo stage 2! So Kag got a power boost huh. Wonder what Inu is gonna get? I'm glad Sess gave some insight on final battle & his relationship w/Inu. Shippo & Kanna! Never saw that comming. Did Sess say he would take the glove to Kag or am I misreading things? I love your writing style! I think it's great that you leave clues as to what else is going on, although my brain is fried & I have no idea who the new guy w/golden eyes is. Hopefully by the next update I will have gotten some much needed sleep & will be able to catch what's going on. Sorry you had such a lousy day! Hope you feel better! Thanks for sharing your wonderful fic! Until next time, Hugs & Kisses Smittin Kittin
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